Posted:
renu(:sad)kabhi nahi socha tha ki zindagi mujhe ye din bhi dikaye gi
jaha pe meri shaadi shuda ,
zindagi meri aankhon ke saamne bhikhar jaaygi. Ki koi aasa din bhi aayga jaha mujhe
aisa savaal karna padega. Par vo din aaya hai aur main tumse poochna chahti hoon
ki kyun? kio kiya aisa mere saath
Gautam: dekho mujhe tumhari faltu baaton ke liye waqt nahi hai, to apni bakwaas band
karo aur so jao
Renu(angry): tumhe mujhe jawab dena padega
Gautam: mujhe tumhe kuch kahe ne ki zaroorat nahi hai, kio ki tum khud karan ho.
Yeh rishta karan hai meri in harkaton ka. Jo mazaa mujhe pehle karne ko nahi mila, vo main
ab karaha hu.
Renu(in a determined manner : to phir kahene aur suneko kuch aur bacha nahi hai, hum ja rahe hai yaha se. Main aur gudiya. Kio ki mujhse aur bardasht nahi hota. Tum karo jo bhi tumhe karna hai. Good bye.
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I welcome you all to the Voting round of
Navya Forum's
Rewrite a Scene contest
I first of all Thank all the participants for taking part in the contest..š
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Here are the entries for Caption contest..
Entry:1
This is the scene where Deepak tells Om that he wishes to tell the latter something serious during the kanpur marriage...
Deepak: Maaf Kijiye, main aapse kuch baath karna chahtha hoon...
Gorilla (Anant's dad): Ji, kahiye...
Deepak: Main aapse yeh kehna chahtha hoon ki aapke b...
Navya: Papa, please meri baath suno...
Deepak: CHUP KARO NAVYA!!!!!!...ITHNA SABKUCH HUWA AUR KISINE MUJHE BATHAYA BHI NAHIN...AB HAMARE PARIVAAR KI EK LADKI KE PEECHE JAANE NAHIN DOONGA MAIN USS BESHARAM KO!!!!!
Gorilla: Ji, Kya baath hain??...kahiye...
Deepak: MAIN AAPSE YEH KEHNA CHAHTHA HOON KI AAPKE BAUJI A.K.A UDI-BABA KO DEKHKAR HAMARI GUDIYA CHILLAKAR RO RAHI HAIN...GUDIYA KO CHOD, EVEN MUJHE BHI DARR LAG RAHA HAIN UNE DEKHKAR...UNE AGAR DARANE KA ITHNA SHOK HAIN TOH HAMARE DAMAAD GAUTAM KO SABAK SIKHANE KO KAHO...WOH AAJKAL USKI BEEWI KO CHODKAR JITNE BHI LADKIYAN HAIN UNN SABSE BOHAT PYAAR KARTA HAIN...
Gorilla (in a thunderous voice): haan...woh toh nayi baath nahin hain...mere bachpan mem bauji mujhe ek baar zor se dekha tha...uss din mere smile karne ka ability chala gaya...ab mujhe Mr. bean aur Tom & Jerry dekhkar bhi hassi nahin aatha...kal bauji ka extra-terrestrial passport ready hoga...tab hum une jupiter bhej denge...
Bua Daadi: SATHYANAASH!!!!...Yeh kya chal raha hain???...hamare ghar ke ek sadasya white-kurtha na pehnewaale ek ajnabi se baath kar raha hain???...HARI OM PRABHUJI!!!!
Gorilla: Ji, hamem ab chalna hain...aaj Animal planet mem bauji aur bua daadi ka ek interview hain...
Udi-baba: $*($&*(^&$(#*&@)*)(#*)%*$)&)$)#$)(#*)%
Deepak : Yeh gaali kyoon de raha hain????
Rema: Ji, woh kaa hena...woh gaali nahin... sabko bleaching (means 'blessing') de raha hain...ab hum log chalte haim...bayee bayee...
Entry: 2
the scene is the karvachaut wala scene where navya break's her fast alone but its rewritten in this way
IN college after anya have a fight in the garden of the college...
WHAT I WANTED 2 HAPPEN
Anant get's up n goes 2 the canteen n there he see Ranbir Ritz n Appy sitting on a table n Ranbir eating that sandwitch tht he had made 4 Navya ...N get's more angry n rushes toward's the table shoutingg RANBIRRR
Ranbir notices tht anant has seen him n is rushing 2ward's him get's nervous n say's
Ranbir:arre yaar anant tu aagaya Navya kahan hai...
