short story from me...part 2 on pg 2

😛Hello everyone...,, heyy after watching todays episode im going bonkers....😉..well just when i was taking shower... this scene came up to my mind.. soo just letting u know guys what i thought abt..😃..

its a short story.. from my side for today...😳

So Bani is dressed in balck... ( really looking gorgeous...I always made her wear black saree in my fanfics.., and here she already did ..😛) and opens the door... she is shocked and says " ji aap?" .... and the person in front of her says "haan ".. well the camera shows him and its none otherr than our Mr. walia... 😉.

Bani is still not knowing why JAi came home.. he smiles to her and says chale... bani just gives a smile.. they go ahead to the car and jai opens the door for bani. Jai then goes and sits and starts driving the car.. Bani is still nervous and not knowing what to talk. Jai looks at her smiles and says" tum pareshan ho naa ki mei aya hoon.. wasie mera driver nahi tumhara driver aaya tmhe pick karne ke liye".. Bani is literally shocked out of her wits and staring at jai with an open mouth. Jai then says " tu pareshan kyun lag rahi hei.., koi problem".. Bani tries to get grip of her voice and says " Woh... mei bahut dino se office nahi gayi naa.." jai says " toh kya huva"..bani continues" mei ne mt.abu project ke baare mei padha nahi.. aur aap mujhse wahi discuss karna chahte the naa...aur waha jane se pehle hi mei aapo bata dena chathi hoon kal thak time dejiye..mei apna kaam complete kardoongi".. Jai suddenly stops the car and keeps staring at her with a mischevious smile on his face.. He then laughs and says " bani tum bilkul innocent hoo aur tum us mt. abu project ke baare mei baat karna chahti hei.., hum pehle chalte hei... iske baare mein baad mei baat karte hei..he then starts the car and keeps looking at bani every 5 seconds.. Bani is sitting like a silent lamb.. ( looking gorgeous ...😛).

On their way still and jai looks at bani and asks " hum kis restaurant mei chalte hei"Bani smiles and says" aap jaha jaana chate hei waha ".. Jai then goes and stops in front of the restaurant, he looks at bani and says " ek minute tum ruko". bani just gives a nod. Jai gets out of the car and goes and opens the door for his wife.. Bani is totally paralysed out of shock she is getting one after the other... ( of course anyone in her situaton will be shocked to hell)..

Jai and Bani eneter the restaurant.. it is totally dark and bani not understanding anything.. she says " Mr. walia yaha toh pura andhera hei".. jai just forwards his hand and asks her to come with him.. bani puts her hand on his and jai holds her and takes her inside.. after they go a little further.. suddenly the lights come up.. and bani looks around and is surprised.. the whole restaurant there are no tables and chairs except one table with two chairs which is decorated beautiully... and there are heart pink, red balloons all around.. and she just looks at Jai with a question.. and Jai says " yeh shaam tumhare naam.. for my dear and beautiful wife..".. Bani is not able t believe her eyes..

Okie and they have candle light dinner.. and jai is eating less and looking at bani.. on the other side bani is feeling soo consious and not able to even eat a little bit..

and then bani looks up at jai and says " aap mujhe kuch baat karna chahte the naa...".. jai says ".. wohh.. mei actually bahut dino se tumse kehna chahta tha .., aaj baht mushkil se himmat juta paya hoon.., and he takes out a box from his pocket and opens it and puts it in front of bani.. its a diamond ring and bani looks at jai ... and at the ring... Jai smiles and gets up from the chair and goes onto the side of bani and sits on his knees and says " bani will u be my wife... and bani is blushing and not able to beleive what she is hearing...

She gets up and also jai.. now both are facing each other.. and jai says " I LUV U BANI "... and bani's eyes r filled with tears..

to be continued....

luv,

savi

I wish that really happen tommorrow - Come one MT give us some more clue

Aww...that's so cute Savi! 👏 👏 Do continue! 😃

amMazing..rocking man..great idea..so sweet..warms your heart, makes you smile, and in fact makes you want to fall in luv! 😃 😳 ..so nice..

I also hope that it's Jai😃

oh btw..i was thinking..they should've made bani wear a black sari, with red sequins and embroidery work..would look gorgeous na..

yep, that was really good! I have been reading a lot of what savi has been writing and I must say I admire the writing style and the creativity. Good job!! Savi, you have a great fleir for story writing and I hope you will think seriously about writing as a career (or a second career!!).

Wow, I hope that actually happens....u shud take over Kasam Se's scriptwriting!!! 👏 From the bottom of my heart, that was a great scene & I hope it comes true 😊

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW... u huyz shld lik hear me yellin ryt now... that was SOO cute... im lik AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW while reading lik ugh i hab no words

SPEChless... Cant wait fer the next part .... 👏

wowww really good..I loved it..please continue.. 😊