*Updated* FF: Pyaar, Ishq aur Mohabbat (Page 54)

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Great chappter Ritch!!👏 I loved the phone convo between AnYa..How cute is Anant? "Main toh apne kamre mein baithke tumhare photos dekhna chahta tha!" Awww...😳

So trimurti are looking for an adarsh, sanskari, bahoo already..Glad that Mohan knows and will let Anant know too..

Kanpuri Tai Jee as is much as a menace in your FF as she was in the show..And I see Meeta is still in denial too..

Can't wait for AnYa to meet..Don't make us wait too long..

Keep up the wonderful work :)

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Thank you Tanu! i was wondering, after all the public demand of put up chapters, no one seemed to have read it! you trashed my fears! *hugs* well, yes, Navya and Anant are gonna meet REAL soon, in chapter 6! and since the next chapter is kinda short and boring, i'm gonna upload chapter 5 and 6 together! so stay tuned, planning to upload on wednesday!

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navyaaddict3

@navyaaddict3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Liking the progress of your story Ritchelle. Excited to know what happens in kanpur. The phone convo was extremely pleasing. Taijees dialogues and diction are so perfectly captured by you. Genuinely admiring and appreciating your endeavour.👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

@Piyali- thanks dear! one of the things i've noticed is, when i write a story, half the characters won't be the same if i don't get their diction right, which is why i'm gonna let BD, Rama, Tayeejee and Dadi have their original diction! i've anyways added a bit of english to everyone's dialogues, and that's the most i'm gonna murder the diction! thank you so much for the appreciation and the likes Piyali!

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Glistening Ritch...⭐️👏

Oh poor guy, woke up with an unbearable hangover😔...Loved to perceive Anant appalled to see the massive disparities in his and Ranbir's way of life...😃

Also adored Anya's phone convo and, all agog to see where the story steers , now, that Mohan has got a whiff of what is brewing in the Bajpayee elders' minds...🤔

Edited by Aanchal15 - 13 years ago

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shanukit007

@shanukit007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Nice Update...

Love d convo b/w Navya & Anant...

Waiting for Chapter 5 to be published...

Good work, Pls Keep it up...

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

@Aanchal- thanks dear! i wanted him to have a taste of a modern parivaar, cause sometime down the story, he's gonna rebel against all his traditions and teachings! *spoiler* next update on wednesday, around 9 30 PM your time!

@Shanukit- thank you so much dude! hope you continue to like the chapters ahead!

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

@Ritch...sending hugs your way, for the tip-off..🤗

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A_Crazy_Leo

@A_Crazy_Leo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Hey Ritchelle, once again u hv out done urself wid da new chapter.ANYA convos r just so b-u-t-ful 2 watch n ur written convo was just as b-u-t-ful 2 read n it wasn't hard 2 imagine da scenes in my mind. KUDOS GIRL👏👏👏👏.Cnt wait 4 da nxt chapters 2 b uploaded.GREAT GOING.

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@krystel21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

@Aanchal- 🤗 anytime dear!

@Betsy- thanks dear! hope you got the email i sent you earlier! i'd converted the MS word file so its compatible with all formats of MS word. hope you got it and could use it!