kriyaansh & Swaron luv cnfesion(SS) *ended* - Page 31

Created

Last reply

Replies

384

Views

126.7k

Users

92

Likes

927

Frequent Posters

harshdb thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
PART 9:

nice part. thanks for the pm. continue soon.
love_arsha thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

awsome loved it so so much❤️❤️
both couples r so romantic❤️
nd sharon nd kriya frndship is awsome😃
nd group hug awsome😃
ray pull kriya in fireescape nd kriya said aap
nd ray said mere alawa kon ho skta hai😉
awsome ...
nd lovely precap❤️
..nams.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
i will updt today! not decided the tym since 2mrw my computer lab xamz r thr! but dont worry this is my last updt along wid big bang of surprise!!!! so jus making ready wid my surprise!!! so soon as itz done il post the next part! nd it will be posted 2day! fr sure!!! itzz LAMBAAA wala! as i wan2 fnsh this SS on part 10! so :P plzz be patient nd im sorry fr d delay!
Edited by nams_love_d3 - 13 years ago
..nams.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
2 tell the truth i myself dint like wat i jus wrote but cud nt think bettr!
PART 10 has 2 chapters- chapter 1 nd chapter 2.. 😃im updtng chap 1 now nd chap 2 will b updted at 9pm tonite IST..😊 hope u like this is PART 10 is the last part of dis SS omg the journey till now wid more than 40 pages was simply awsum awsum! your lovely coments r too sweet nd spportive fr me! they gimme enrgy nd boost 2 write! yes im done wid my surprise😉 il reveal it in chapter 2! but my surprise may b less than wat u expected or it may b awsum 4 u! or u may b disppointed or may b super happi!😃 it will all show wen i read ur coments! 😆soo this is the last part plzz plz hit like nd do coment on whole SS wich i hv written!😊 😃next part is tooo lamba!😳 ⭐️soo hope 2 c lamba lamba coments!😃 and im thank full 2 all who hv been connected 2 this SS nd kept supporting me thruout frm d bottom of my heart🤗


PART 10:

CHAPTER 1

Count down begins fr valentine nite 2 cum 10 days ahead!

Daily practice jokes masti giggle fun dance ROMANCE this is how 8 days passed by..

9th day! Rey thout he wil take his baatcutter for dinner..

Kriyaansh hung up in the fire escape..

Kria was expecting rey wud call her for a date so she was blushing hardly!

Rey luked @ her nd then thout- ummm date? Late nite! Umm nah! Itz soo cmon! I shud do sumthn else! But kya??? Aur isse b meine bula liya hai! kya kahoonga ab!!! Argh sorry baatcutter I shud make somethn spl fr u this valentines day! Ya ryt! I think I knw wt 2 do!

Kria: "rey aap umm matlab tumne muje yahan kuch kaam tha??"

Rey coming closer to her

Rey: "tumse baat krne ke liye ab kya appointment book krni padegi!"

Kria: "array meine aisa kab kaha! Accha bolo kya baat krni hai!"

Rey: "wo tum tum aaj bahut cute lag rhi ho!"

Blush!

Kria: "thnkx! Ah yeh batane ke liye tumne muje yahan bulaya?"

Rey: "haan! Toh kya agar sabke saamne complimnt deta toh.. . ."

Kria: "nhi abi nhi abi hum kisi ko kuch nhi batyenge!!"

Rey: "ok baba fyn!! Listen! Wo kal ki event ke liye kuch discuss krna tha shall we??"

Kria: "discuss!!! (in mind- rey itna borring kabse hogaya! Kal valentinesday hai! humari relationship ke baad ki first valentines day! Argh buddu rey!)"

They discuss nd move off! Kria super upset! Angry

Vicky asks neha fr a date! Neha agrees as her parents r nt in town

Sh: "swayam.. (while moving out to parking lot)"

Sw: "haan!"

Sh: "wo tumei kuch poochna tha?"

Sw: "muje ?? nhi toh? Kyun tumei kuch kehna tha?"

Sh: "ah? Kuch nhi poochna hai tumei?"

Sw: "no Sharon! Wait hav I forgotten sumthn! Umm umm nhi jo kuch b poochna tha wo rehersal waqt hi poochliya tha!"

Sh: "FYN!!!"

Angry moves off

Rey: "kria suno (running behind her) come lemme drop u!"

Kria: "NO THANKS!!!! Gar paas mei hi hai mei khud chali jaaongi! Tumei takleef lene ki koi zaroorat nhi hai!"

Rey: "kria!"

Kria: "BYE"

She too moves off!

Rey nd swayam look @ each othr

Kria walks off while Sharon says her that she will drop her home!

Both go together! Both give boys the ANGRY LUK nd move

Rey nd swayam laugh

Sw: "tune b usse date ke liye nhi poocha na!!"

Rey nodes laughingly!

Rey: "sometyms unpredictable is much romantic!!"

Sw: "ya ryt! Nd it works on gals reverse phsychology!"

