CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

amazing part..

waiting to see wats gonna happen now..

im guessing they asking for veer to get married to anu..

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

thanx for quick update n pm
love this part
mr. rai will surely find way to save charu
its so nice of mr. gupta to help mr. rai as frnd
and what is their plan?
mrs. singh also agreed abt it
but not veer?
and wht role ajay going to play?
egar for story proceed
waiting for next update

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Nice character sketch and concept.

Loved the update.

thanx for PM.

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

🤗lovly ud...

i loved it ...

veer ready to work as coolie shows dat he is very much commited,,,,,,,,,,,,,

waitin for their first meeting,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

ud soon...

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piuli

@prahelika

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

hi pranita...

thnx for another RT-MC FF🥳it makes our never-ending a bit easy...😊

so our cinderella ananya is gonna be rescued😃but how is this related to our prince charming veer...🤔...wait is it about veer-anu marriage??😲

and veer finds it worse than working as coolie indeed😆he loves his daughter way too much😳...

pranita...one confusion here😕 if piyu is 5 and veer is 23 does that mean he fathered his daughter at the age of 18😕...it loosely reminds me of that nightmare called tere liye...

except this part i love this ff...😊

waiting for the next update...😊thnx 4 the pm dear...

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pranita1202

@pranita1202

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: prahelika
hi pranita...
thnx for another RT-MC FF🥳it makes our never-ending a bit easy...😊
so our cinderella ananya is gonna be rescued😃but how is this related to our prince charming veer...🤔...wait is it about veer-anu marriage??😲
and veer finds it worse than working as coolie indeed😆he loves his daughter way too much😳...
pranita...one confusion here😕 if piyu is 5 and veer is 23 does that mean he fathered his daughter at the age of 18😕...it loosely reminds me of that nightmare called tere liye...
except this part i love this ff...😊
waiting for the next update...😊thnx 4 the pm dear...

guys wait n watch.

n thanks 4 the comments it really means a lot 2 me

Edited by pranita1202 - 14 years ago