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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice start...😊😊😊
loved the update.
please continue soonnn
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Part 2


Geet left in tears that made maan feel uneasy''He was guilty of what he had done''Meera and pari too ran behind geet to console her'.

Maan wanted to apologise and tell geet that it was his entire plan'.so he also went to catch up geet

Maan: vo geet kaha gayi???

Pari: geet rote hue apne ghar chali gayi hai

Meera: pata nahin kisne kiya ye sab geet ke saath'usne kitni mehnat karke apna kaam kia tha'humne khud dekhi thi uski presentation'pata nahin geet kis haalat mein hogi'..baat bhi nahin ki bas rote hue gayi hai

Meera and pari's conversation made maan feel more uncomfortable'..

Maan: ye sab meri wajah se hua hai'maine vo cd change ki thi

Meera: tumne??

Pari: par kyu maan tumne kyu kia aisa'..

Maan: main to ek mazak kar raha tha muje nai pata tha baat itni serious ho jaegi'.galati meri hai saari or geet ko itna kuch sunna pada'.

Meera: maan tumne acha nai kia jab geet ko pata chalega ki tumne aise kia hai to pata nahin vo kya karegi

Maan: please tum dono geet ko ye mat batana main khud kal geet se maafi maang lunga'.please

Pari and meera agreed.

Pari: thik hai par tumhe promise karna hoga ki agli bar tum aisa kuch nahin karoge'..

Maan: I promise ab ab meri wajah se geet ko koi pareshani nahin hogi balki kisi pareshani ko main geet tak khud aane hi nahin dunga

Maan dint even knew why he said so'..

Everyone left for their homes''on the other hand geet was really upset with what happened''she dint even talked to anyone'.but she wanted to know who was all behind this''.

Maan was really in guilt of what he did with geet'.he could not sleep the whole night thinking of how fast the time could pass so that the next morning comes and he apologises for his mistake

Maan(self-thought) maine geet ke saath kuch zyada hi mazak kar dia'..uss din usne koi galat baat bhi nai boli thi,,,,thik to bol rahi thi'.maine hi apni ego kea age kuch or socha hi nahin'..pata nahin vo kis halat mein hogi'..muje use kisi bhi tarah maafi maangni hai'.bas ye subah jaldi se ho jaye'..!!

Each and every minute was passing like a year for maan'..Finally the next morning maan turned up''.and he went to college'..

He was constantly searching for geet but he could not locate her'.finally his eyes caught up meera and pari

Maan: meera geet kaha pe hai vo dikh nai rahi

Meera: maan vo aaj college nai aayi hai

Maan: nahi ayi matlab??

Meera: pata nahin maan vo na to humara call receive kar rahi hai'pata nahin vo thik bhi hai ya nahi

This sentence makes maan more tensed'..

Maan: please meera tum kisi tarah geet ko yaha bula lo'.please

Meera agrees but she tells him that it won't be possible today she will try and bring her tomorrow'..maan had no option than to wait for another day'.

Next day meera and pari goes to Geet's place'''.

Pari: kya geet tu kal college kyu nahin aayi

Geet did not respond''

Meera: chal geet uth jaldi se tyar ho hum aaj college ikathe challenge

Geet: muje nahin jaana uss college mein'.tum dono jao

Meera: thik hai agar tu nahin jaegi to hum bhi tere saath yaha par baithe hue hai'

Pari: tu hi kehti hai na geet hum hai teen par hum teeno mein ek hi jaan basti hai'kya tu hamari itni baat bhi nai manegi'.

Geet finally agrees to go with them

Meera: jo hua geet ho gaya use bhul ja'..chod'.

Geet: nahin meera aise bhulne wali baat to nahin hai ye'.main pata to laga kar rahungi ki kisne kiya ye sab

Pari: agar tum baithe yahi sochte rahe to hame pakka der ho jaegi'..

Geet: tum bas do minute ruko main bas abhi tyar hoke ayi'.

Geet, Meera and pari leaves for college... Well maan was quite happy to see geet back'.and he too wanted to make up for his mistake'.

In the class the Maan had alresy informed the teacher that he will be playing the CD for introductory lectures''..so he played the same CD which geet had made'..!

Everyone in the class praised for the hard work done by the maker'.but geet was shocked to see her work shown by someone else'

Geet: excuse me maam

Teacher: geet this is what is called hard work'..I would really praise maan kya CD banaya hai'.everything is so easily explained'.tumhari tarah nahin tom and jeery show dikha diya

Everyone in the class started making fun of her again and maan ddi not like that''

Geet: par maam ye to

Maan interrupted in between to shut down the matter..

Maan: maan muje kuch bolna hai may i???

Teacher: ya sure maan go ahead

Maan: maam I want to make a clarification today''the CD is not made by me'Geet had made that CD'and all the hard work is done by her only'..

Maan: actually maam ye cd ussi din ban gayi thi par maine use change kar dia tha''ye sab geet ne kia hai maam or vo jo tom and jerry ki CD aapne dekhi thi vo maine waha pe arkhi thi'geet ki koi galati nai hai maam

Geet was all shocked with maan's confession'..she was feeling angry as well as happy that her truth was out that she was innocent

Maan: mam I know maine jo kia vo galat tha par I seriously apologise ki maine geet ke saath ye sab kia

Teacher: well maan muje samaj nai aa raha ki main kya bolu'.m glad ki tumne sach seedhe seedhe sabke saamne rakh dia par tumne geet ke saath ach nai kia

Maan: maam kya main kuch bol sakta hu if u permit me

Teacher: ya sure

Maan: geet tum maano ya na maano par jab se maine tumhare saath ye mazak kia hai main apne aap ko maaf nai kar pa raha hu''main jaanta hu main tumhara gunehgaar hu par please muje maaf kar do'..m sorry geet

Geet could feel the pain and was realizing that maan has realized his mistake'..

