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Posted: 13 years ago
be strong... in a cricket match there are people in the field who try to get the batsman lose his wicket, by targetting his/her weak point... DO NOT SHOW UR WEAKNESS... TRY TO REMOVE IT... BE OPEN TO UR ELDERS WHO CARE FOR U (INCLUDES TEACHERS)... AND IF IT GOES TOO FAR TO BREAK THE UNBEARABLE THEN THE NEXT STEP SHOULD BE TAKEN BY THE ELDERS U HAVE CONFIDED INTO...
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Posted: 13 years ago
dont worry dear, this is a part of life... some of them who are gud for nothing and are jealous indulge in these things...dont worry and be strong...write when you feel better 😊
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u left on last eid and nxt eid is about to come...i didn't find u in all the time inbetween😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
when is the update 😭😭😭
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miss u very much...

pl come back...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 22

'geet sat against the pillow, her bangles creating a soft melody at her every move. Where was he? She heard foot steps , she quickly straightened and sat in proper bridal style. The door opened and he entered, she watched his boots and then quickly looked away. She was expecting himt o start yelling at her but today he was quiet. She listened to his moving about with held breath and then, he threw a bottle at the wall and she heard the pieces of glass fell on floor. her heart started beating fast, she clenched her hands into fist. He threw himself at the bed, scared she tried to move back but his hands grabbed her ankle and pulled her forward, she tried to resist but he was physically more strong'..''

''Ma'm please wake up'', someone said loudly, shaking her.

Geet suddenly woke up with a loud shriek. The maid startled moved back. They both stared at each other. Geet whose body was soaked with sweat asked,'' get me some water.''

The maid nodded and quickly went outside. Geet pulled off the blanket and sat up, her heart still beating like a loud drum. This was the second time, she was having this nightmare. Who was he? She could still feel his hand around her ankle.

The maid came back with water. Geet took the glass from her and greedily drank water.

Maid,''ma'm your mother has gone to see Mr. kashab at hospital, she asked to wake you up around noon and have something for break fast as you didn't eat anything at dinner.

Geet pulled herself into present wrenching her from that terrifying nightmare. ''okay, you can go now.''

Maid,''I will set the table.''

Geet ignored her and went to wash room to have a cold shower. Under the water, she tried to convince herself, I t had been a dream, just a dream.

'''''''''''''''''''Later'''''''''''''''

Maan leaned against the car seat, waiting patiently for geet.

Geet came out of the hospital wearing blue jeans with a white top, her hairs pile dup on her head and glasses on her eyes. She seemed to be deep in thought and didn't notice maan. Maan pressed the car horn, geet who was about to get into car looked up and saw his car. A smile spread across her face. She ordered the driver to go back home and quickly moved toward maan' s car.

Maan got out of his car and gave her an answering smile. Then, he opened thecar door for her, geet slid into the seat and maan closed the door. Then, he moved around the car slid into the driving seat. He turned on the car engine and within seconds they were moving outside the hospital.

Geet,'' why didn't you came in to see uncle kashab? ''

Maan,'' How is he now?''

Geet,'' he is feeling much better. He will be discharged tomorrow. Most of his bruises have faded, they were keeping him because of his head injury but all the reports are clear.''

Maan,'' that's great news. Did police found anything about the culprit.''

Geet,'' no, nobody saw anything and there haven't been any other evidence but uncle kashab isn't worried. He is such a nice guy, I wonder why would anyone try to hurt him.''

Maan,''yeah, I wonder.''

Geet hearing the sarcastic edge to his tone looked at him sharply. ''maan?''

Maan,'' nothing, I just feel left out. I mean last two weeks, its been uncle kashab this and uncle kashab that, I know you care for him but I wish I could abduct you.''

Geet,'' excuse me?''

Maan laughed,'' just kidding.''

Geet,'' he is my uncle, you should have a bit more positive attitude especially since your intentions toward me. You should be trying to win over the heart of my family.''

Maan,''My intentions?''

Geet ,'' I thought'well''' she became quiet. Yes, there have never been actual words but all those unsaid words, the eye speaking. He said, they were close friends but what if that was it, just a friendship but friends don't kiss friends like that but there haven't been any other kisses.

Maan noticed her silence and gently took her hand into his left one. He pressed it lightly. He parked the car into his garage and turn off the car engine. Then, he took off her glasses. Troubled hazel eyes met his dark ones. He put her glasses on dash board and with his free hand cupped her right cheek.

''I was just teasing. You are my world and I always want to see you happy and as for my intentions, well you are already mine and always will be mine. I don't need to prove it but if you need it we can get married.'' He stopped himself from saying ''again''. ''I know you love your mother and uncle but I would hate to think that they can come between us, I want you to accept that we belong to each other even if either of our families don't want it.''

Geet,'' your family''

Maan's thumb lightly grazed her cheek '' don't worry dadi ma has already accepted you as my wife.''

Geet looked at him with her big eyes,'' have I met her?''

Maan smiled, his gaze touching her lips and then flicking toward her eyes, dark storm of need seemed to be gathering in his eyes, geet took a deep breath.'' Yes.''

Geet didn't know whether it was answer to her vocal question or to confirm the one in his own eyes.

A lazy grin spread on maan's face,'' Indian or Italian?''

Geet,''what?''

maan,''food, do you want Indian or Italian?''

geet ,''agh Italian, you like it na.'' then, she stared at him confused.

Maan smiled,'' don't worry little one, every thing will come back slowly. Just don't stress yourself.'' He quickly bent and kissed her on forehead. Then, got outside the car and then, moving quickly opened her door. He offered his hand, geet grabbed his hand and got outside. Maan grabbing his hand took her inside.

'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''.

Geet sat snugly on the cushion with maan his head on her tummy laid on the carpet, both of them watching ''king's speech''. Geet felt tears brimming in her eyes at the guys inability to express himself properly. Then, she felt fingers slowly moving on her tummy and she jerked away giggling, maan stop you know I am ticklish.

Maan lurched after her tackling her to ground,'' then, stop crying in my presence. If you cry then I have to do something to stop this.''

Geet ,''okay, okay I won't cry but maan had her flat on the floor and him holding her down. Geet tried to tickle him but he grabbed geet' s both wrists in one hand and then, with other hand raised her top baring her smooth stomach to him. He started tickling her. Geet tried to move away, tears of laughter leaking out of her eyes. Finally,she managed to free her wrists by kissing him on his lips, maan became distracted, geet took the opportunity to slid free but maan grabbed her by ankle and pulled her toward him. Suddenly, the nightmare and reality merged and geet gave a loud shriek.

Maan let go of her quickly,'' geet''?

A/N hi guys, thanks for your support during this hard phase of my life. i tried to pen down this part as best as i could. i have completely forgotten the plot, so i had to think of a new one, so may be it will seem a bit different to you guys.


Edited by Ashleydevlin - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
finallyyy
love u ash11
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awww..dont worrry hun..it was totally awesome..ur style..
the past scars sre showing thru..lets see how maan will haldle them...waiting to see a guilty maan😆😆
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
happy to see your update... lovely it was... continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it!!
happy to see u back

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