MG FF:Undefined relations - (Note - Pg 7)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Introduction

Maan Singh Khurana
A young, dynamic, dashing business tycoon in the construction and architectural industry. He lives in the capital city of Delhi. A loner in life, he has no family except for his Dadima who lives in a rural town doing social work, and three of his late sister's children who just recently came into his guardianship. The unexpected addition to his responsibilities have made him more cantankerous than he already was. Unable to manage the unhappy kids and office together, he decides to hire a nanny.



Geet Handa
A young bubbly girl in dire need for a job, stumbles upon an add for a nanny for the Khurana heirs. She had almost every quality required of a nanny except for an odd one: Strict and intelligent. Although fun-loving, naughty and warm, she is desperate for the job and decides to dress down in a geeky disguise to get the job. And Voila! - job offered!


As a nanny, she is required to live in Khurana Mansion and look after the 3 mischievous kids. Will she be able to handle them, will she be able to break into the tough exterior of Maan Singh Khurana and get him to love the kids, and most importantly, will she be able to make his heart melt?

To find out, read on...



Index: (I cannot post links yet, so please look out for page number.)
1 - The first meeting - Page 2
2 - Just like on TV - Page 3
3 - Prince charming - Page 4



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Posted: 13 years ago
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your concept sounds interesting...do continue soon...😃😃
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AMAZING intro!
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1 - The first meeting


"Aditi Khurana - 13 year-old; very good at back-answering, not doing homework and not eating food." she sighed before adding, "Typical teen."

"Rahul Khurana - 10 year-old; too smart for his age; mischievous, unruly and prankster. Oh good! He sounds just like me."


She was going through the notes given to her about the kids. She looked at the time and exhaled, knowing she only had a few more minutes before they arrived from school. The three kids had literally made the previous nannies run for their lives, hence the next one required to be strict and intelligent, because she would be helping them with their homework.


"Tisha Khurana - 3 year-old."


For a moment her eyes filled up with tears. She remembered her own times growing up without her parents and knew how hard it had been for her. She had wished for no one to be an orphan, but knew life will always be unfair...to those who will probably think it is always fair. She wondered how the little girl must feel, having lost her parents at such an age where she probably didn't understand a whole lot.


Right then the phone rang startling her out of her thoughts. She jumped in her chair before she finally answered her with trembling hands. "Hello?"


"Hello, Geet?" she thought she had heard the voice of hitler.


"Ye-Ye-Yes?" she stammered as she answered back, intimidated as she by the stern and firm voice.


"Maan Singh Khurana. I hope you found the house alright." she heard from the other end then. His voice and tone made her wonder if he was really asking she was okay or if this was some kind of comment testing her ability to find the place.


"Yes, thank you." she managed to answer back in an even voice, even though her heart was beating at 120 beats per minute.


"Okay listen carefully." o_O that doesn't sound too good, she thought to herself as she prepared for what might not have been relayed to her.


"The kids will be home in some time. Now remember, they are naughty, insolent and always up to something..specially the oldest one. Whatever happens, do not get intimidated." she rolled her eyes at the last bit and wanted to laugh at that. She didn't need advice from a hitler. She thought she could handle better than this.


After some more futile attempts from Maan Singh Khurana to scare her, he finally let her go. She stood up from her chair to rehearse for the nth time how she would greet them for the first time.


She put on her specs and started walking back and forth, wanting to come in the mood. She looked around for something to hold in her hand, but there wasn't anything that was stiff enough. Finally, her eyes fell on the flower vase which had some artificial flowers with long stems.


She pulled one out and held the rose in her fist while swaying its stem in the air to test its stiffness. Nice, she thought.


She straightened up again and started walking like a serious strict person again, pretending as if they had just entered the house running all together.


"Stop!" she shouted, pointing the stick towards them.


"Good. Now listen to me carefully. I am your new nanny, but no need to call me anything but Geet. Do you understand?" she bent herself forward towards them as if giving them warning.


"Good." she straightened up again with a smirk and turned around to walk the other way. "Now I have my own rules to go by, and if you don't follow, you are going to be in big trouble. Rule #1 - No staying up late at night. I want you all in bed by 10 pm. Rule #2 - No wasting food. " she bent towards them again and added, "..no matter what is cooked."


"Rule # 3 - Homework should be done everyday and rule # 4 - No TV for more than an hour everyday. And...and..." she came back to her own self scrating her head trying to remember rule #5 when she heard from behind her...


"Rule # 5 - No nanny stays here for more than a week."


