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.rishbala.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Maan- Arrogant and Agrassive 28 year old rich bussiness man

Geet- 17 years girl beautifull like fairy in short kisi ko bi apna deewana bna de

Meera - Geet's best friend

mohinder handa- Geet's papa he loves geet

Rano- geet 's mom

Dadi- Sweet old lady and Maan's dadi

THIS STORY IS ABOUT ZID IN LOVE

OK TELL ME SHRU KARU KYA MY ENGLISH VERY BAD TO PLZ SORRY FOR MISTAKES

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Posted: 13 years ago

interesting

but can u slightly make geet older like 21

cant wait to read more

nd good look 😊😊😊

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.rishbala.

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Posted: 13 years ago

PROLOUGE

GEET- plz leave me chodo muje muje ghar jana

MAAN- no babby tum kahin nahi jaa sakti now u r mine and u have to stay with me either u like or not.and then he smacked his lips on her.

Geet is shocked by his sudden action. she try to free herself from his grip but he is so strong. He pressing his huge body against her slim and small body.

I know guys meri do line ki prolouge ne aap ke hosh udi diye honge

but want to clear one thing i love maaneet more then my life .this is not a dark story but kuch patrs tak devil type maan ko jhelna padega

kyun jab lover thoda monster type ho aur ladki angel to romance ka maja hi kuch aur hota

muje IF KE BARE MAI JAYA PATA NAHI TO MUJE NAHI PATA KE KAISE LIKTHE HAI TO MAI HAR POST PE STORY DUGI

AND PLZ SEND ME BUDDY REQUST MAI ADD KARLUGI AUR AND I WILL UPDATE DAILY BHALE HI MUJE EK BI LIKE NA MILE KYUNKE I M CRAZY PLZ TELL ME HOW TO UPLOAD PICS

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PART- 1

HANDA HOUSE

Rano- geet utho beta tumhe college nahi jana kya, aaj tumahra pehla din hai

Geet- sone do na mama

Rano- beta late ho jayoge

geet placed her head on her lap

Geet- mama muje nahi jana muje dar lagta hai wahan bhut ladke hoge muje usne dar lagta hai

Rano (ST) kya karo mai iss ladki kab iska dar dur hoga actually galti hamari hi hai hume isse girls school mai nahi bhejna chayie tha agar yeh aise hi darti rahi to iski shadi pata nahi kaise karege

Rano- beta kyun dar rahe ho aap ladke tumhe kha nahi jayege aur vaise bi Meera hogi na tumhre saath

then Meera came there

Meera- lazy queen abi tak so rahi ho

Rano - meera beta ab tu hi sambal isse meri baat to sunti nahi then she goes from there

Meera- Geet chal jaldi kar aaj college bhut bada function hai aur mai late nahi hona chati tuje pata hai aaj hamare college mai MSK aa rahe hai

Geet- MSK kaun MSK

Meera- tuje MSK nahi pata pata geet kis duniya mai rehti hai tu MSK india ke top10 businessman mai se ek hai aur bhut hi powerfull hai vo hamare college ke trustee hai

Geet- ok per agar wahan jayada ladke hue to mai vapis aajugi aur muje to abi se dar lag raha tere iss MSK se

meera nodes her head in disblief

Meera- geet tera kya hoga

Precape- Geet and Meera in college

Maan aur geet ki mulakat😉

ok guys sorry for mistakes

help me i want upload pics

part 2- page 8

part- 3 page 10

part 4 - 14

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 13 years ago

Prologue was interesting...
Maan is devil types...

Nice start...
Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ooohhh Love The Start!!

I Lovee Devil Singh Khurana so Count Me In! Waiting Eagerly For Devil Singh Khurana 😈😆 Its Always Got To Be Beaty And The Beast Ahhaa Well Devil And A Fairy for this story 😉

Heyy If You Need Any Help You Can Ask Me 😛

For The Images You'll Have To Go on Photobucket . Need Any instructions I'm Here Feel free to ask 😊

Update Soon And I'm Adding You As My Buddy 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Love the start dear
do continue
add me to ur Pm

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97531

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice concept,
loved it,
plz continue nd pm me.

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TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey tum ne such maihe prolouge pe he hosh vudadiya tha...

It is really awesome part...me loved thz shy types geet...

Maan is devil...

Add me in dear...

Continue soon...

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.rishbala.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PROMO Maan (ST)- aaj tak mai sochta tha ke asi ko ladki nahi bni jo muje pasand aa jaye per vo ladki uski nazar hi kaam kar gayi now miss jo bi ho tum jahan bi ho bus meri ho be ready to become mrs khurana u unknown fairy. then picks up his phone and make some calls

ok guys kasa laga i will update tonigt and promise very long update