Geet: its okay maan please jo ho gaya use jaane do'.lets be friends now

The teacher was happy and she praised geet for her hard work'.she too apologized that she thought geet was wrong'..

Finally the class ended and maan came up to geet again

Maan: m really sorry geet please muje maaf kar do'..maine jo kia galat kia

Geet: please maan jo ho gaya use bhul jao'hum friends hai'.friendship mein no sorry no thanks''got u

Maan: geet I promise u aaj se tum pe koi pareshani nahin aane dunga

That day passed geet and maan became really good friends'..they shared everything amongst each other'not only maan and geet but meera, pari, dev and adi too were in the gang now'' !!

Maan was already falling for geet but he could never express his feelings''he used to take care of her'..geet too enjoyed maan's company'.

One day maan had to go urgently for some work'he did not inform geet nor dev and adi'..they all tried contacting him but all went in vain'.

Few days passed'.geet kept missing him badly'..it felt as if an important part of her life was missing'..

Geet: dev please pata karo maan kyu nai aa raha hai

Dev: geet uska kuch pata nahi chal raha ki vo kaha gaya'..uske ghar pe bhi koi nahin hai jaha se pata chalega

Geet: maan please wapis aa jao'.tum thik to ho na?

Few days again passed the same way'..finally maan messaged geet one day and told her that he will be coming to college the next day'..

Geet was excited as well as angry on maan abt his behaviors'..so she thought to talk to him face to face'.

The next day maan and geet met at the college..

Geet: tum kaha gayab ho gaye the bina bataye'..?

Maan: vo geet mere father ka transfer ho gaya hai hum log mumbai shift ho rahe hai'..

Geet was all shattered and in tears hearing this''

Maan: geet suno to

Geet: ab sunne ko kya reh gaya hai maan tumne ek baar bhi muje batana zaruri nahin samja'waise bhi thik to hai main hoti hi kaun hu

Geet: jiss din se tum gaye ho tumhe bata nahin sakti ki maine tumhe kitna miss kia or tumhare liye litna assan hua na ye kehna kit um ja rahe ho

Maan was admiring geet and was again lost'.

Geet: main tumse baat kar rahi hu maan

Maan: geet muje tumhe kuch batana hai

Geet: muje ab tumse koi baat nahin karni'..tum jao'.tumhe peri parwah karne ki bhi koi zarurat nahin hai'..jao maan jao'byeee maan

Geet started moving away from him when she heard maan clling her name

Maan : geet

She turned back and saw maan bent down on his knees'.

Maan: geet tum jaanti ho jis din se tum muje milli ho meri zindagi ke mayne badal gaye hai'.main main nahi raha'har waqt bas tumhare bare mein sochta rehta hu'ki geet ko kaise khush rakhu kya isa karu jisse tumhe khushi mile

Maan: yakeen mano geet main tumhe kabhi dard nahin dena chahta'..tumhari khushi mein hi meri khushi hai geet'..please mujse mooh modke mat jao'main tumhare bina jee nahin paunga

Geet ran up immediately towards maan'

Geet: khabar dar agar dubara kabhi aise bola to'.main tumse kabhi baat nahin karungi'.or muh modke main kaha ja rahi hu'vo to tum ja rahe ho na'muje hamesha ke liye chodkar

Maan: nahin geet main kahin nahi ja raja '.maine mom dad se bhi bol dia hai'..

Geet: matlab??

Maan: matlab ye ki main apni geet ko akela chod ke kaise ja sakta hu tum meri zindagi ho geet'.bhala apni zindagi se alag koi reh sakta hai'..main yahi tumhare sath rahunga''geet I love you so much'.or ye aaj se hi nahin bahut pehle se bas keh nahin saka

Geet was in tears once again'..

Maan: maine to socha ki ye baat sunke tum khush ho jaoge..par tumhari aankhon mein aansu'..kya hua geet

Geet: maan main nahin jaanti ye kya hai par ek baat hai main bhi tumhare bina nahi reh sakti'.jab tum mere pass hote ho to sab acha lagta hai or jab tum nahin hoate to main reh nahin pati tumhare bina'please mujse kabhi dur mat jaana maan'. I love you too

Well all well that ends well'maaneet ended up in a hug''



Well this was Maaneet- Dillagi'Hope u loved it''.

Please do comment''I will be waiting''

Edited by mishtidoll143 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os ear just read it
it was a light hearted story
do write some more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome mish
want an epilogue tooo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cool tats was awesome os...
lovely...
try to come up with some more works dear...
will be waiting 4r ur new work...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi mish good work and loved maaneet love which s very nyc




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Posted: 13 years ago
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This ws my 1st OS.. hope evry1 lykd it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I wl try to make new OS on maaneet
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Originally posted by: mishtidoll143

I wl try to make new OS on maaneet

mish pls do write dear ...v r waitinggg
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome part mishti loved it u should write more

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