She turned around and saw them standing there at the entrace with their arms folded, eyes narrowed checking her out head to toe. She let out a nervous laugh then, wondering how much of her act they had witnessed. She saw them walk towards her and stop when right in front of her. She made to introduce herself but was interrupted before she even opened her mouth...


"Now if you will excuse us, we need to get changed." Aditi spoke with an imitated smile and walked right passed her, making her move back on her own. Her eyes widened at that, not from fear or apprehension...but from amazement. She smirked at their departing forms and thought to herself...this is going to be more interesting than I thought.


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Edited by --shania-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh boy Geet has no idea who she's up against!
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i will like this continue...is this is the story of sound of music?it was my fav.movie
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one.. pls continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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2 - Just like on TV

She stood there looking at them walk up the stairs when she felt a tug on her kameez. She turned around and saw a little angel looking up at her which brought on a genuine smile on her face.

"Is your name nanny?" she asked still tugging on Geet's kameez. The innocence of the child compelled her to pick her up in her arms.

"No, my name is Geet. What is yours?" she asked her as she adjusted her weight on her hip.

"I am Tisha. Will you be staying here?" Her face was almost in level with Geet's and she now touched her skin curiously.

"Yes, I am going to be staying here with you to take care of you. I am your nanny." There was a smile on her face as she talked to the kid.

"But we don't need you. Rahul biya can take care of us." The little girl almost made her laugh. There was such innocence in the kid that she almost instantly fell in love with her.

"Really? And who told you that?" Geet started walking up the stairs to take Tisha in her room. Although she didn't have a uniform on to change from, her clothes were quite messy. She must have had a lot of fun at the play school ground, Geet thought.

"Adi...Adididi...Adidi" Clearly the kid had trouble pronouncing Aditi didi. "She says when we tie his hand, he gets strength to take care of us."

By this time Geet had reached at the top of the stairs and asked Tisha which one was her room. When she pointed to what Geet knew as Aditi's room, she entered in there after knocking on the door.

Aditi was still in the bathroom and literally screamed when she saw Geet in her room. Her instant reaction was "Get out of here.", but Geet had expected as much. Instead of leaving the room, she stood there with her arms folded raising an eyebrow at Aditi.

"I am Geet, your new nanny, and according to the rules, I have all right to go any place where either of you are. Now, I'm here to help...so it would be in your best interest to just befriend me and do as I say."

And with that she walked out the room, leaving Aditi red in rage. Just then Rahul entered the room and asked her what happened. She threw the towel in her hand across the room exhaling a loud grunt at being so helpless. From the looks, they didn't think it would be easy to kick this one out.

The evening was quite typical with 3 kids in the house wanting to watch different shows on TV and all snatching the remote from each other. Geet had thought about a lot of scenarios that would need her intervention but didn't think of this one. Boy this was tough. While Rahul wanted to watch an action cartoon, Aditi was interested in watching a teen love show. The little angel however was easy-go-lucky and simply helped Geet keep her out of the chaos.

When the noise became unbearable, Geet yelled at them quiet. They gave her a who-the-hell-are-you look. She proposed to make schedules for their TV time, but it would have to wait till tomorrow. And since Aditi was the oldest, she got to watch the show she wanted. Hearing this, Rahul sulked back in his seat. He hated the stupid show, but he also wanted to watch TV.

Geet finally sighed in relief when they were all quiet again, with Aditi engrossed in the show, Rahul making faces at Aditi trying to distract her and Tisha sitting in her lap. For some reason, she didn't want to let go of the kid.

As Geet watched on, the scene in the show had the girl almost tripping and the hero catching her right in time to prevent her from falling. There was an involuntary yawn from her side as she thought of how many times she had seen that on TV and yet she had never experienced any of this BS in real life.

Just then, they heard a car pull up at the entrance. While Aditi and Rahul made faces, Tisha got up and started running towards the entrance. A bit worried that she might fall, Geet ran behind her only to trip right near the entrance. Before she hit the ground though, she found herself in the arms of a man...a gorgeously handsome man. She lost herself in his eyes, feeling rather excited that she had finally met her prince charming...just like on TV.

P.S. - I'm not sure if this story is going to sit well with the readers. Again, just a warning that I might discontinue if I don't get enough readers. I'll make that decision after I've posted a few parts since I know it is too early for readers to latch on to a new concept.

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Edited by --shania-- - 13 years ago
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That was FANTASTIC! i LOVED it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update
you know even i have never had a" jus like tv" moment
hahaha

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