Rey: "hahahaha correct! Hey G2G kuch plans krna hai! bye dude cya!"

Sw: "bye!"

They move off

Nite tym around 10 pm..

Rinni still in clg .. she was practicing late! Nd she dint realise tym! Simmi nd Sharon dint inform her while they wer leaving!

Rinni hears some noise from canteen nd goes thr

She thinks some theif had come

Nd sees amar she blush

Amar: "Tum???"

Rinni: "tum??"

Amar nd rinni: "waqt ka pata hi nhi chala!"

Thn they laugh nd sit infront of each othr lost in each others thouts..

Amar: "linni kal tum meli date banogi ???"

Rinni: "date? Me really?"

Amar: "I luv u! plzz"

Rinni: "sure!!! Agar sabko pata chala ki v r in relationship toh!"

Amar: "usmei tya hai sach boldenge!!"

Rinni: "ahw amar tum itni sweet kyun ho??"

Nd they spend some tym wid LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA..

Kria: "iss rey k oho kya gaya! Bade casinova bake firthe itna b pata nhi hai ki 12 mei unke saat celeb krna chahthi hoon! Ah!!!"

Kria room lites wer on smriti comes running towards her

Sm: "kria raat bahut hoagyi so jaao! Abi!"

Kria: "mom muje kuch notes likna hai uske baa.."

Sm: "nhi abi jaao! Bahut dino se dek rhi hoon aaj kal raat bar jaagthi ho! Go to sleep!!"

Kria: "ok mom!!!!!"

Kria sleeps!

Sharon: "gosh yeh swayam b na!! argh kyun nhi samaj rha hai I wanna spend tym wid him!"

Just then her servant comes inside

Sh: "wats it!?? kaha na don't disturb me!!"

Servant: "mam aapke ek parcel aya hai!"

Sh: "parcel??"

She turns (similar kind of gift wat swayam used 2 giv secret admirer tyms!)

She takes nd sees a BEAUTIFUL RED GOWN . .

Sh: "woow!!!! Awsum (nd reads the letter)"

this is for a gal for whom my heart beats. .

valentine nite.. lets give our luv a chance 2 celebrate..

plz be my date tonite. .

she changes nd goes down nd sees a red ferari ..

climbs nd it will taker her to the restaurant..

swayam was dressed in black..

he comes down takes her hand nd move to the top floor.. a open place..

chaandni raat' red nd white hearted balloons everywer' romantic mausam.. moonlit sky..

swayam: "Sharon plz have ur seat"

sh: "tumne yeh sab"

sw: "sirf tumare liye!"

they spend some romantic moments..

kria was asleep..

rey climbed thru pipe line..

it was 10 mins to 12!

Vicky nd neha wer in a sea side.. walking

Vicky: "umm neha chale raat bahut hogayi!"

Neha: "haan chalo! Vikcy neha enjoyed a lot! Thnk u!"

Vicky: "anythn 4 u baby!"

Neha nd vicky hug..

Vicky: "chalo! Jaldi.."

Neha: "itna jaldi jaldi kyun kr rhe ho??"

Vicky was taking neha to place near the empty street..

Neha: "vicky hum yahan kyun aye?"

Vikcy: "ssshhh! Thodi der ruko!!"

Simmi nd nil wer in a club.. simmi pulls nil out nd they walk on the streets!

Nil still worried wat he shud say or no! agar gussa hogayi toh!

Simmi was tired of waiting that he may propose her!!!!

Both wer TALLI

Vishaka had come 2 bharat's garage to help him out..

1min fr 12.. kria slowly opened her blanket nd strtd praying

Kria- bagwaanji plz plzzz valentines day bahut spl hai iss saal plzz meri first wish wahi kare!! Plzzz usse meri saamne laado plzz! I want 2 c him first on this day! Plzz universe ji!! She was closing her eyes! Rey ws mesmerized at this!

@12am

Kriyaansh: rey held a heart shaped deep red candle infront of her nd she slowly opened her eyes

She was surprised @ his visit!

She cud believ is true or jus a dream

Rey: happie valentines day baatcutter..

Kria: rey?? Tum! Hugs him tight

Rey keeps the candle aside..

Kria: I cnt belive this!

She comes out of the bed..

Rey kisses her cheeks.. again hugs her nd says HAPPY VALENTINES DAY ours very first valentines day as couples!!!

Kria hugs him tight!! " OMG thnk u!!!"

Rey wispers- first wish first kiss meine hi kia hai! ab toh apne universeji se khush hona?"

Kria: "rey.."

She luks othr side blushing..

Frm behind rey usse a ek beautiful heart pendent chain pehnaata hai ..

Rey- tis is fr love of my life!

Kria- woow thnkxx rey is precious fr me!!

Rey was luking @ her eyes..

Kria kissed on his cheeks nd whispered- meri life mei akar meri life itna special banana ke liye thnkx! Luv u!

