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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyarockz

peehu!

fabulous update.


ahaan and palak are

for pm!





aww..thanks a lot...glad u liked it so much...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow Abhiya were so busy in romance ki they forgot abt their babies hahaha😆😆. oh shrish..i knew it..you will comment here I love this powerful Pia more thn fragile one.Ahaan-Palak r cute.Always fighting.In all awesome update😳 thanks a lot...

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

hey awesome update peehu thanks a lot
abhiya romance after such a long time it was hot aww..glad u liked it
new pia is just gr8 oh..i always wanted this side of piya
kids r really adorable
would love to read more of them
thanks for the pm and do update soon will update soon...


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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks a lot..
thank you...

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Part 28 -

Superb Peehu...
Romance at it's height I must say...
Ahaan and Palak are super cute...
Love them a lot...

thanks a lot...haha..romance toh banta hai na...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 29

Three weeks had passed by. ahaan and palak were growing. They looked liked a year old rather than weeks. They were becoming naughty day by day. Abhay and piya were having hard time around them. The kids surely knew how to keep everyone on their fingers. The adults behaved more childish than the kids.

Aliya was fighting with panchi on turn of feeding the kids. Aliya screamed on top of her voice: panchi..thats enough. Its my turn. I will make them eat

Panchi wasn't listening. She blocked her ears with her finger and said: stop screaming. Its my turn.

Aliya looked at piya who was shaking her head in annoyance. No one ever let piya feed her own kids. She herself had to always wait for her turn. Piya replied: don't look at me. U solve it by yourself

Ahaan and palak were tired of this. They looked at each other and shouted: stop…u all fight like kids. Why don't you ashk ush what we want to do

Aliya smiled at them and replied: look..your maasi is fighting. She is not letting me to make you eat.

Panchi rolled her eyes and said: look who is talking.

Palak intervened: shtop both..momma….u make ush eat

Aliya: that's not fair..its my turn

Panchi: no mine

Ahaan: its my momma's turn.

Sid and arjun entered the scenario laughing. They always enjoyed this cat fight. Arjun asked: so? Who lost?

Aliya snapped: that's none of your business.

Sid chuckled: someone is angry

Ahaan: sid and chachu…plz take your reshpective woman from here..

Palak: they both ale annoying

Aliya and panchi looked at eah other and then kids. Sid and arjun laughed and piya was just smiling. Everything has changed. And the change was for better. Things seemed normal but for how long, no one knew. Aliya and panchi ran towards kids. Ahaan and palak starting running in the whole room. Aliya and panchi being faster stood in front of kids.

Aliya smiled and said: now..you both are stuck with annoying women

Ahaan and palak smiled at each other. Ahaan winked at palak and looked at aliya: you both can never catch us.

Panchi: young man, we are faster..we can

Ahaan chuckled and looked at aliya and panchi with his eyes open without winking. Aliya was looking confused. She was reading ahaan's expression. suddenly she realized and shouted: ahaan..no…

Aliya and panchi tried to move were stuck in their place frozen. They couldn't move. Ahaan and palak laughed and gave hi-5 to each other. Palak winked at aliya: no one messhes with ush

Ahaan: especially me

Panchi sulked and said: ahaan set us free

Ahaan: I cant maashi….only palak can undo this. Ashk her

Panchi looked helplessly at palak. Palak smiled and said: I will flee you both, but you have to plomish ush shomething

Aliya: anything

Palak: u will nevel dless me up in that black dless

Aliya: but you look beautiful when..

Palak cut her in between and said: just plomish..dont intelupt

Aliya: fine

Piya started laughing. She loved her kids for this. She always wanted her kids away from black because abhay was enough for it but some vampires never seemed to understand this.

ahaan: u will let ush play outside..

aliya: fine

palak: u will let ush decide about who will make ush eat

panchi: that's not fair

ahaan: maashi..i am coming to you..sho..u will nevel fight with sid..he is my buddy

sid smiled and ahaan winked at him. Sid threw his hands up in air and said: finally…

panchi: I never fight

ahaan and palak screamed: maashi

panchi: fine

palak: u will nevel use ur powels on sid

panchi: fine

ahaan: and will always lock the door when u ale with sid

panchi looked at ahaan in horror and sid was embarrassed. Piya enjoyed it because it was sid who was always making fun of her and abhay making them embarrassed but today ahaan was making him repay.

Panchi: will you set us free please..fine..we lose and you both win

Palak: you wele already flee..didnt you notice

Aliya and panchi looked at each other and sighed. These kids were devils in disguise. Palak ran towards piya and cuddled up in her arms. Ahaan went to sid.

