CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4

Veer is in piyu's room.he combing her hair .

Veer- piyu, u should have a hair cut .

Piyu - no I won't

Veer- why princess ?

Piyu- I want grow it long just like mom

Veer- how do u know ur mom had long hair

Piyu- chachi told me

Veer- as u wish my princess . now go n sleep my baby

Manoj (veer's bro) was standing at the bedroom's door he told him to meet him in the lawn as he has to tell him something. Veer went outside after tucking piyu in bed

In the garden

Manoj- Remember how u use run around in here n get urself covered with mud

Veer- (with a smile) ya! u used to sneak me in , to protect me from mom's anger

Manoj- so many memories of this place'...

Veer- bro I want to help. But ... .

Manoj- no ! don't blame yourself why u should pay the price of my recklessness

Listen whatever u decide I 'm with u.

And he left leaving veer relentless.

NEXT DAY

In the morning Mr rai called Ms D'souza & said he has found a solution to save ananya from the situation. He told her to come to his office immediately. So did she.


In office she, Mr rai & ajay were sitting. Mr rai explained to her the whole plan .She agreed with him. "so should we visit the singh house", she said. Mr rai said "yes lets go we have to discuss the marriage contract".

They left for Singh mansion.

At singh mansion

In the drawing room Mrs singh & MR GUPTA were waiting for Mr rai. They arrived there .

Servant came in gave them tea . Ms D'souza eyes were checking the mansion she's very happy that her ma'am will henceforth reside here. Mr rai got up to explain the

marriage contract

,"so both parties r agreed 4 the marriage. So here r the clauses as miss ananya is the heir of khurrana industries (i.e 70% shareholder) as her husband mr veer will b the caretaker of her shares n with existing 20% shares which singh family has in khurrana industries. He 'll b the M.D of khurrana industries".


MRS singh was very happy n said " so lets celebrate for the new relations. We shall call the family priest & get a auspicious next week for the engagement. During engagement we shall fix the marriage date".


But Ms D'souza intervened she new ananya didn't have much time in 2 days she was gonna b 20 n she knew the evil trio won't waste any time.


So she said, "no no ma'am why to wait for a week . day after tomorrow is every auspicious day ekadashi so why not get them hitched then only".


MRS SINGH had to agree; she wasn't in position to demand .but she was tense as how make veer agree for this marriage .


While leaving Ms D'souza took veer's photo to show it to ananya.

part-5-below

Edited by pranita1202 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
thanks 4 fast update dear 😊...

so the solution for the problems of ananya & Singh family is marriage...though it looks like business deal, soon it will become the beautiful bond between veer & ananya😳...looking forward to see that...

waiting to know ananya's reaction on seeing photo of her prince charming 😳 & how veer will get agreed to this marriage...i guess the reason will be piyu...he loves her so much😊...i also want to see the nice bonding between piyu & ananya😊...

plz plz update soon...can't wait for their engagement...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
thanks for update n pm
superb update!!
so they r getting into marriage contract
but will veer will agree for this?
n also wht abt anaya?
but knowing ananya's situation he might be agree or for piyu
but will tht evil trio will allow them to do so?
waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Very nice ff dear 😃 Do continue to ud soon plzzz 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
so sweet ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
really waiting hard for ananya's reaction to veer's photo...

piyu is cute...and veer is caring fathr
hope he will able to help ananya against drugs,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

waitin for their first meeting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
THE BANNER IS AWESOME...SUPERB

THANX ANUMEHA
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys as most of u r eager 2 ananya's reaction i m giving a update

PART 5

Nanny (Ms D'souza/ Ms D) slowly open ananya's room door & entered the room without making noise. Ananya as usual was sick n sleeping.

Ms D'souza-get up ananya

Ananya - wat is nanny ?

Ms D'souza - shh! U r stepmom will hear. Listen 2 me I met ur uncle rai 2day

Ananya- I wish he would cum here I too wish to meet him.


Ms D'souza- u'll meet him soon but not in this house. Anu there is guy who wishes to marry You. We went 2 see him today.He has a great family background. He is very Handsome .You wanna she him.(Ms D'souza took veer's pic n showed to anu)


Ananya- This is... (she thought as if she recognized him)


Ms D'souza - ur & his family know eachother for a long time. Don't u remember him

Ananya- Vee ...veer (she recollected his name)

Ms D'souza- yes you met there family once at the club .whats the name I don't remember club re ro..

Ananya -royals club

Ms D'souza - when I told him abt u he felt sorry . He is ready 2 marry u .He said that I saw her when she was 16 . She was pretty n smart. And I m sure she still is . I will marry her n give her all happiness.

Ananya- he really said those words

Ms D'souza - of course he did

Ananya - O my god there is someone in world whose heart beats for me . (she hugged veer's pic n smiled)

Ms D'souza knew she has lied but it is 4 annaya's own good . after four years she saw ananya smiling .


In the office ajay is going through some law books. Mr rai came in.

Mr rai - Ajay. Prepare marriage form .Fill all the details & do all the formality .Just leave the bride's detail empty I'll fill later

Ajay -Yes uncle. (But he was looking tense)

Mr rai- What is the matter my boy

Ajay- Are we doing the right thing, u said that the girl's family are gold diggers. But the family to whom you r entrusting her, they too are interested in her money .So whats the difference


Mr rai - You have not seen the plight of ananya that's why u r saying this n sometime we have select between 2 wrong ways the lesser wrong.


Ajay -Fine uncle as u say . I have arranged a judged he will b at khurana mansion tomorrow evening . But how are we gonna get the bride (ananya) there if u say that her stepmom is that evil how r we gonna take her to singh mansion

Mr rai - I have a plan 4 that n he started to explain it to ajay


Part-6

Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
guys pls do just any improvement if u feel . as i m a novice to this . i know my ff's r not as amazing n descriptive as other ace writer's ff's r but i m trying my best. pls do give u r opinion😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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firstly very sorry for late commenting 😭 & thanks 4 pm 😊...

i am really happy that u have started one more FF on our favourite couple RTMC...it is really getting painfully hard to wait for their show...so these FFs help to make this wait bearable for us...so special thanks for that
...

now about the FF...the story & plot is awesome 😊...both veer & ananya facing problems in their life...they both look so lonely...& ananya...i am feeling bad for her...poor girl...suffering so much for 2 years...& it looks like veer has also some painful past...but i am sure together they both will find the happiness & peace in their life 😊...

the plan of marriage is made to solve the problems of all but veer has not agreed yet...but i guess he will give in thinking of piyu & his family...
& ananya is so happy knowing there is someone in the world who cares for her...she is craving for love & care...i hope she gets that which she truly deserves after so much pain...but nanny has lied to her about veer's feelings...now i am scared that ananya will get hurt if he behaves somewhat carelessly towards her...

thanks 4 fast updates...keep it up...& u have very good writing skills...i love ur FF...so don't be worried
& keep giving us nice updates ...eagerly waiting for their marriage...plz update soon...
Edited by sanyogitaprc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
yyyooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

superfast ud,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,u r too cute,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i love very story related to rtmc,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i love dis ud,,,,,,,,,,,,too good

ananya's reaction was awesome,,,,,,,,,lovely

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