[FICTION EPISODE UPDATE] June 21

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi,

Just thinking of starting a daily fiction update based on current day live update, let me know if you dont like it., I will stop :-). So after today's June 20 episode. here goes my fiction on next episode.

(Fic) June 21

Pia is now in the guest room / outhouse with Rano. Bani is back to her original self where she stays in her limits with mr.Walia as he told her his feelings/regret.

mr.Walia is getting ready to work and calls out for Bani. Bani is going to his room when she stops at the door. Pia is inside with Jai. She is shocked. Pia is telling Jai how much she regrets hurting his feelings and how she was misguided by Pushkar. jai is listening to her and is about to say something when he sees Bani at the door. He asks 'bani tum?' bani says he called for her, did he need something? Jai says he was looking for his pen and he didnt find it in his usual place. Before Bani can answer, Pia says, why does he bother di so much for petty things and she could look it up for him. Jai says, thanks but bani takes care of his things. pia is shocked and walks out lookin at bani. bani is sad and she just starts to leave. jai calls her in and asks her what the matter is. bani says kuch nahi and leaves with her eyes filled up with tears. she runs to the puja room and cries her heart out. she questions herself what if jai wants to get back with pia now. is that possible? and the thought brings pain to her.

as she is coming out of the puja room, ranveer meets her and taunts her that now the 3 sisters are back in the mansion and his mom is still out. is this what bani had planned that all of them will live off walia treasure. bani is hurt by the comment and just leaves from there. she goes to jai and says 'mr walia...', just turns and asks her if she wants to say something. bani says yes, its about jig aunty. she tells him that jig is upset with him and he needs to bring her home as its her kids wedding in a few days and without their mom, they will feel very bad. jai agrees and tells her he will bring her home today. bani thanks him and starts to leave. jai stops her and says, i want to say sorry again for what happened and leaves from there.bani is in tears again.

roshni comes in and taunts bani saying now her sister is here. jai loved roshni and pia and never bani, and how shameless can she be to be still here. bani feels very hurt and the last words keep ringing in her ears about jai never loving her. roshni leaves and bani breaks down.

jai is getting down the stairs when pia meets him. she is wearing skirt and sleeveless blouse. jai just looks at her and leaves. on his way to work, jai has flashes of pia before him. he remembers her saying sorry to him. jai is in his office when aditya meets him. they go to his room. aditya asks how jai is doing since pia has come. jai doesnt answer. aditya asks if jai is ok with pia being here. jai tells him that pia apologized to him. aditya asks if jai forgives pia? jai doesnt answer. aditya's expression changes to a concerned and shocked one and asks jai, again 'jai does that mean u mean forgive her'...and do you still have feelings for her?' jai does not answer. aditya tells him that he can only say certain things to him and he has control on his feelings. he tells him that whatever action he takes from on, it will effect not only him and pia, but bani also. at the mention of bani's name, jai looks very concerned and worried and he just gets up and walks away. aditya is concerned.

at home, bani is feeling very dull and she is not interested in anything. maasi notices this and asks her if she is ok. bani says she is fine. and goes upstairs. she sits on her bed and is pondering over what happened and pia returning and roshni's comments....jai walks in and he sees bani. they both stare at each other...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 Bani must kill Pia if she need help i will help her😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rano 22

😆 😆 😆 Bani must kill Pia if she need help i will help her😆

😆 I'm alos with you just let me know the time cause I need to take days off from job to come to india😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: dostokedost

😆 I'm alos with you just let me know the time cause I need to take days off from job to come to india😆

lolzzz what about next week 26 june i will meet u ok so see u soon be ready to kill Pia😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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kl plz continue...urs sounds better than wats seems like gonna happen!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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woooow .. gr8 yaar .. plz continue now , dont wait for the next episode .. let this be a fan fic ... its lovely and realistic ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg plzzzzzzzzzz contiue soon ur fanfic is jus as gud as the orginal story goin on right now! great job!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg plzzzzzzzzzz contiue soon ur fanfic is jus as gud as the orginal story goin on right now! great job! n i will help in killin pia! i am avaliable! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow gr8 fanfic yaar.....

but trust me bani shud get rid of pia and roshni
and swamyji shud marry either pia or raashi
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wonderful ff. please continue 😛

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