*Updated* FF: Pyaar, Ishq aur Mohabbat (Page 54) - Page 13

Ritchelle i think that i badly need to consult a dictionary in order to learn some more adjectives for appreciating and admiring your work. The story is so exciting . the situations are as if everything is happening or being enacted infront of my eyes. The dialogues are brilliantly written- especially that one, khud jaan de doonga- that particular line has encompassed all his love for her inspite of the fact that he is under the spell of intoxication. simply enthralling.

@zara- thank you dear! being 17 myself, i tried to write this story as if it were happening to people around me, and that makes it easier to write!

Ritchelle jaan, a biiiggg 🤗
Yaar I wish u were one of the CVs yaar... What brilliant FF!👍🏼 Superb man!!!! Jaldi se next chap update karo I can't wait!!!!

@Namrata- thank you so so much dear! it was a childhood dream of mine to write stories for hindi films and serials, but then i realised to do so, i'd have to live in india! and to be honest, i kinda don't gel there much! i go there like for 10 days every 2 years, and its kinda like a culture shock to me, all the roads, traffic, random crowds on the road...so my dream of writing was shattered! so i'm enjoying it here, putting my imagination to some use, i hope! and thanks for your appreciation dear, do stay tuned for more!

Nice update ritchelle..

Really likd it.. keep writing..

eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt update.. continue soon.

Ure too gd ritchelle..dunno how to praise u yar..dont have enough words..luved the drunk anant loooads..amazing update yet agen.. Kaash tum navya ki cvs mein se ek hoti...w8ing for next update nd anyas phone convo..

Ritch, too good yaar. You have increased my hunger. Superb flow and perfect dialogues. I dive in so much that I forget to comment. Next chapter too looks interesting. Cannot wait for it.😉

@Mridula- thank you so so much yaar! means a lot! stay tuned, next chapter sometime on tuesday!