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Posted: 13 years ago
This was just a beautiful update
I mean, one of the most beautiful I have ever read anywhere!!
Mind blowing song, great choice of the album, one of my favs

Do pm me..I love the whole story line⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally done...great FF!! Continue SOOON!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
arhi in a cottage with such a beautiful weather & snow around
how romantic
cont soon
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That was an awesommeee update 😃
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gosh u killed me...too good darling...😃. 👏
One of the best reads...in this forum😃
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Previous Chapter 12
Hello Guys! So I know most of you will be really angry about how short this update is but this isn't the complete chapter, I was going to write more and post it all together but then I realised that it might take me a while and I didn't want to keep all of you waiting for long. Plus it's an Eid present from me to you. Eid Mubarak everyone !
Anyone wanting a PM please BUDDY me, pleasant reading !

This was the song I was listening to when I wrote it, have a listen if you want as you read.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uUipd0eA4bw[/YOUTUBE]

"You win" she whispered lightly.

He watched her lips move, angel like against the snow, damp hair sprawled beneath her and he felt himself being drawn in. He forgot about their circumstances, he forgot what had got them there, all they had been through, all that was still between them, all the hate, the confusion, the misunderstandings, he forgot everything as he leaned in towards her and pressed his lips against hers.

They lay in the cold, white snow, lips pressed against eachothers. Khushi had gasped and closed her eyes from the shock of his touch and she lay still, shivering slightly from the cold and clutching at the snow beneath her as he brought his hand up to cup her face. Her hands were freezing and they felt almost painful at her sides.
Her lips felt soft as his felt warm.

Snowflakes landed on her face, melting against her warmer skin and running down her face. He felt her breathing heavily beneath him, the life within her causing her chest to rise up and down, his hand had found its way to her hair where it was entangled in its silkiness.

The moment was bliss.

Arnav had never thought that kissing someone could be this wonderful. He had never wanted someone so badly before in his life. He kept his lips locked with hers, holding his weight up slightly on his elbow so as to not crush her as she slowly raised her hands to put one around his neck and bury the other in his hair, pulling at it lightly, and ruffling up his usually neat hairstyle, his touch was taking over her.

The cool touch of her fingers against his neck drove him crazy as he started to kiss her more intensely, needing her, as though the ground beneath them would give away if he let go.

When she felt like she could not breathe anymore she felt his lips let go of hers and she almost whimpered, craving for him to touch her like that again. Cautiously and slowly, she opened her eyes to see that Arnav was still only a few centimetres away from her, eyes closed, breathing heavily so she could feel his warmth on her cheeks. His jaw was clenched and he slowly brought his head down so that his forehead was now resting on hers, shivering at the cool touch of her skin against his as the storm around them pushed on.

It took all his self control to not kiss her again, but he stopped himself. Khushi saw that her hands were around his neck and in his hair so she slowly let them drop back down to her sides into the snow, her cheeks growing a rosy shade of pink from both the cold and embarrassment. The loss of her touch caused Arnavs eyes to flow open.

She was looking at him, so innocent and beautiful, with eyes wide open.

"Khushi" he said, amazed at his own ability to speak through the wild mix of emotions that were running through his body.

"Ji" she breathed, after a long pause.

He closed his eyes, with his forehead still leaning against hers. What did you say after a moment like that? He was still breathless and fighting against the urge to touch her again.

"Are you cold?" he asked, with his lips brushing against hers as he spoke.

"Huh?" Khushi managed, glancing around to remember where she had been. Her eyes fluttered as some of the snow from the storm threatened to fall in her eyes. She felt then the wetness beneath her as she lay in the snow which had drenched her dress.

"I think so"

"You think you're cold? Don't you think you could make a decision?"

It amazed her that he still had it in him to say something rude, after what they had just experienced. But there was something very different about his tone this time, it was kind.

"Aaah..cho" she softly sneezed, the tip of her cold nose still in contact with Arnavs. He opened his eyes again and slowly lifted himself off of her, hating the loss of contact and sitting up in the snow, looking lost in thought before standing up slowly and walking back to the car to grab his phone charger.

Khushi didn't move as he left, sneezing again in the few seconds after he had gone. Wait a minute, did he just kiss her and walk away? Her legs felt non existant, she wanted to get up and go into the cottage because she was freezing down to her bones, but she couldn't move. So she just lay in the snow, staring up at the sky that was pouring down on her softly.

This man was going to drive her crazy.

Little did she know that less than a hundred meters away, Arnav stood, leaning with his arms on the hood of his car to support his weight. Trying to control his breathing, he gulped in for air, struggling to take it in as he could almost feel his legs turning to jelly. He wanted to run back to her and kiss her senseless, and he found holding back the hardest thing in the world.

This woman was going to drive him crazy.

Hey everyone :) I hope that was allright to read, I'm not exactly very good at writing scenes like this, esp because I'm not sure how Arnav and Khushi would react in a situation like this, but I gave it my best. Please do leave likes and comments, they motivate me lots :) xx Hayls
Edited by ccuteaangel - 13 years ago
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omg Haley!! Im actually running so behind this weekend! Have 33 pms to to read through! AHHH!!

but let me say Im first!! Yayay!!

2nd, What a great update!! Tht wuz just amazing! I loved how you described it! magically!! Oo!! Now I want a midnight kiss under the mistletoe!

ugh hate Justin Bieber lol. anyway
Great update!! Keep it up! n in case you needed to know, I want your pms plz😉
Edited by AquaBluez17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was magical!☺️
wonder if that kiss had happen during the pool scene..ooh man i wish it did😍
a wonderful update dear...please do continue and don't forget to pm me😃x xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Simply Beautiful,update soon,Much Appreciated👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hayley!!
Fab update.
I had missed out on chapter 12. I didn't get a PM for it. Never mind though...I'm up to date now...😊
Both chapters were great to read.
Beautifully written dear. The cold temperature and warmth of Arnav and Khushi were a fab combo!!
Looking forward to the next part.
Thanks for the PM for this part!!
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