My concoction of romantic scenes :)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi fellow JnB campers!
Well a lot of people have attempted some very great fanfics and some very interesting scenes so I figured I might as well give my writing skills a push! Here are some romantic scenes that my little filmy head thought of and well hope it helps some of you overcome the disappointment of yest's epi! 😉 Mind you it's not a fanfic....just some scenes that we might love to see between our hot couple! 😃
So here goes nothing!
(I'm starting from a random point....prolly completely unrelated to the actual show!)

Jai, Adi, Maasi, Dadi and Bani (standing behind Jai who is sitting in a sofa) are all discussing the weddings that will soon take place and what needs to be done. Jai decides to get comfy on the sofa and places his hand on the head of the sofa just to realise that it's placed right next to Bani's hands 😳 The unsuspecting Bani immediately notices that Jai's hands are close enough to touch hers and moves her hands away. But our Jai who's now falling in love with Bani decides to be a little naughty and moves closer so again his hands are right by Bani's! 😉 This saga continues for a bit while the rest of the JnB at the Walia mansion are watching them with a lot of amusement and a weird satisfaction that the hubby and wife are so in love! 😳
Maasi and Dadi then decide that who else would be best to go buy clothes and jewellery for the wedding other than our very own Jai and Bani and so they pack them away in their car and send them off! Bani by now is quite embarassed and uncomfortable by the changing behaviour of Jai and so she stays quiet throughout the ride while Jai just can't help but look at Bani while driving (hope he doesn't run into anything else on Park rd.! 😛). They then go into a huge shopping complex and it's the weekend so there's an unthinkable amount of people there. They reach a jewellery store and Bani starts to select stuff for the wedding while Jai continues to stare at his very beautiful wife much to Bani's discomfort (although in her heart Bani knows that she's loving the attention! 😉). Bani decides to see how a necklace looks on her so she puts it against herself and looks into a mirror at which time Jai stands right behind her to see with a perpetual smile of approval! Just then a salesperson who was standing on the side comments to JnB about what a beautiful couple they make embarassing Bani to no end and making Jai smile from ear to ear while looking at Bani. Bani eventually finishes buying all that is necessary and turns to leave when she realises that Jai was still standing right behind her. They look into each other's eyes as if they were searching for some answers when someone walks behind Bani forcing her into Jai's sturdy and reliable arms! (seems like it's Jai's day today 😉.....Bhagwaan se kuch aur bhi maangta toh woh bhi mil jaati!). Bani who also has a smile on her face now gets her balance back and starts to leave the place while a smiling Jai runs his hands through his hair thinking "yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai!" 😃
They now leave the shopping complex and run into a road-side ganne ka ras wala (what can I say I love sugarcane juice! 😆). Bani's eye light up and Jai well he's been watching her every move so far so obviously realises that she would love some! He asks her if she would like some ganne ka ras and she immediately agrees....so he gets some for himself and her. She drinks it up enjoying it till the last drop while Jai watches her in amusement of her innocence and is still half-way done through his. He then asks her if she would like some more and Bani being Bani says that it's alright she's full. Then Jai says that since she likes it so much she can have the rest of his as he wouldn't be able to finish it anyways (he was only halfway done through his cup). Bani is taken aback at the thought of sharing something with Jai but upon insistence she takes it anyways and is smiles all the way thinking that this is the very first time they've shared anything like this as a husband and wife!
So they're driving back home after shopping and you guessed it....Jai continues to stare at Bani only this time to be met with Bani's eyes who's trying to steal glances of Jai as well! 😉 Jai asks Bani something to which Bani gives a very naive, innocent reply sending Jai into splits of laughter! Bani at this point looks at Jai with a wide smile and says to him "aap hamesha aise hi haste rahiye....bahut achce lagte hain aap haste hue". They are driving into the driveway of the Walia mansion at that moment when Jai with a slight smile on his face stops abruptly as if realisation dawned upon him and just blurts out I LOVE YOU BANI! Bani gets the shock of her life and is unable to comprehend what's happening at that point. She wasn't sure if she heard right and Jai just continues (while turning his head away from Bani since he's not able to say this looking into her eyes)...."Yeh baat mere dil mein kitne dino se hai lekin sirf mauka dhoondh raha tha kehne ko....aaj pata nahin sahi mauka hai bhi ya nahi lekin ab aur dil mein dabaaye nahin rakh sakta.....Main tumse pyaar karta hoon Bani!" And while saying this he turns to her only to notice that she's gone.
Bani ran into her room at the very first line of Jai's and she's breathing hard out of exhaustion, anticipation and excitement. She has her hands on the dressing table and her head down when Jai comes from behind and puts his hands on her shoulders. She feels as though her entire world has completely changed and just can't stop panting. Jai continues...."tumne toh meri poori baat suni hi nahi.....Bani mujhe khud pata nahin hai ki mujhe kya hua hai. Jab bhi tum mere saamne aati ho toh meri dhadkanen itni tez ho jaati hai aur mere dil mein sirf tumhe dekhne ki, mehsoos karne ki aur choone ki khwahish hoti hai. Agar is ehsaas ko pyaar kehte hai toh mujhe tumse pyaar hai! Main utthe baitthe sote jaagte tumhari khyaalon mein khoya rahta hoon.....aur kuch soojhta bhi nahi. Main tumse yeh nahi kah raha ki kyun ki mujhe tumse pyaar hai tumhe bhi mujhe apnana hoga. Tum soch kar mujhe javaab dena....main tumhe sochne ke liye apni poori zindagi deta hoon (ok so it's a little too filmy but hey I'm the writer...I could what I want!😛😳). Jab bhi tumhe javaab dena ho tum mujhse bejhijhak keh sakti ho". At this point Jai turns to leave when Bani meekly holds onto his hand.....surprising Jai and prolly herself more! Jai turns to face her with questioning eyes and a lot of anticipation.
Bani says "Mr.Walia aapne toh keh diya ki aap apni intezaar karenge lekin main itni der kahe bina nahin reh sakti.....Mr. Walia.....main bhi aapse pyaar karti hoon! Maine toh aapko apna pati kabka maan liya tha. Aapse ab tak kah nahin saki lekin aapke dil mein kya hai yeh jaane bina main kehti bhi kaise? Lekin ab main keh sakti hoon ki I LOVE YOU Mr.Walia"
Jai who is absolutely elated to hear those words just brings Bani closer to himself and with one of those killer smiles of his 😳says "Jai".....to which Bani in the comfortable embrace of her husband rests her head on Jai and repeats...."I LOVE YOU JAI" And they both hug away to glory with smug faces and the absolute satisfaction of having confessed their eternal love for each other to sanctify the marriage that they both entered into forcibly which unknowingly turned out to be the best thing in their lives!!!!!

Well that's it from me....I just thought of this and I thought I must share it with my fellow JnB campers. I don't think I can write like this again but I figured when the thought comes might as well pen it down! Hope you enjoyed it! That's from me folks! Hope to see cute scenes between our hot couple for all of us die-hard romantics! 😃

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irisheyes458 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww THAT WAS PERFECT! thx dude, it totally made my day!! and it DEFINITELY made up for yesterday's crappy episode!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏
😳

I love it... 😳


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green_eyes88 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!!!!!!! dat ws reli nice..........it reli does make up 4 ydays epi
Piscean thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Aww...thanks for the encouragement guys! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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too good, wish u cud continue this into a fanfic!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was so romantic 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was just beautiful, please continue 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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That was awesome and simply great buddy 😛 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 I wish I could see this on the screens too.

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