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Posted: 13 years ago
šŸ‘ awesome update dear...i was badly missing PriNi for 2 days 😭...but this beautiful update compensated for that 😊...

so now nandini is also feeling pull towards prithvi...good...& prithvi totally in the mood of flirting...loved these PriNi scenes...prithvi romantic 😳 & nandini getting irritated šŸ˜†...

though nandini has lost memory her love for prithvi is too strong to forget...so she is getting attracted towards him...she accepted him as husband & she also trusts him...

let's see how renuka will behave with nandini...as she wanted esha to become her DIL...i hope she won't support esha to create problems between PriNi😔 ...but i feel his dad will support PriNi 😊...

& nandini is getting flashes of past...don't know how will she react when she will remember everything šŸ˜•...but why that stupid phone rang at this time 😔...

eagerly waiting for next part...plz update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
after two days finally u updated...thanx...😊
awesome update...šŸ‘
nandani got past flashes...😲what will happen when she will got her memory back...how will she react on it...when she got to know...that what happen with her...??...šŸ˜•
well prithvi's father had accepted her but now waiting to see renuka n esha's behavior towards her...šŸ˜•
n the luv scene...what can i say...
n nandani is attracted towards prithvi...well how can any one stay away with his/her luv...😳
;;...he moved a little closer to kiss her ...😳suddenly Prithvi's phone started ringing...😲''what a timming...what a timming...😔
i m feeling to throw that mob. in some lake or river n the caller too...idiot...wrong timming...😔
well waiting to see that who is the hurdel...between the romance of the two luv bird's...šŸ˜†
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks 4 uupdating happy to see u after 2 days missed u lot and updates s well hoipe u r updating tonight too:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey dhanvi ... i m your new fan fic fan..."TUM MERE HO!!!!!!!" haiii ...i jst love it...its a perfect title...

i read till page 6 of your fan fic and den reading this part...

and its like a shock ...where nandini is abt to get married to sum Abhishek named guy and d family as a hole have given nandini 1 year for her studies...

here wen i read this part where PRITHVI IS MARRIED TO NANDINI...and both r now husband and wife...and prithvi is so frank...i AM ALREADY falling for him...

bt i here i have a request... though i havent read the hole fan fic.. bt jst ... isme tumne prithvi ko start mai jaisey dikhaya hai na waisey he dikhaooo aagey... maast hai... bhauttt maza aata haiii yaarrr...

but i felt as if der is some distance btw them...and i don't like it...and your fan fic reminds me of prithvi fanfic of shruja...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 35


Nandini "your phone's ringing" she whispered

Prithvi gazing at Nandini "let it ring"

Nandini smiled as she looked at Prithvi who looked completely lost...their eyes were meeting each other...

Nandini looked at his handsome features, his strong arms enveloping her as if they are protecting her from the world...she seemed to lost herself in his attractive spellbound eyes...

Nandini "i know I don't remember anything but...i feel you must be very close to me...it seems my whole world surrounds you...Prithvi was it true?"

Prithvi "hmmm and came closer to kiss her"

Nandini thought something "can I see our wedding photograph please?"

Prithvi "suddenly...we can talk about this tomorrow morning"

Nandini "no, I want to see my wedding pic"

Prithvi looked around "well...because we married secretly, we don't have any pic"

Nandini "what???? secretly!!!!...how?? please tell me"

Prithvi "Nandini, it seems you are tired now, I think we should sleep now and will talk tomorrow morning"

Nandini "no...no you have to tell me right now" and moved his hand away angrily, she turned her face to the other side of the bed.

Prithvi "alright...listen"

Nandini excitedly turned back to him "yes tell me, from the beginning"


Prithvi "we were in love, and married secretly in a temple, well it was just you and me...that's the whole story"

Nandini "what??? is this a story?? I thought our story must be interesting"

Prithvi "ok now please sleep...it seems you missed your medicine...i thought it makes you sleep quickly"

Nandini "oh yes, I forgot..."

Prithvi "Nandini how could you forget your medicine, I told you its important, you don't have to miss it anyway...now wait I will get for you"


Prithvi gave her the medicine...he saw her sleeping and slept on the other side of the bed...there was still some distance between them.


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Next day


The door bell kept on ringing...

Kamla opened the door...

Esha stared at her "how long do you take to open the door???"

Kamla "sorry madam, I was in the kitchen"

Esha "forget it...where's Prithvi??"

