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Posted: 19 years ago
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i am sorry arjun & bhavri fan
i have no idea in which i write more and thanx very much that all of u like my fan fic 😊 😊 😊
and i am very happy that u like my first fan fic thanx once again
Mehak
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
nice part mako 😊

plzzzzzz write more
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
whoa...
nice sweet ff yaar... 👏 👏 👏 [=D]
DO WRITE MORE MORE MORE
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14

ok i write more
all the friends of khushi say that first u say that he is your uncle and now u r saying that he is your father.i am right than the bell rang and every one go to the class
then suraj came to pick khushi and khushi sits on car and then they reach the house.
Manasvi is sitting on the chair while suraj and say that today we do our lunch in a resturant get ready manasvi.kushi is very happy that suraj becames his father.then they go to the resturant.manasvi is looking very happy after the lunch they go to the park and manasvi say:i could not imagine ke ham phir se mil gaye hain
s:manasvi main tum se buhut pyar karta hon dekha mere pyar ki waja se ham dobara mil gaye hain
m:han suraj
khushi is playing here and there and looks very happy.
and both suraj and manasvi knows her happiness

They came to the home manasvi aand khushi go in their room while suraj go to the room of arjun

arjun mujhe pata hai ke tum muj se buhut nafratkarte ho lakin tum ne mujhe aik bar bhi apna samaj kar nahin dekha

a:nain suraj main galat tha mujhe maf kart do suraj

Mehak

Edited by mako - 19 years ago
tunna thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
whoa...
still not satisfied..
more more more 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
mako yaar we want more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉
..priya.. thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
its really 👏 👏 nice but write more na.............. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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s:nahin arjun tum apne bhaise mafi mang rahe ho arjun mujhe pata hai ke tum dil ke ache ho aur mujse nafrat sirf is waja se karte the ke pehle maine tumhare ath acha nahin kyatha.arjun pehle mujhe nahin pata tha ke tum mere bhai ho lakin jab mujhe pata chala to maine tumhare sath hamesha acha karne ka socha tha lakin tum mujse itni nafrat karte the ke tum ne aik bar bhi nahin socha ke main tumhara bhai hon aur galti to insaan se hi hoti hai agar maine aik galti kar di to mujhe maf kar dete arjun.arjun plz mujhe maf kar do
a:suraj tum thik hi kahte ho ke galti insaan se hi hoti hai aur maine hameshatumhare bare main bura socha.i am sorry suraj
s:its ok arjun tanks god ke hame mila diya
and then boh suraj and arjun leaves the room.manasvi is sitting on the bed and khushi is playing
s:manasvi arjun ne mujse sorry ki hai.
manasvi is shocked
m:kya kya keh rahe ho suraj arjun ne tumse sorry ki hai.
s:han manasvi main aj buhut khush khon kyunki arjun ne mujhe apna bhai man liya
manasvi smile kyunki manasvi ko yeh nahin pata tha ke yeh din to buhut khushi ke hain lajin agle din............?
Mehak
hope u all like this part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice mehak 👏
but write moreeeeeeee 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
nice mehak 👏
but write moreeeeeeee 😃

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