Kria: accha ab tum jao!

Rey: huh??

Kria: mom ne dek liya toh

Rey: nhi dekegi trust me!

Rey nd kria hug nd chat sitting in her fr some tym..

SWARON

Swayam bends on his knees..

Sw: will u be my valentine forver???

Sharon soo pleased.. she said yes.. and they kissed each other..

VIHA

Sharp @ 12am

Vicky showed neha up d sky..

Thru crackers there was writer- H A P P P Y V A L E N T I N E S D A Y M Y D E E W A A N I

Neha was surprised she was sooo happie..

They hugged each other..

NIMMI

Simmi lost all her patience and aksed

Simmi: nilesh I think im in luv wid! Nd nd u shud luv me coz u don't hav a choice!

Listening at this nil became mad! He strtd running here nd thr!

Simmi thout he dint love her she strtd crying! But nil was actually rejoicing!

He saw her crying came upto her

Nil: baby plzz don't cry suno meri baat u knw wt I luv u too!!!

Simmi: wat?? really? (blushing)

Nil: yes baby!

They hug nd each othr nd dance..

RIMAR

Amar nd rinni wer walking towards rinni's home

He saw d tym..

He stopped bent in knees lend her rose nd said

I LOVE U RINNI!

Rinni: "ahw I luv u too! Hey tumne muje rinni kaha??"

Amar: haan tabi tabi ho jata hai!

They both blush nd they hug fr d first tym!

BHARKA

Vishaka was abt to leave 2 her house bharat called out

Bharat: vishaka wo wo mei tumse kuch kehna chahtha hoon!

Vish: I think I knw wt u wanna ask!

Bharat: kya?

Vish: yahi na ki mei tumari date banoongi?

Bharat: haan wo haan tum

Vish: ofcourz yaar! Tumare alava im nt confortable wid any othr guy!

She leaves bharat again calls her name

Bharat: vishaka I I I LOVE U!

Vish: wat????????

Bharat: I love u! mei tumse pyaar krtha hoon!!! Ab muje koi aur bhasha nhi ata!

Vishaka smiles bharat shock!

Vishaka: dude finally u said it!! yaar it was so sure ki tum muje propose kroge ! I mean itz valentines day! Aur tumne muje yahan help krne ke liye bulaya! I was sure ki tum yeh kahoge!

Bharat: fir b tum ayi ??

Vishaka: haan coz I think I m also falling fr u! gosh I cnt belive it! matlab mei kisi se pyaar! Anywzz v r a couple now! Nd tumare alava kisi ke mei adjust b nhi kr skti u knw me well so do i! I think v cn b a gud couple!

Bharat wants 2 hug her but hesitates

Vishaka comes closer nd hugs him! He feels good so does vishaka!

Itz not all fr today aaj raat fir se updt karoongi soo il b bac wid a bang!



PRECAP:

FACE OFF

VALENTINE PRINCE & PRINCESS

HAPPY ENDINGS

Nd not 2 forgot my surprise 😃 so CHAPTER 2 of PART 10 will b posted at nite around 9pm acc to IST!😉


thr was some probs on PMS 2day so im sorry if u dint get my PM! fr CHAPT 2 i will surely send u d PMs! nd suppose any1 got more than one pm thn i really ask ur pardon! well this was all my fault i hv 2 attend a funct 2mrw xam nd i was updtng evrythn in hurry! so had to split up the PART! im really sorry again! but next updt nd surprise! umm all D3 fans Gear up! it will b somethn interstng!

Edited by nams_love_d3 - 13 years ago
Parvathi12 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
dude...y dunt u just take a knife n stab me to death...itne cute update...i am dead...
..nams.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaRonluver666

dude...y dunt u just take a knife n stab me to death...itne cute update...i am dead...


was it really tat cute?? well thnkxx dude!! first one 2 coment! hehehe thnkx thnkx soo much 😃
dazzlerfan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏👏AWESOME !!!👍🏼 i just loved it especialy the kriyaansh parts!!
well done again!!
Jade_Precious thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
wwwooowww 😛 😛

u knw ur all d parts r super fab
i luv dem all ❤️
dey r awesome
n its nt disappointing at all 4 me 😊
moon_cupcake thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
u r going to kill me wid ur updates...ab tak to half dead hoon but i guess chapter 2 ka suprise padhne ke baad puri tarah se dead ho jaungi...dude it was awesome n mindblowing 👏👏...cant wait for the suprise...
-Neethu- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Oh... That was a very cute update. Rey and swayam r so sweet. I wish mujeh bhi aise koi romantic BF mil jaye. Waiting for the next part and thanks for the pm.

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

छलावा (Chhalawa) ~ A Kriyaansh Three-Shot छलावा (Chhalawa) ~ A Kriyaansh Three-Shot

Book cover by @ExoticDisaster Thanks a lot for this brilliant book cover Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @SarafWasima in Submit Writing...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Mystic_Muse

11 years ago

~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed'

Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".