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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
yaar da4t was amaizing dear plz add me but next time long
update ha
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Awesome update...
I am glad that you continued this ff...loved the concept of this ff...waiting for more...
Plz give us long update next time ...this update was too too too too small...
Continue soon...
Plz do continue this ff this time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE
BUT IT WAS TOO SHORT
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
after a long long looong time u updated this dr,
but update was nice,
nd their meeting was superb... maan fully lost in her...,
want more, will b waiting,
do continue soon dr.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
awesome dear
continue
add me in too and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3

Maan was under the spell of magic of her beauty. He is rooted at the same place

Driver- sir chale

Maan gives angry glare to driver went into the college building.

Geet and Meera reached to their class room meet Kirpa. Kirpa is also their friend from childhood. Kirpa ispart of thenction which is arranged by the college for MSK's well come.

Kirpa- meera mai well come speech dene vali hoon plz tum bi mere sath chalo corner mai khade ho jana agar mai kuch bhool gayi toh plz muje bta dena

Meera- no yaar meri yoh khud ki duty back stage pe lagi hai tu ek kaam kar geet ko apne saath le ja

Function was about to start. Maan take his seat with college MD . girls were drooling over MSK and MSK is busy with his imaginations of fairy'

Kirpa started her speech and Geet stood in corner of the stage

Suddenly Maan saw geet in the corner of the stage' she looks beautiful in dim lights which were fell on her beautiful face and she looks like a moon. Maan again lost in her . but then sudden noise of clapping bring him back to the reality and meanwhile geet went from there. Maan again saw towards the corner but nobody is there Maan excused himself from there and went from there.

At back stage meera gives some flowers to geet and said- plz yeh phool store room mai rakh aao

Geet come into store room but suddenly lights of store room went off Geet is very sacred from dark{ aisa kuch hai jise geet darti na ho}

She starts running from there she was about to rach the door when someone held her from waist and pulled her inside

PS- soory for spell and sentence mistake because my enlish is not very good

Sorry for short udate

the side where Geet went wih Meera. Suddenly he is disturbed by week voice of driver.

Edited by trape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
awesome update
loed it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
plz long update next time...plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Awesome update

Waiting for the next part

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome dear
but it is short give long one next one

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