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Posted: 12 years ago

Ek Khubsoorat Si Yeh Zinadagi

(Rakhi's FF - Bouganvilla)

Ek khoobsurat si yeh zindagi
Aur usme mere sajaye khawab
Jisme sirf mein aur sirf tum
Ek din hojaye 'Hum'

Jabse tujhe jaana hai
Sirf tujhe hi maana hai
Jabse tujhe jaana hai
Dil tera hi deewana hai
Na jaanu mein ki yeh mohabbat hui kabse
Dil ne kar dala mujhe majboor tabse
Tujhe paane ki yeh chaahat
Tujme basne ke yeh meri khawaish
Karvati hai mujhse hamesha intezaar

Lekin na jaanu mein tere dil ka haal
Na hi bata paau mein mere dil ki baat
Bas to aake bataja mujhe ek baar
Tu tere dil ka haal
Ek hi khawish hai yeh meri

Tujhe paane ki yeh chaahat
Jisme sirf min aur sirf tum
Aur Ek khoobsurat si yeh zindagi
Ek din ho jaye mein aur tum 'hum'
Edited by Water. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dhamigeet

hi,

love ur writing skills
great work
 
godbless
pls pm  ur new posts
 
love tc
dhamigeet
 
 


Thank u.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gorgeous work yaar.. i dunno why i missed this thread n for so long!
 
Excellent..!! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Our the most recent one is really janu. The khwahish of hum one. Really cute. I think I've always read ur work in English. It's amazing that u r equally equipped to deliver such finess in both the languages.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Our the most recent one is really janu. The khwahish of hum one. Really cute. I think I've always read ur work in English. It's amazing that u r equally equipped to deliver such finess in both the languages.


Thank you darling.

Hugs ðŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
The Moment
(Tellyme's FF - Her Complete Submission)
 
The Moment!
The moment had arrived
As it would have eventually come
It arrived without a knock on the front door of his heart
It arrived without a notification or a messenger
It arrived so suddenly that he could not fathom its changes
But it had arrived
The moment had arrived.
 
It arrived
Screaming to emerge from his heart and his soul
Bringing along the subtle changes in his heart
Taking him by surprise completely
As far as he could remember
It was just yesterday, when he shined in his ego and arrogance
While today brought the restlessness, the fear and the possible separation

Fate had finally arrived at this doorstop
Making him realize her importance and her value in his life
Realization that he was nothing without her
His life did not exist without her
How much he missed her
How much he craved for her
Only he knew how he felt
Alone and helpless without her

But was this realization enough?
Was this understanding enough?
Unfortunately it was not enough
Because the moment had arrived!
For him to feel the pain
The pain that he bestowed upon her
The pain that her innocent self suffered for all this years
His tantrums and her silence
His humiliation and her love
His anger and her submissiveness
His rejection and her acceptance
It was always his ego in front of her self-less love
It was always his arrogance in front of her humble silence
And so today the moment had arrived
For him to suffer, silently in the repentance  of his deeds!

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Silent Suffering

(Rakhi's FF - Bouganvilla)

I suffer in my silence
As it is only mine
I want to cry and scream and yell
I want to make my suffering known
But, I am scared, scared to express myself
I am scared to tell others how I feel
I am scared to reach out and find no help
What if I get shunned once again?
What if I do not get a response?
What if no one hears me?
Then I will be left alone
Once again

I will not be able to bear the pain once again
There was a time when I needed his care and support
There was a time when I needed his encouragement
There was a time when I needed him standing by me
I tried to reach out to him numerous times
But he was not there for me
I tried to reach out to him endlessly
But he was not there for me
I cried and craved and longed for him
But he was not there for me
And so I suffered in silence
Because there was no one else who was there for me

Even today after many years I am still silent 
Even today after many years I am still suffering
Even today after many years I am still scared
I am scared to express myself
I am scared to acknowledge my love for him
I am scared to face the rejection
I am scared to find out the truth
And so, I suffer in silence
As it is only mine

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Posted: 12 years ago
Badla
(For Mrs. Msk's FF - Shetan Ka Ghar)

Badle ki aag me jal raha hai woh, 
Nahin usko koi bhi ehsaas
Na din na raat ki fikar
Bas ek hi mukaam pe puchne ki zidd
Badla, badla aur sirf Badla.
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Posted: 12 years ago
r for rated "r" ðŸ˜†

i'll read u'r work later abhi i'm too sleepy. ðŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
YIPPIE

I am a ROCKERZ with this post.

Balle balle to myself.

Edited by Water. - 12 years ago