Kamla "Prithvi Sir is upstairs in his room"

Esha walked towards Prithvi's room and knocked his door...

Prithvi heard the noise "who is it??"

Esha "its me Esha"

Prithvi surprisingly "wait outside"

he rubbed his eyes and saw Nandini lying next to him with her head on his arm...he smiled and comfortably lifted his arm and placed a pillow under her head...he got up and went to freshen up.


After few minutes he came downstairs where Esha was waiting for him


Prithvi "how come you are here??"

Esha "yesterday I called you but you didn't pick up my phone, i came to meet you, Renuka aunty is worried for you...and she told me you got married??"

Prithvi "so you are concerned about Renuka aunty or is it something else??"

Esha "i want to know myself as well"

Prithvi "well in that case, I can only say yes I am married...anything else?"

Esha "you never told me before and suddenly out of blue you got married??...Prithvi stop fooling everyone"

Prithvi "stop interfering Esha, and don't try to mess with me..." he said annoyingly.

Esha got tensed "you never spoke to me like this before...fine, I was just concerned so I asked"

Prithvi didn't look at her...he was simply annoyed at her behavior.

Esha thought she shouldn't make him more angry "ok now leave whatever I said. I am sorry...please Prithvi"

Prithvi "i don't like when people interfere in my personal life...next time remember that" he said angrily...

Esha "ok...ok...now please cool it..."

Esha was thinking while Prithvi was reading the newspaper "Prithvi, so can I meet your wife??"

Prithvi "yes, but she's sleeping right now"

Esha "sleeping!!! until now?"

Prithvi "yes she's on medication, it makes her sleep more than usual"

Esha "oh...what is the matter with her?"

Prithvi "Esha I hate when anyone asks me all those questions...i am not in the mood to answer right now"

Esha kept quiet and looked at him, then waited "ok at least tell me what's her name ?"

Prithvi "Nandini"

Esha "nice name...i think I heard this name before" she started thinking...

Prithvi seemed least bothered,


After some time Angad and Richa entered...


Angad "hi Prithvi...what's up"

Prithvi "hi Angad, I got your email, I was waiting for you."

Angad "so what do you say??"

Prithvi "well the plan is really good, I will invest in your project"

Angad "thanks Prithvi"

Prithvi "so when are you implementing?"

Angad "Richa and I will fly next week to Chicago, so when will you come?"

Prithvi "i have something important to finish here, may be next month"

Esha interrupted "what is this plan about??"

Richa "Angad is opening his own company in Chicago"

Angad "yes, and Prithvi is investing"

Esha "i am not interested in any business conversation anyway..." looked bored

Richa "Prithvi, where's Nandini??"

Prithvi "she's sleeping...Angad I have one more plan" and asked Angad to share his laptop...both were working...Esha got bored and called Renuka "hello Aunty, I have just reached an hour ago"

Renuka "did you see the girl?"

Esha went outside to talk "no Aunty, she's sleeping...Prithvi told me she's on medication"

Renuka "really???" shocked

Esha "yes Aunty, I think she has some serious problem...i will let you know once I meet her"

Renuka "ok beta...i am so worried for Prithvi, how can he stay with a ill wife."

Esha "Aunty I think Prithvi is lying, he has not married her"

Renuka "how do you know??"

Esha "ok I will find out about this very soon"


_____**********


After some time


Angad "we need this file...do you have it now??"

Prithvi "wait I will get it, its upstairs"


Prithvi went to get the file, as he opened the door he saw Nandini still sleeping cosily, he came towards her, her lovely hair kissed her cheeks, he carefully pushed her hair and gazed at her beauty...he came closer to kiss her, then stopped...he thought something and moved to pick up his file...he smiled and left the room.


Richa was talking to Esha who seemed totally disinterested...

Esha "well I have kept a small party tomorrow, please do come"

Richa "party?? is there something special?"

Esha "well Prithvi got married and didn't gave any party...so I thought I can do this for my friend"

Esha looked at Angad...

Prithvi "very good idea" while coming downstairs "wow Esha, I never thought of this brilliant idea...you are such a nice friend"

Esha was annoyed but didn't show on her face...


After some time


She saw a beautiful girl coming downstairs...Esha stared at her...

"so you are Nandini ?...i think we have met before" Esha said raising her eyebrows.

