CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ pranita :
read your updates, they were really nice👏, hope ananya gets all the love, care & attention she deserves after her marriage & veer takes good care of her, and the marriage becomes a sucessful one despite the adverse situations in which it is being conducted😃. but before all this, please get back nanny !!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
nice and fast update dear...😃
so singh family is not happy with anu's looks...she suffered for 2 yrs...give her some time...and see what a beauty she will become...😃
and anu is blushing mentally seeing veer☺️...hmm...same eyes,sharp looks😍so she had been nurishing a soft corner for him since she met him 2 yrs ago😳...don't worry my princess oneday you will get your prine charming😊
and ria & gia(wannabes😆)...you should not talk about your teenager chachi's look like that😆...soon your chachi's hairstyle will change and you will love it for sure😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
cool n amazing update

sry 4 replying late
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
cool update

n sry 4 da late reply
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 8

Meanwhile nanny was caught by the stepmother when she was taking anu's mom necklace from her room.

Sm- wat r u doing? Are u stealing my jewellery

Nanny- no madam i came to close the window it was open.

S M got conspicuous about her

In veer's room

Mom- veer r you alright? So u won't come down. If I knew she was in such a bad state.I would have never accepted the offer .But its not too late u can still backout

Veer - Are u serious?

Mom - yes ofcourse.

Veer - Wat abt our situation

Mom-What can we do. Its our destiny. We will send the poor girl back and announce our downfall

Veer- So I would be the bad guy who gave up to support his family & help the poor girl.

I got the point mom.

Downstairs

Ananya is sitting chair beside her there is another chair and across the table judge is sitting. Everyone else is present accept veer n his mom and piyu.Excitedly piyu comes running in the drawing room and sees ananya (she doesn't seem happy)

Piyu- Are u gonna marry my dad?

Ananya-dad?

Manoj- this is my niece . veer's daughter

Mr rai- Anu don't u remember I told abt her to u in the car

Ananya- O so u r piyu (with a smile)

Piyu-Why r u not wearing a proper dress(shaadi ka joda)

Why u r not wearing any jewellery (seema took piyu away)

Ananya -O o I m not (she realizes that its not like a normal wedding n the gets worried)

Where is veer?

Mr rai- I was gonna ask the same question

Veer - I m here (he comes in n sits beside ananya and ananya smiles).

Mrs singh - lets do the engagement ceremony .

Two ring were placed on the table .veer picked the ring put in ananya's finger . Mr rai gave ananya the ring she placed it into veer's finger with her weak hand but she managed to slid it only half way . Veer took his hand away from her n slid it in the finger completely.

Jugde- So all u rituals are done .Lets sign the marriage papers

Suddenly piyu got of her place

PIYU-Dad I don't want you to get married to her

Veer-piyu we have talked abt this ?

Piyu -Yes but I changed my mind

Veer-But why beta?

Piyu-coz she is so clumsy (n she ran and sat on the sofa)

Veer got up to convince her.But she didn't wanna talk to him and went to her room .

Seeing all this ananya got upset. Suddenly head started paining & she was feeling giddy. She placed her head on the table everyone rushed towards her

Ajay- pls someone get the water.

(he sprinkled some water she was half consious)

Judge- how is she supposed to sign the papers in such condition

Mrs singh - she will b fine let her rest sometime

Mr rai- no , the judge is right we can't make her sign in half consciousness.

Mrs singh - but..

Veer- mom Mr rai is right. But I have to say that after seeing today's scenario if she wishes to change her mind & doesn't wish to marry me

Ananya- no I want

Mr rai- We can discuss this later anu needs rest. Ajay take her to the car.

(anu gets up with ajay's support while leaving)

Ananya- veer I'm sorry to disappoint u

Veer- no miss I m the one who should apologize for disappointing u.

(and they left)

Mr rai- so for now the marriage is delayed

Judge -so now I should leave.

Mrs singh got tensed.

Part-9

Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
oh no😭...what is this dear😲...that was too shocking...

they got engaged but piyu didn't want veer to get married to ananya seeing her condition & they r apologizing to each other😭...no no no...

now anu's SM is suspicious...& marriage is postponed😭...so does that mean anu will go back in that prison?...& in 2 days she is going to be 18...so no marriage before that?...but then she will fall prey to the plan of that evil trio...no...

well now this time i really want super fast update as u have created the too much suspense by this twist in story...plz plz plz update soon...
Edited by ananyashera - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
hi...i am a silent reader of your ff...😊
i hv started reading it...since the 2 part...
that was nice...
i liked the storyline...n yes it's on my fav couple...so i m excited...😊
poor anu...n nanny is cought by sm...to bad...😭
i liked veer n piyu...😊
update soon...
plz add me to your pm list...😊
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...great updates aur woh bhi itni jaldi jaldi..! 😃 loved evrypart... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part dear
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
shock...shock...shock...

i really want veer to understand her...n plz make her look beautiful atleast once,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
really feel pity 4 ma princess ananya's condt.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,she is done wrong,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

ud soon...loved d twist,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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