*Updated* FF: Pyaar, Ishq aur Mohabbat (Page 54)

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sarini

@zara990

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

I'm hooked to your FF. Very beautifully written with a different concept.The story is keep getting more and more interesting. Waiting for your next update.

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navyaaddict3

@navyaaddict3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Ritchelle i think that i badly need to consult a dictionary in order to learn some more adjectives for appreciating and admiring your work. The story is so exciting . the situations are as if everything is happening or being enacted infront of my eyes. The dialogues are brilliantly written- especially that one, khud jaan de doonga- that particular line has encompassed all his love for her inspite of the fact that he is under the spell of intoxication. simply enthralling.

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@krystel21

Alumni

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

@zara- thank you dear! being 17 myself, i tried to write this story as if it were happening to people around me, and that makes it easier to write!

@Piyali- you don't need adjectives hun! your appreciation is what motivates me to come up with more chapters! i've tried to stay true to the original characters as much as i could, and thus written the dialogues! please do continue showing your support and appreciation dear! thanks a lot!

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@ScoopTroop

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Ritchelle jaan, a biiiggg 🤗
Yaar I wish u were one of the CVs yaar... What brilliant FF!👍🏼 Superb man!!!! Jaldi se next chap update karo I can't wait!!!!

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@krystel21

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

@Namrata- thank you so so much dear! it was a childhood dream of mine to write stories for hindi films and serials, but then i realised to do so, i'd have to live in india! and to be honest, i kinda don't gel there much! i go there like for 10 days every 2 years, and its kinda like a culture shock to me, all the roads, traffic, random crowds on the road...so my dream of writing was shattered! so i'm enjoying it here, putting my imagination to some use, i hope! and thanks for your appreciation dear, do stay tuned for more!

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Binu Shoba

@BinuShoba

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Nice update ritchelle..

Really likd it.. keep writing..

eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt update.. continue soon.

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priya

@anyacrazy

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Ure too gd ritchelle..dunno how to praise u yar..dont have enough words..luved the drunk anant loooads..amazing update yet agen.. Kaash tum navya ki cvs mein se ek hoti...w8ing for next update nd anyas phone convo..

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Mridula

@imnowhere

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Ritch, too good yaar. You have increased my hunger. Superb flow and perfect dialogues. I dive in so much that I forget to comment. Next chapter too looks interesting. Cannot wait for it.😉

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anyaRockz

@anyaRockz

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Hey Ritchelle, tremendous yaar !!! I just read the chapter 3 now ... While reading I was imagining the scene ...'the drunk Anant' - Wow !! our cutie pie would have acted in this scene so 'purfectly' !!!! Great going girl ... Now to 'dil mange more'😉