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Part 58

He heard her anklets and though the was imaging again, but when he heard a thump sound he turned to find her sitting there with her eyes closed

he slowly went near her and touched her shoulder as he sat beside her
she opened her eyes and hugged him

He could feel her heart beating fast, he could feel that she was perspiring, he held her close and she tightened her grip on him.

He cupped her face

M: Geet a bad dream

G: um

M: what was it?

G: Maan, Brij veer ji, he will not leave me

M: he will do no harm

G: you don't know him

M: and you don't know DM

G: pardon

M: sorry Geet, but your veer is behind eh bars

G: what?

M: we had no other option, I am sorry

G: don't be sorry Maan, he deserves it, but on what charges?

M: for honor killing

G: but what about proofs?

M: we have enough

G: but once he will be out he will come again

M: he won't be getting any bail

G: I don't know Maan but I don't feel guilty

M: why should you feel guilt?

G: think about Tai ji, Taya ji, Darjee, Bhabhi what will they be going through

M: Geet

G: Maan am I that selfish that I don't feel any guilt for their sorrow

M: Geet

G: all I can think is that I could have been another victim just like Channi

M: I will not ever happen

G: I know, I hope Guruwinder also would have been there, then Channi would have been safe

M: hopefully

G: Maan, I am a bit worried about Rajji

M: why?

G: she too is now of marriageable age

M: do you want her here? I can always make arrangements

G: no, I just want to be assured that she will be safe

M: I will make is a point to know about it, I will talk to your father about her

G: thank you Maan

M: um, come let me escort you to the Mansion

G: Maan

M: we will talk on way

G: why not here?

M: Geet with you this close I am having a tough time controlling myself

G: controlling

M: yes, Geet I just have this strong urge to devour you

G (blushed)

M: come let's be on move

On way for few moments she was unable to speak anything

M: you were saying something

G: ji

M: bolo

G: Maan, why don't you shift back to KM

M: what?

G: you were staying there before things became complicated

M: yes, but

G: but, look Maan, now Dev is no more and Vicky is no more missing, so why not

M: I can't come

G: because of me

M: no, look Geet, things are not that simple, DM kicked me out and I will not come back untill she asks me to

G: she had asked you so many times

M: did she ever order me to be back as she ordered me to get out

G: Maan this is stupidity

M: this is self respect

G: she is your DM

M: I am her grand son

G: ok if she asks you will come back

M: if she orders

G: ok she will order you

M: you won't ask her to

G: but

M: no Geet, this is between her and me you be out of it

G: ok, but

M: promise me Geet you will not tell her about this conversation and you will not ask her for me to return

G: ok I promise but you also promise that as soon as she orders you to return you will

M: I promise

They reached her room and found Lata sleeping near Angle

G: you asked her to stay back

M: um

G: I will wake her

M: let her sleep, you cover her with the blanket, Nakul knows she will be here tonight

G: ok

M: you too sleep

G: bye

She follows her out of her room

G: good night Maan

M (turns): Geet I want to kiss you good night

G (blushes, dips her head down)

M: ok as you wish, any ways good night (turns to leave)

She holds her arm and tiptoes to kiss him; he was more than happy and cups her face gently strokes her lower lip with her thumb and leans down to seal her petals.

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