Sid smiled and kissed ahaan on his forehead: oh buddy..u saved me today..

Ahaan: sid stop kissing me..yuck..behave like a man..and we didn't do this for you..it was for ush

Sid narrowed his eyebrows: how is that?

Ahaan: because if anything happens to you, who will be my calliage. Now that I helped you..sho..sid sit down.

Sid was shocked: are you out of your mind? I am not becoming your carriage

Ahaan chuckled: do you want me to use my powels.

Sid lost his battle. Sid put ahaan down. He sat on his knees with his palms on floor. Sid sighed and sid: hop in ahaan

Ahaan: momma…put me and palak on hish back..

Piya couldn't control her laugh. Everyone else present in the room were laughing hard. Sid was sulking. Piya put ahaan and palak on sid's back and he started walking. Abhay came and saw sid walking on four. He was hell shocked but then started laughing.

Abhay: oh..poor sid. No one messes with my kids

Suddenly aliya had a blank expression on her face. arjun noticed it and realized that she has seen something. Aliya looked at piya with horror on her face.

arjun asked: what happened? What did you see?

All the chaos and commotion came to halt. Ahaan and palak were in their parent's arms. Everyone rushed towards her. Aliya sighed and said: piya..your parents! We completely forgot about them. They are coming to see you and panchi

Piya: no way! They cant see my kids

Ahaan: nanu is coming…we want to meet him

Piya: no ahaan..u cant

Palak: but they will shee ush one day..then why not today

Abhay: they are right

Piya: but what will we tell them..that you are a vampire…I and panchi got turned and these devils are hybrids!

Abhay: piya..relax…let them come..then we will see

Aliya: they are here…misha is also with them

Then there was a bell at the door. Everyone knew who it was. Abhay quickly told kids: ahaan and palak..behave..dont show your powers. Not even by mistake..palak especially you

Palak: yesh dadda…

Aliya went and received the dobriyals. Misha enterd with them. She came running directly towards piya and panchi and hugged them.

Misha: hey..missed you both so much..

Piya: me to mish…how have you been?

Misha rolled her eyes and said: I was supposed to ask this..u are preg..

Suddenly it struck her mind that piya was looking normal. No baby bump at all. Madhu also saw piya and was confused. Madhu asked: piya how is it possible that..i mean..u should be

Piya didn't reply. But misha saw two small kids in sid's and arjun's arms. Misha asked: who are they?

Ahaan: I am ahaan

Palak: me palak

The dobriyals were shocked to listen these small kids talking. It wasn't normal.

Arnab: how is that possible? They are too young to speak..they are just an year old.

Raichand didn't knew what to answer. They were silent. Misha asked: will you guys tell us? But these kids are so cute..hey..they look like abhay and piya..same features

Misha was still confused. She kept looking at kids. Ahaan was smiling showing his dimples. Madhu and arnab looked at kids then abhay and piya. There was silence for long time

Arnab broke the silence and asked: what is going on here? Its not what it looks like?

Piya: dad…I cant tell you what exactly it is..but yes..ahaan and palak are my kids…mine and abhay's

There was long silence again for a long time. But misha burst into laughter and said: you kidding right piya? I mean…

Arnab cut her and said: it is not normal..they are an year old..we need to know..how can they be your kids?

Palak: nanu..we ale 3 weeks old..

Misha: what? Three weeks? Are you kidding me?

Ahaan: maashi…we nevel lie

Misha was continuously staring at ahaan and palak. She smiled and went near them. Misha took palak in her arms and kissed her: you are beautiful

Palak: ofcoursh…I am…I am my dadda's plincess

Misha went near ahaan and asked: so are you momma's boy?

Ahaan rolled his eyes: oh maashi…don't stless youl blain…

Misha laughed. She already loved them. She said: ahaan..you are definitely my nephew…doesn't matter how…

Arnab: no…it does matter..i want to know the truth

Palak: nanu…don't think so much…we ale jusht diffelent..we jusht grow too fast…

Madhu found palak too cute. She went cradled palak in her arms and said: u are just like your mom and dad..i hope not stubborn atleast…u know ur mom was so stubborn when she was a kid

Palak: nani…my mom is still..shtubborn…and about me..you will come to know shoon…

Piya finally said: dad..mom..dont ask me any questions. Yes they are our kids. But I cant tell you more than than. And please..i want you to drop this topic here only..no more questions..

Misha: it doesn't matter to me…atleast now I wont be the bratty one

Madhu: well..honestly…I want to know..but these kids are so…I mean I cant describe..it doesn't matter to me at all..