Anant:us madam ka naam mat le naajaane uski problem kya hai..mai ne ..mai ne usse itne pyaar se manaya..itne pyaar se jitne pyaar se aaj tak mai ne kisiko bhi nahi manaya tha..aur woh madm nakhre dikha rahi hai
Ritz:Anant ab aisa kya hua ke tum uss par itna gussa ho rahe ho..
Appy:ha anant aisa kya hua
Anant:mujhe kyu pooch rahi ho tum dono madam ji ko hi jakar pucho na...
Ritz Appy n Ranbir look at each other n thn Ritz n Appy get's up frm there chair n start's moving toward's the canteen door
Anant:arre tum dono ab kaha jaa rahe ho
Ritz:tum to itne gusse mai ho ke hamari baat to suno ge nahi na hi hamme batao ge ke baat kya hai issi liye hum Navya se hi jaanne ki koshish karne waale hai
Anant:ha ha aur uss madam ko samjha bhi dena
APPY N RITZ [2gether] ;Anant tum bhi na
[thn smile n go out of the canteen 2ward's the garden}
IN THE GARDEN
navya is sitting in the same place
Appy:ritz tujhe pata hai kiya ke anant kaha hai
Ritz:nahi appy mujhe kaise pata hoga ke MR .Bajpai kaha hai woh to MRS.Bajpaai ko hi paata hoga na..
Navya [angrily] :mujhe nahi pata ke kaha hai woh..woh hi jaane.
Appy:ooohoo itna gussaa
Ritz:uhmm uhmm kyu navya aisa kiya hogaya ke tu uss se itni naaraaz hai
Navya:chodo na ussko..humare paasss aaur kuch nahi hai kya baat karne ke liye..aur waise bhi exam's aane waale hai 2 hum padhaaii ke baare mai baat kare
Ritz tujhe kitna aata hai computer's mai tera 5th lesson hogaya kiya..
Ritz:Navya pehle too mera 1st lesson bhi hua hai ya nahi pata nai aur tu 5th lesson ki baat kar rahi hai
[THN RITZ N APPY START LAUGHING N SEEING THN NAVYA ALSO LAUGH'S]
Appy:chalo tu hasi to sahi mai ne to socha tha ke ab tu saara din yeh roondu sa chehra bana kar bethi rahe gi[THN REMOVES A CHOCOLATE FRM HER BAG ] chal issi baat pe kuch meetha hojaye[BUT AS V KNW NAVYA WAS FASTING
4 ANANT }
Navya:nahi nahi mera mood nahi hai
Ritzz:mood kyu nahi hai Navya appy ne teri fav chocolate lai hai aur tu mana kar rahi hai ..nahi navya tujhe khana hi hoga
Navya :nahi ritz appy plss nahi
Ritz n Appy:ha ha ha chal kha
[N BW THIS} navya sys's mai nahi kha sakti warna sab beekaar hojaye ga
Ritz:kiya bekkar hojaye ga
Navya:kuch nahi {shy shy she is blushing}
Appy:bol na navya
Navya:aacha thik hai paar tum aur kisi ko nahi bata oo ge na specially anant ko
RITZ N APPY:ha babaa nahi batayenge
Navya:promise
appy:ha baba promise aur ritz ki taraf se bhi promise ab bataye gi
Navya:woh mai..mai ne na anant ke liya karvachud ka wrath rakha hai
N AS U KNW
Ritz :kya paagal to tuune usse bola kyu nahi
Appy:woh saab chod mai abhi anant ko call karke batati hu
Navya [snatches appy's phone ]:Nahi tu ne promise kiya tha ab tu nahi ataye gi
thn navya get's Meeta's call
meeta :tu kaha hai jaldi ghar aajaa yaha ghar ki decoration me teri help chahiye...tujhe yaad hai na aaj karvachut hai
Navya:ha mai wo mai
Meeta:tujhe jo bolna hai baad me bolna abhi ke liye tu jaha hai waha se jaldi ghar aaja waaise bhi college ka tim to khatam ho gaya na to jaldi ghar aa
Navya:ok maa mai aati hu
N NAVYA LEAVES
NOW RITZ N APPY DOORAING[MAKING RUN] THEIR BRAIN
ritz:ab kiya kare ..yeh navya bhi na..anant ke liye wrath[fast] rakha aur hume usse batane bhi nahi derahi hai..
