maneet ff:do i know u?(chapter 3 pg 7)

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srija

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Posted: 13 years ago

PROLOGUE

i was standing by the window enjoying the light breeze on my curls.i stared at the lonely street in dat isolated area where i live.wel ya living alone is pretty much difficult bt i hav adapted myself to it.

Suddenly a car rushed down the street.i cld see dat the car had lost its control.it was nt steady.it lost balance completely n crashed down near a tree.i rushed down the street nd shouted 4 help bt who wld hear me in dat isolated place.i decided 2 go nd check it myself.i steeped 2wards the car.smoke was ozzing out of the engine nearly chocking me down.i struggled with the smoke nd reached the driver's seat.i cld see blood dripping down the steering wheel.he was hurt very badly.i got him out of the car nd laid him down on the ground as i was nt abke to carry him all the way towards my house.i pulled away frm the car b4 it blasted completely leaving the ruins.

I rushed 2wards my house nd grabbed the 1st aid box.since dat area lacked hospitals nd doctors,i had learned some 1st aid tips.i cleaned the wound nd stiched it carefully.he was still unconscious.i just stared at him hoping 4 him 2 gain consciousness n waiting 4 help to come.i felt so pathetic nt being able to help when som1 was in more pathetic condition than me.

guys its maneet ff.i just had a concept nd thought of posting it.hope u like it.do tel me if i sld continue.
With love
srija.

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Posted: 13 years ago

INDEX

1.who m I??
2.wat did u call me??
3.where were u??

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srija

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shah10
Interesting ..
do continue plz
thx

thanks yar.yipee i rcvd a comment.i thought nobody was going 2 read it

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Dazlingdivya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice start, plz continue soon...

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srija

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dazlingdivya
Nice start, plz continue soon...

thanks dear.wil update tonight.

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Durga

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice concept dear ..do update soon ...pm me too..

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srija

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk-1
nice concept dear ..do update soon ...pm me too..

thanks.wil be updating tonight n wil pm u 4 sure

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srija

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Posted: 13 years ago

chapter 1-who m i??

MAAN
do u know how it feels to smile wen u r abt 2 cry.
Do u know how it feels to hope wen u r abt 2 die.
I slowly opened my eyes wen a melodious tune beat my eardrums.my head was heavy.it felt as if i was carrying a gr8 boulder on my head.i tried 2 get up bt had 2 collapse again due 2 severe pain on my back nd legs.the sweet melodious voice continued to hum the tune.
dat is wat always happens 2 me.
I am captivated wen m abt to flee.
I can do nothing bt just wait nd see.
Each nd every word of dat song expressed gr8 misery nd sorrow.the words had pain in it and i cld feel it thru the voice.i closed my eyes drowning myself in the tune.
Do u know how it feels 2 break wen u r abt 2 join.
Do u know how its feels 2 loose wen u r abt 2 gain.
Dat is wat always happens 2 me.
Sadness hover around me,no moments of glee.
I can do nothing bt just wait nd see.
I cld hear the footsteps in the room next to me.dat voice travelled along with the steps.i slowly opened my eyes to look around the place i was in nd the 1st word dat came in my mind was 'gosh'.the room was very small wid one cupboard attached to the wall,one table wid a lamp in it,1 chair-a very old nd antiquated.heavy dark brown jute curtains hanged by the window.every thing in the room was old n every corner of the room reflected the simplicity.wel the room was nt dirty-i must say the person who maintained the house was a gem.the room was clean nd spotless bt the decoration was nt of my taste.i was nt able to leave dat house instantly as i was in severe pain.
Do u know how it feels to fall wen u r abt 2 rise.
Do u know how it feels 2 fail wen u r bold nd wise.
I closed my eyes nd concentrated on the song 2 distract myself 4rm the pain.
[I]dat is wat always happens 2 me.
Its me who sld go down the knee.
I can do nothing but just wait nd see.[/]
that was reli a sad song nd heart touching nd that voice cld even touch the soul.i felt som1 approaching me.
"r u awake?"
i heard the same voice calling me.i opened my eyes nd found a beautiful woman looking at me with concern filled hazel eyes.those eyes had depth in it nd suffering too.being a gud observer i cld read her eyes.
"ya i woke up just a while ago"

GEET
i sighed with relief.finally he was awake after 2 days of unconsciousness.his deep nd rich voice indicated dat he was a well-educated person nd da way he had dressed i cld tel he was a very rich person.
I saw him wincing in pain nd frowning nd closing his eyes wen the pain was more dan he cld hold.
"plz dnt try 2 get up,the more u move the more it'll hurt u.stay still."
"bt i need 2 go to bathroom."
i laughed at myself.how silly i was.of course he need 2 get up nd there was no way i cld help him.
"ok let me hold u..ya slowly..."
"ouch..."
"i told u...carefully,slowly ya...grab my hands.."
it felt so weird supporting him nd taking care of him.i had never taken care of any1 since i had lived alone as long as i know bt it felt gud 2 help som1 in need.

I helped him 2 climb on the bed.i pulled the pillow nd adjusted it such a way dat he cld support his back nd sit on the bed.it was time 4 me 2 change the cotton on his head nd clean the wound.
"let me clean ur wound".

MAAN
She helped me wid everything-walking,sitting.when i winced wid pain c went easy on the wound while dressing my head.i was damn hungry nd my stomach was growling.c heard it n smiled which reli embarrased me.
"sorry i 4got.u must be hungry na."
c entered the room wid a tray of food nd placed it infront of me.i looked at the food-a kind of soup,rice,roti n others i cldnt even identify.at first i hesitated to eat as i had never ever tasted dat kind of meal.since i didnt want 2 hurt her feelings i decided 2 giv it a try.i tried 2 eat bt my fractured hand didnt let me.i looked up at her.c understood my condition so c took a spoonful of soup n fed me.
"ummm...its delicious."
her rosy lips curled on a slight smile when c heard me saying it was delicious.i didnt say it just 2 flatter her.wat i said was true.it was indeed delicious.i finished all the food in the tray while c fed me patiently.
"thank u"
"my pleasure so u take rest now"
"ok Btw how come m here n wounded"
"ur car crashed infront of my house 2 days ago.u were unconscious 4 2 days."
"thanks a lot 4 saving me.u live alone here rt?wats ur name?"
"my name is geet handa.u can call me geet nd u?"

her question was an obvious one but dat left me in confusion.c asked me abt my identity bt i myself wasnt sure abt it.i tried hard 2 recall my name,my identity bt in vain.i knew my likes n dislikes,i cld recall dem bt nt my name,my home,my parents,my identity.i looked at her nd found her waiting 4 my answer bt i dropped my gaze in defeat nt being able 2 answer dat simple nd obvious question.
"i cant remember.who m i???"

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chapter 1 completed.i know its short bt i wil be updating short chapters daily.hope u guys like it.
Xoxo
srija.

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sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

Superb update srija,
loved it
awww. . Geet taking care of maan.. Cho chweet !
OMG! Maan doesnt remember his identity. . Poor guy!
Waiting to know more abt maan n geet's life !
Thanx 4 d pm
continue soon
tc

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

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amazing update.

love it.

thx for the pm.

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