"yes I am Nandini...sorry I didn't recognize you" Nandini said...

Esha "well I am Prithvi's friend Esha"

Nandini "nice to meet you"

Prithvi "its never nice to meet her" smirkingly smiled at her


Esha annoyingly stared at Prithvi...then turned to Nandini again "i was telling Richa and Angad, that I have kept a party for you Nandini"

Nandini "for me?? but why??"

Esha "cause you are Prithvi's wife...i mean Nandini Prithvi Singh" paused for a minute "so you are lucky girl whose stolen away Prithvi from so many girls who were dying for him"

Nandini didn't liked the way Esha was talking "thanks for elaborating Esha, we will come to your party"

Esha "i will wait for you"

she walked out...

Prithvi "thank God she has left"

Angad "yes...she irritates so much"

Prithvi indirectly thanked Richa for buying clothes for Nandini.

Richa helped Nandini with breakfast...


______***********


Late night


Prithvi was reading a book...while Nandini slept on the couch while watching TV.

Prithvi finished reading and came to check her room...she was sleeping...he quickly lifted her towards the bed...she opened her eyes

Prithvi "so you were not sleeping"

Nandini laughed... "no...not really"

Prithvi was about to leave when she pulled him near her, and looked into his deep eyes... "you want to say something" she asked

she was lying on the bed and Prithvi was bending towards her "yes...so many things"

Nandini "i am listening"

Nandini pulled him closer...

Prithvi "if you draw me more closer, then I won't look back..."

Nandini "what will you do??" she whispered

Prithvi gazed at her lips and came closer "i can't tell, I can only do"

Nandini pushed him back...she could hear her own heart beat aloud...she got nervous...and stood beside the window...

Prithvi embraced her from behind and kissed her on her cheek... she felt warm...

Nandini "Prithvi"

Prithvi "hmmm..."

Nandini "can I say something?"

Prithvi "hmmm" and buried his face between her neck and shoulder...

Nandini "can we wait for some more time...i mean I am scared..."

Prithvi "scared ??? of whom?"

Nandini "of you..."

Prithvi "me??"

Nandini "when ever I look in your eyes...it seems you are always passionate and it makes me scared...can I ask you something??"

Prithvi "yes..."

Nandini "how many times did we...had...i mean we made love?"

Prithvi "i never counted...sometimes it was ten times a day" with a little grin...

Nandini shockingly turned around "what??? are you '..leave me" she said angrily

Prithvi "what happen?? you asked and I told you." he said innocently

Nandini "no you are lying...how can I??"

Prithvi "you don't know Nandini...you used to go wild everytime we did"

Nandini shocked "really???"

Prithvi "but now I miss my Nandini, I mean my wild Nandini"


Nandini was thinking while lying on her bed...soon she slept.

Prithvi smiled and closed the door of her room...


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Edited by Dhanvi83 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsom update
prithvi is so cunny thanx 4 sharing
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ananyashera

😊 thanks 4 updating dear...awesome update šŸ‘...

loved this part...all are PriNi scenes 😳...i'm totally enjoying this track...

in spite of memory loss, nandini is feeling attracted towards him 😊...that's the true love ...she could feel the his love & care about herself...so now she has believed that prithvi is her husband & she is comfortable with him...good...

but why that phone rang? 😔...

we want more & more PriNi scenes...plz keep renuka & esha away for sometime...

& plz update soon...eagerly waitng for next part...



Thanks Sweetie 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

awesome update dear...šŸ‘

i totally loved prithvi and nandini's scenes ...
prithvi is being more romantic..😳
i was waiting eagerly all weekend ... for u to update ... and its wort the wait šŸ˜‰
thanks for the pm..
pls cont soon..

Thanks for your sweet comments sweetnandu...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: priyakinnikar12

wow awesome UD dhanvi dearšŸ‘šŸ‘
loved the romantic scenes of Prithvi-Nandini after the bath n the bedroom scenesā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļø
we missed the romantic scenes of our love birds for long time
thank u so much for the romantic scenes ā¤ļøā¤ļø
but...
ye phone kyun bich me aa gaya😔😔
waiting for the next UD dear😊😊

šŸ˜†...i love reading all commments...really thanks a lot for commenting...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

atlast , atlast , atlast ...it was goin to happen ...but dat stupid phone...



update soon

oh...don't worry you never know its gonna happen soon...thanks for enjoying 😊

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