a fan fic

I am so scared that you will like my fan fic or not

1 part

A:hurry up bhavri we are getting late and i have to attend a meeting

B:i am coming arjun

and they go to the temple.

Manasvi is walking in her room and thinking that i cannot marry with suraj because i am only of satya

Suraj is in his room and thinking that i love u manasvi but why u donot know

Mansin get angry at yuv that why he has join khandelwal company and why he report the FIR in police statin and broke his relationship to him and this create big change in his life and he donot talk to anyone and specially he donot say anything to bhoomi

If u donot like this fan fic then i will not write anymore

MEHAK

good... continue soon... 👏 👏
n rit more in the next post... okie 😉

2 part
arjun gets angry to see bhoomi and suraj talking to each other
he asks bhoomi that come to my room
a:bhoomi mujhe acha nahin lagta ke tum suraj se itni gul mil kar batein karo
b:(ignores her talking about saraj)arjun main chahti hon ke suraj ji or manasvi bahbi ki shaadi ho jai
a:bhoomi tumhe pata hai ke main suraj se kitni nafrat karta hon aur tum kah rahi ho keh manasvi bahbi or suraj ki shaadi ho jaye.
b:han arjun main keh rahi hon
a:main yeh kabhi nahin hone don ga.
Arjun leaves in anger and bhavri is upset
Bhavri goes to baisa
b:arjun yeh baat kabhi nahin mane ga
baisa:bhoomi pehle hame manasvi ko is baat ke liye razi karna hai
b:baisa agar ap manasvi babi se kahin gi to woh man jain gi
baisa:main manasvi se baat karon gi.
manasvi is sitting on bed and she is thinking about satya when baisa come and talk to her about suraj she is quite.
b:main yeh chahti hon ke tumhari or suraj ki shaadi ho jai tumhari kya marzi hai manasvi
she is quite and say yes baisa goes happily
baisa goes to bhoomi and tells her that manasvi says yes and she gets very happy.
arjun comes to the room and he is still very angry bhoomi is already in the room
b:manasvi babhi ne han kar di hai arjun.
a:kya

Yeah nice 😊 😊 fic please continue.

continu .. continu...
saarthi na sahi.. tum to s-m ki shadi jaldi se kara do... 😊 😛 😛

wow that was such a brilliant fan-fic 👏 cant wait 4 the next part....and arjun's reaction..plz continue 😊

good one mako keep up the good spirit ! 😉 😉

cheers,
sidra
😃

good work Mako keep it up.

last part
a:tumhe pata hai ke tum kya keh rahi ho bhavri
b:han arjun main sahi keh rahi hon ke manasvi babhi ne suraj ji se shaadi karne ke liye han kar di hai
a:nahin yeh kabhi nahin ho sakta mein suraj se buhut nafrat karta hon or yeh baat tumhe bi pata hai
b:arjun suraj tumhara bhai or tum keh rahe ho ke tum suraj ji se nafrat karte ho
a:han main yehi keh raha hon or main manasvi babhi or suraj ki kabhi shaadi nahin karne don ga
b:arjun plz plz dekho manasvi babhi ne shaadi ke liye han kar di hai or tum bi han kar do
a:main manasvi bahbi ko kabhi aisa nahin karne don ga
b:arjun mere liye han kar do.suraj ji aik buhut ache insaan hain tum suraj ji se aik bar baat kar lo phir tumhe pata chal jai ga ke kitne ache suraj ji hain or sab se bari baat yeh hai ke woh manasvi babhi se pyar karte hain plz arjun mere liye plz
Arjun is thinking that always he was not good to suraj and suraj was always good to him
and arjun say yes bhavri is very happy and she to baisa that arjun say yes
Baisa goes to mansin and tell this to mansin he say yes
After 6 Months
khushi says to manasvi where is my lunch box she say it is on the table then suraj come and say to khushi hurry up u r getting late for college.suraj drops khushi at school and go to the office.all the friends of khushi says how sweet is your uncle khushi say stupid he is not my uncle he is my father 😊
Mehak
hope u like my fan fic

great!!!! it was lovely... y did u end it? u shud have continued. it was sooooooo nice 😭 😭 pls write more!!!