Jai n bani Slapfanfic 3

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hey frands i hoped u enjoyed the last 2 fanfics i have upadeted for u so here is the 3rd one...for readers readin this first time Jai slaped Bani n she leaves home n he is searchin for her even though he keeps tellin himself its for masi n he finds out she is gone to mout Abu n goes to the train to stop her but the train leaves....leavin Jai on his knees n tears in his eyes... contiuin

Jai is on his knees n gets up quickly washes the tears n pretends to be okay...Masi is cryin really bad n adi comes to jai is like wat now...jai takes his phone out n calls book a first class ticket to mout abu....he find out from the station that since the weather is bad the train will be going slower than usualy so it won't reach until tom afternoon...adi is like thats more than enough time if we leave now...first lets go home...Jai is in his room but doesnt seem to like it...his phone rings its the station dude sayin that he weather got really bad n so the train had to be stopped now the train wont reach til the eveni so its better if he catches his flight in the morning...Jai is like okay....Jai is about to have dinner so is everyone else when Jai doesnt like the food n then doesnt want to remind Masi of Bani so he quietly leaves.... Jai is in the study thinks he might as well sleep in his study cuz in his room doesnt feel right...he goes to get change but cant find anything...after quite some lookin time he finds his night suit n sits on his bed afterin changin suddenly he hears laughter...he goes n gets himself a drink n starts drinkin he looks in the mirror n sees Bani askin him to stop other wise he faint...Jai is like shut up...Bani goes away he gets worried n says no....she is behind him n says see u didnt want me to shut up or go away n starts to laugh...Jai gets mad n throws his bottle on the mirror n it shatters...a song plays in the bak (its a pretty old song dont noe if all of u noe it but i think it is perfect)

aaeene ke sau tookaden, kar ke hum ne dekhe hai
ek mein bhee tanahaa the, sau mein bhee akele hai
jo banaa yek saathee, wo bhee hum se chhootaa hai
bewafaa naheen jab wo, fir kyo hum se ruthhaa hai
khoyee khoyee aakhon mein, aasuon ke mele hai &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; ek mein bhee tanahaa the, sau mein bhee akele hai
us kaa haal kyaa hogaa, yahee gam sataataa hai
nind bhee naheen aatee, dard badhataa jaataa hai
jindagee kee raahon mein, log hum se khele hai
ek mein bhee tanahaa the, sau mein bhee akele hai


(hope u all liked it)
the song is playin Jai looks at the shatter mirror n sees bani he thinks he needs to find bani or he'll go crazy he can't wait till morning he needs to leave now n does! Bani is on the station since the weather is bad...she is really sad n Rano can see it n tells her to get a new start...Bani is like it isnt that easy... n to give her some time...the station dude is like everyone the weather is fine now so u all can go bak to your respected areas...as Bani is walkin she bumps into someone n almost slips but the guys catches her...its some handsome dude who is starin at bani n she is lookin bak..Rano comes n starts yellin at him askin r u blind cant u see...Bani n rano leave...he is lost in bani though..his frand comes n says Rohit r u okay lets go....he final comes to senses n asks where is she...his frand asks who he is like that gurl....his frand says there alot of gurls he is like no there is only one kind of her though...n asks where is this train going...his frand says Mout abu...Rohit says new plan we're going to mout.Abu ...his frand freaks sayin r u mad...we came to indian to this deal n now u say u want Mout Abu...Rohit is like send someone to take care of it or u can go but i am only going where she goes....n leaves

Jai has reach mout abu is really nervous doesnt noe wat he is going to say to bani but the train hasnt come adi is there also with him...Bani gets off n so does Rano they get there stuff n Jai sees them...Rano forgets something inside n goes to get it..bani says she will get it n bumps into rohit again...he says hey but she doesnt say anything...hey i am talkin to u...n bani says excuse me...he says okay well my name is Rohit Kumar n would u like to my frand...Bani gives him one look n leaves....Jai goes to Rano n asks where is Bani he needs to talk to her...Rano in a very rude way asks y..wat does he want from her now he did all he could to insult.. n kick her out n now she is gone out of his life so leave her alone...Jai gets mad n is about to open is his mouth he sees bani....Jai says Bani please Bani listen to me n trys to talk to her but rano is in the way so he is about to push her when bani tells him to stop n not even touch rano....he is shocked...she says him wat does he want...he thrown her out n she is miserable n is probably feelin dead...wat does he want y doesnt he go away?? has she done such a crim that he came all the way to mout abu.??...Jai wants to say something but cant...everyday i listen to ur tauts...went through ur torture the day this relationship began i never did anything agaisnt u or even hated u but u always hated me...cryin bitterly....everytime i did something for ur good u would humilate me insult me like i wasnt a bein or didnt have feelings until now i was going through with this cuz i knew there was gud in u but now i am not even sure...so please ever u had a lil bit of respect for me leave me alone...Jai goes to behind Bani n trys to grab her n..............SLAP!! Bani slaps jai n rano, adi n Jai himself shocked n when she reliazes wat she did she says sorry....i am sorry n runs.... its misty or she disappears in the mist....

so wat u think guy?? expect that comin?? heheehh i thought i add something interesting well i update the rest soon as possible...try to predict wat happens next...get ur imaginations workin lol hope u enjoyed!

ISHA




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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh man!!!!!!!

u cant leave us hanging like this!!!!! please cont soon!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 omg that was too funn y...im still laffing to myself you killed it....really wasnt expecting that...pleas econtinue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks for ur comments lol ya when i was writing i was laughin too lol n i was tryin not make it funny o well lol 😃 gald u liked it!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heya! aap toh ekta ki behan leghti hai!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i agree.. don't leave us hanging.. what happens next????????????? well can't wait fo u to cont.. keep up the gr8 work.. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i cant believe that someone has the guts to slap Jai Walia!! 😆 😆

eager to see jais reaction, please continue

ps: i hope bani slapping jai was a dream!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great loved it.waiting for the next one. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏

Bani slaps jai 😆 😆 😆

Muskan
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Posted: 19 years ago
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AWESOME!!!
I LOVE IT!!!! 😃
continue soon!! 😃 😃

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