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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Our the most recent one is really janu. The khwahish of hum one. Really cute. I think I've always read ur work in English. It's amazing that u r equally equipped to deliver such finess in both the languages.


Thank you darling.

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The Moment
(Tellyme's FF - Her Complete Submission)
The Moment!
The moment had arrived
As it would have eventually come
It arrived without a knock on the front door of his heart
It arrived without a notification or a messenger
It arrived so suddenly that he could not fathom its changes
But it had arrived
The moment had arrived.
It arrived
Screaming to emerge from his heart and his soul
Bringing along the subtle changes in his heart
Taking him by surprise completely
As far as he could remember
It was just yesterday, when he shined in his ego and arrogance
While today brought the restlessness, the fear and the possible separation

Fate had finally arrived at this doorstop
Making him realize her importance and her value in his life
Realization that he was nothing without her
His life did not exist without her
How much he missed her
How much he craved for her
Only he knew how he felt
Alone and helpless without her

But was this realization enough?
Was this understanding enough?
Unfortunately it was not enough
Because the moment had arrived!
For him to feel the pain
The pain that he bestowed upon her
The pain that her innocent self suffered for all this years
His tantrums and her silence
His humiliation and her love
His anger and her submissiveness
His rejection and her acceptance
It was always his ego in front of her self-less love
It was always his arrogance in front of her humble silence
And so today the moment had arrived
For him to suffer, silently in the repentance of his deeds!

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Silent Suffering

(Rakhi's FF - Bouganvilla)

I suffer in my silence
As it is only mine
I want to cry and scream and yell
I want to make my suffering known
But, I am scared, scared to express myself
I am scared to tell others how I feel
I am scared to reach out and find no help
What if I get shunned once again?
What if I do not get a response?
What if no one hears me?
Then I will be left alone
Once again

I will not be able to bear the pain once again
There was a time when I needed his care and support
There was a time when I needed his encouragement
There was a time when I needed him standing by me
I tried to reach out to him numerous times
But he was not there for me
I tried to reach out to him endlessly
But he was not there for me
I cried and craved and longed for him
But he was not there for me
And so I suffered in silence
Because there was no one else who was there for me

Even today after many years I am still silent
Even today after many years I am still suffering
Even today after many years I am still scared
I am scared to express myself
I am scared to acknowledge my love for him
I am scared to face the rejection
I am scared to find out the truth
And so, I suffer in silence
As it is only mine

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Badla
(For Mrs. Msk's FF - Shetan Ka Ghar)

Badle ki aag me jal raha hai woh,
Nahin usko koi bhi ehsaas
Na din na raat ki fikar
Bas ek hi mukaam pe puchne ki zidd
Badla, badla aur sirf Badla.
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Posted: 14 years ago
r for rated "r" 😆

i'll read u'r work later abhi i'm too sleepy. 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
YIPPIE

I am a ROCKERZ with this post.

Balle balle to myself.

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(For Muskaan's FF - Dhundale Aks)

Am I falling for you?
Or have I already fallen for you?
Your talks and your actions
Your possessiveness and your demands
Your anger and your authority
Your hugs and your kisses
Am I falling for you?
Or have I already fallen for you?

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Originally posted by: Newdime




Haila...u flew away...how do i catch u now...😲

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Geet's Dhundale Pov:

My heart beats for you only

Every moment, every hour and every day

From dawn to dusk

Heart to heart

And soul to soul


I long to be with you in your arms

I long to see my self in your eyes

I long to hold my hand in yours

Every moment, every hour and every day

From dawn to dusk

Heart to heart

And soul to soul


I wish you felt the same for me

I wish for your heart to beat for me

I want you to call me yours

I want you to hold me in your arms

I want you all for myself

Because I am yours and only yours


Alas, it can only be a wish

Because your heart beats for someone else

Who is a close friend of mine

I cannot bear to see you in your sorrow

How I wish, I can take away your pain

Soothe your heart

And calm you down


But, how can I?

When your heart beats for someone else

Who is a close friend of mine

I still wish you were mine

Only mine

Every moment, every hour and every day

From dawn to dusk

Heart to heart

And soul to soul

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