APPY:idea uss ne kaha ke hum anant ko nahi bolenge par yeh nahi kaha ke usse likh bhi nahi sakte
RITZ CONFUSED
Ritz:tu kiya bol rahi hai aapy mere kuch samajh mai nahi aaraaha
APPY REMOVES HER MOBILE FRM HER BAG NGOES 2 HER MESSAGE APPLICATIN SELKECT'S NEW MESSAGE N TYPE'S ANANT'S NUMBER THERE N SEND'S HIM THE NEW'S ABT NAVYA'S FAST
ritz:appy tu ne kiya kiya
Appy:mai ne anant ko message kar diya
Ritz:arre wah appy
Appy:thank u thank u
N THIS COLLEGE SCENE ENDS
now anant in his house in his room
u may wonder how he reached there while this trio convo was going on he left 4 his house n now he is in his room
Anant's mobile recieves the message tht appy had sent him...he open's the new message n gives tht masti;happy;excited...etc etc wala smile on his face n thn bring 's a plan wala smile on his face
AT NAVYA HOUSE [night]
the phone bell ring 's tringgg
n daadi pick's up the call n it's anant who had called
DAADI:hello kon
Anant:daadi mai anant
DAADI:accha mai navya ko bullati hu..
Anant:nahi nahi daadi mujhe aap se hi baat karni thi
DAADI:kyu bhaiya navya ko chod kar tumhe humse ke baat karni hai
Anant:woh daadi kya hai na wohh mai yeh..metra matlab navya
DAADI:arre ab kaho ge bhi ya wowo hi kartye raho ge
Anant:wo daadi aaj karva chaud hai na...to navya na mere liye wrath rakha hai..paar use nahi pata ke mujhe pata hai
DAADI:Accha to iss budhi daadi ki maadad chahiye thi...
Anant:ha daadi ji woh kya aap navya ko koyi bahane se 10 min me neeche bhej dengi ...taaki
DAADI:thik hai thik hai ..bhaiya..ab hum yeh bhi kardenge...
n thn notices tht navya is coming out of her bed room n keep's the phone
saying:ACHA BABA HUM NAVYA KO BHEJ DENGE AAP KI DUUKAAN MAI WOH LE AAYE GI AAP KI DUKAAN SE HAMARI ZAAROORAT KI CHEEZE
Navya:kya le aaon daadi
DAADI:arre woh meeta neh harsh ko kaha tha kaarvaachaud ke liye woh channi le kar aane ke liye paar woh ladka toh apne dost ke ghar mai hai aur woh dukaan wala keh raha hai ke uss ki dukaan me koi nahi hai abhi ke woh channi hume bhej de to mai ne keh diya ke 2 chali jaeegi
Navya:par daadi
DAADI:kya par var..yahi paas wali dukan hai kuch 5 min lagenge tujhe waapas aane nai to jaa kar le aana
NAVYA{SADLY bcoz as v laalll knw she 2 has 2 break her fast]:Theek hai daadi
N goes out of the door
n thn goes 2 tht shop n buy's the channi, whn she is returning n reches the building gate notices anant standing there nnn smilesss
N Anant cum's near her n hold's her hand n say's :Tumhe kiya laaga tha ke aagar tum mujhe nahi baataaoo gi to mujhe pata nahi chale ga ke tum ne mere liye wrath rakha hai..
n thn turn's her n show's her the moon in the same way as he did whn they were on the bajpai house terrace
nt hn as u knw navya has the channi so she turn's n look's at anant with it n thn anant bring's a bottle of minersal water frm his car n makes her drink it n thn removes the chocolate frm his pocket n makes her eat it..thn hold's her face in his palm's bring's it close 2 him n kisses her on her forehead..
thn navya sys I LOVE U ANANT
ANant[smiles] n thn say's : I LOVE U 2 NAVYA
thn navya sys :accha ab tum jaao ..aur mujhe bhi jaane do daadi ne jaldi aane ke liye kaha hai maa ko iss channi se apna wrath chod na hai to mai chal ti hu
..
thn anya see harsh coming n thn anant leaves navya..n navya leaves 2ward's her house thn turn's n smiles at anant
anant also smiles n goes to his car smiling n thn
both of thm leave 4 they houses
n the episode end'sss
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So guys, these are the entries I got...
Only two entries..
As far as I know.. There is one entry missing..
I might have deleted it by mistake,
If I am right,
Please PM me the entry again..
Very less entries,
But, I already extended it..
So, cant do it anymore..
okay..Now
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