OS: MG Dillagi..Part2 page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey friends'.!!

Well I tried writing OS for the first time'.hope you all like my attempt''!!

Maan and Geet have joined the same college and by coincidence they are in the same class'..Both of them have a lot of attitude in them'.!! Geet's along with her friends' meera and pari have too joined the same college and Dev and Adi have joined along with Maan.

Finally it was the joining day of the college'.Maan Singh Khurana is in black T-Shirt and blue jeans and geet is in white top'.Both are luking awesome as always'.!!

Maan and his gang had an habit of commenting 'and when it was the first day of college they did the same'

Dev(looking at Geet): oye maan dekh to zara kya ladki hai

Maan: hmm

Adi was bit serious kinds so he dint bothered''

Pari and meera heard dev and maan conversation'.they told geet abt what all happened'..

Meera: yar ye ladke kabhi bhi nahin sudherenge'.

Pari: chod na'.hume in sab ki parwah nahin karni chahiye yar'.

Geet: yar hum ladkiyo ki yahi problem hai koi baat hui or hum chup kar jaate hai jab tak hum inhe jawab nahin denge ye log comment karte rahenge'..inhe sabak to sikhana padega

Geet goes and decides to teach them a lesson'

Geet: oye tum job hi ho'apna muh band karo samjhe'.tum ladko ko koi kaam nahin hai'jab dekho faltu bolte rehte ho'.agar dubara tumne kuch bola kisi bhi ladki ko to aisa sabak sikhaungi ki zindagi bhar yaad rakhoge'.

Maan: o madam kafi hua'hum kuch bol nahi re iska ye matlab nahin ki tumhare mann mein jo aye tum bolte jaogi

Geet: dekhiye apko pata hai ki galati kiski hai aap logo ko sharam aani chahiye'.aapki bhi to behene hongi agar unhe koi aise bole to aap logon ko bhi to bura lagege na

Maan: ab tum had se aage bad rahi ho samji tum

Geet: had se aage to tum ladke hamesha badhte ho or phir hame keh rahe ho

Meera and pari took geet away as it turned into a huge argument between maan and geet'..

Dev: yar job hi ho baat to bilkul thik boli usne..

Maan: yar baat thik ho ya galat uss ladki ko koi haq nahin hume iss tarah se insult karne ka'iss baat ki keemat to use chukani padegi

Adi: yar tum bhi kis behes mein pad haye ho'.chalo lectures ka time ho gaya hai

Dev: chod yar maan'.par haan uss ladki ki baton se hame sabak to zarur mil gaya'

Maan(self thought) jo bhi ho maan singh khurana ko apni insult bardasht nahin'iska badla to uss ladki ko zarur chukana padega

Meanwhile

Meera: agar aaj humne tuje roka nahin hota to tune to pata nahin kya kar dia hota

Geet: to tumhari tarah sunti rehti kya'ab vo ladke kisi or ko aise bolne se pehle 100 baar sochenge

Pari: chal yar aaj pehle din ki shuruwat aise hui'aage to pata nahin kya hoga

Meera: chill guys ab chodo or lecture ke liye chalo we are already late

They enter the class and are shocked to see maan and his gang in the same class'..same happened with maan.

Maan(self thought) to iska matlab hum sab ek hi saath padh rahe hai'muje use badla lena or aasan hoga

Meera: yar vo ladke to issi class mein hai'.

Geet: kya farq padta hai yar chodo'.vo dekho madam aa gayi hai'un ladko ko chod or udhar concentrate kar

Well geet was an intelligent girl and had topped in her secondary examinations and the teacher was well aware of that'..

Teacher: I heard some girl has joined who topped in her secondary exams'well I wanna see her'please stand up if she is present

Geet stands up in the class' Maan and his gang is damm shocked to see her

Adi: yar ye ladki to ekdum chupa rustam hai'bolne mein number one or padhai mein bhi

Maan: agar vo sher hai to hum sawa sher hai

Dev: maan job hi ho main to apni galati ki maafi maang lunga use'.hame iss ladki ki zarurat padh sakti hai na

Maan: agar tuje aise lagta hai to dekh le dev'..(self thought) par mere dimaag mein to kuch or chal raha hai

Teacher: tumhara naam kya hai??

Geet answers: maam geet..

Teacher: well done beta'.keep it up'.waise tumhare pichle results itne ache hai to tunhe main ek kaam de rahi hu'main chahti hu ki tum ek introductory project bano jisme puri class ko hamare subject ka basic knowledge mil jaye

Teacher: I hope u will manage it

Geet: yes maam I will..i do it in two days and will send it to you'.!!

Maan(self thought) tumhare iss project ka dekhna main kya karunga Miss geet'..Maan singh khurana se panga lekar tumne acha nai kia

Meanwhile dev apologises geet for his wrong behavior'geet too forgave him'..so everything went normal'.

Geet began preparing for her project seriously'..she spends her day and night in that preparation and was successful to in what she wanted to prepare..

Finally it was the day of her presentation'..!!! as soon as she switched on her CD it was a big shocker for geet

The whole presentation was an animated picture of Tom and Jerry''geet got nice bashing from her teacher and all class was making fun of her'.The whole plan was made by maan as he had changed the CD'..

Geet was all in tears and left the class crying''.this made maan feel uneasy'''..he felt bad for wht he had done



Well this was part1 of my OS and it will have yet another part'if u feel I shud continue then please comment as it will really motivate me

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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds interesting..please add me in
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this is nice...but maan did not do right...i mean geet must have had put everything into that project...but then she got scolded for no fault of hers...

but then atleast he was feeling bad by the end...continue soon n plzzz pm me...thnxxx... :)))
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hi
mish first of all i wish u the very best ..
All The Best Greetings

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Thnx to all for motivating me.. I wl update nxt part soon..
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awesome start...
do continue...
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nice send me pm when u update next part plzzz
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Ok guysss i wll PM u soon...
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badiya hai writer sahibaa :)
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Originally posted by: 810Kankana

badiya hai writer sahibaa :)

Nt more thn u.. me jus tryng..

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