Arnab: have you both lost it..piya..i know there is a huge secret behind it..either you tell us or..or I would never step in this house again..abhay..what did you do to my daughter..i will kill you abhay..something is wrong..definitely

Piya was horror struck. She said: dad…plz…I told you don't ask anything..this is my house..my kids…my place…and abhay is my husband..if you have any problem with anyone..dad..i am sorry..but please leave..

Arnab: piya..he has just brainwashed you..

Piya: what? Brainwashed? I am an adult dad..a mom..no one can make me do things without my choice. I love abhay..and this family is mine..never dare to speak a word against them. I will never tolerate it.

Arnab: you don't know what you have got yourself into..

Piya snapped: and you do? Dad…please..either accept the situation without any questions or please just leave. And dad..never dare to speak like that to abhay..he is my husband..and you have no right to speak to him this way…

Arnab was hurt. He said: piya…why are you talking like this.. I am your dad..i care for you

Piya: and this is my family…I made my own decision and I am happy about it.

Arnab looked at panchi and asked: what about you?

Panchi: dad please…I am happy here..this is my little place..our little place..and we are happy..please don't ruin it for us

Arnab was furious. He looked at everyone. He felt betrayed. Even misha and madhu were not supporting him. He left from there.

Madhu had tears in her eyes. She went and hugged piya. She said: piya..dont worry..he will come around. Give him sometime. I will never ask you anything. I trust you and I am sure you made the right decision. Abhay..i am sorry for what arnab did.

Abhay: its ok..i understand. He is hurt. I know he will forgive us

Madhu: definitely..i promise I wont ask anything. I am just accepting the situation the way it is. I can see that you all are happy together. For me..happiness is everything. I will go now.

Piya: bye mom and sorry..

Madhu smiled and left. Misha was still standing there. Misha said: I don't care what dad thinks…piya..these kids are so cute..

Ahaan: maashi…once I grow up..we will have bike race

Misha: anytime..because I don't expect anything from palak..she and wild things don't go together

Palak: maashi..u don't know me…let me grow up..then I will show you the magic of palak raichand

Misha chuckled and replied: I will wait for it..

Misha hugged piya and left. Piya was still in shock. She didn't knew what to do. She never wanted this. Abhay knew piya was feeling bad. Abhay hugged her and said: don't worry..he will come around. He loves you

Piya: but I talked to him so rudely..he is hurt because of me

Palak went near piya and piya cradled her in her arms. Palak said: don't worry momma..nanu is sweet…he loves you…he just didn't pick ush up..or else he would have reacted like maashi and nani

Piya was shocked. What did she mean by this: what did you do?

Palak rolled her eyes: just showed them P effect

Abhay: you used powers on them?

Palak chuckled: only on nani….thats why she didn't ask anything and accepted it easily. And maashi doesn't need one. She didn't care what the secret was. So it wasn't needed.

Piya: what did you do?

Palak winked at her and replied: used my power of love

Abhay and piya didn't knew what to say. With every passing day they were discovering new powers of little raichands. Who knew what was stored in the future.

Aliya again had a blank expression on her face. This time she was horror struck. She was panicking. Abhay asked aliya: now what?

Aliya: they are coming

Those three words were enough to burst the bubble of happiness.

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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing dr!!! litle riachands are gr8!!! loved dem!!!

d feading sequence was fab!!!! dey wanted dere momma 2 feed dem... dats so cute yr!!! n dey statue both aliya n panchi n made den accept dere conditions dats cool!!!!
sid is now aahan permenent carriage!!!! i loved dat!!! sid plight is really funny!!!!
so kids have dere effect on misha!!! dat was cool!!! palak use dere powers on madhu.. so she accept dem.. dats cool!!! loved both palak n aahan!!!
i hope arnab cope up with d situation soon!!!
n are superiors cooming!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!!!
Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
the lil' Raichands r really cute and bratty.
hmm.. so its going the Breaking Dawn Way, is it?

Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update. Palak and ahaan are so cute. Its difficult not to fall in love with them. They can even handle sid. But they are quite naughty too. They used their powers on madhu😆
I hope arnab comes around soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant. Loved it to the core. I am loving the devil more day by day
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Posted: 13 years ago
FANTASTIC update yaar:-) really Superb...
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Super update...Gosh, the kids are soo bratty and controlling everyone by their cuteness or powers.. Arnab kabhi nehi sudhrega.. I hope he accepts the kids soon. Piya standing up for her family was very nice..Panchi n Aliya scene as well.. continue soon 😳
Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago

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