Abhay-nausheen fanfic-Read Part-26

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Posted: 19 years ago
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THo ppl r fond of Abhay-nausheen,no fanfics r there 4 them.if i write one 4 them,wil any1 read?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
yes we would we are very big fans of anuj so please do
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-1...Abhay is looking at the photo of kusum A:I
can't 4get my 1st meeting with u.
A recalls.Kusum cums 2 A's office 4 interview.A cud'nt
take eyes ff her.It was luv at 1st site.A goes & asks
her dad suryaban:I wud like 2 marry kusum?will u plz conduct our
wedding?
S was surprised.
A:finally that day has cum.2day we'll get married.
A smiles.
Kusum has dressed up like a bride.K weeps in her house.
K:I feel that I'm doing a mistake.
Her mom gayatri:no,don't b guilty.we've told everything 2 abhay.but
promise that u'll never talk about this 2 abhay.
K:ok mama,bcozs I want 2 4get my past.but I doubt
whether I can luv abhay.still I don't feel like marrying
him.
G becomes upset:u've 2 luv abhay beti.he's such a
nice guy.
K's eyes r full of tears.
Gayatri goes near suryaban:surya,I lied 2 kusum that we've
told everything 2 abhay.that's how she agreed 4 this
marriage.if abhay cums 2 no everything what'll b kusum's
future?
S becomes upset:lets hope 4 the best.

Kusum-Abhay enter the mandap.they get married. K's mind
was full of pain.song:Dhadkan…{Dhadkan}

Kusum is sitting inside the decorated bedroom.Abhay
enters.K gets tensed.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
offcourse i would read it.
I m nausheen's fan. i liked abhay+nausheen's chemistry a lot

very well written. do write more 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
Part-2..Abhay smiles at kusum.K did'nt smile properly.

A:kusum,2day my dream came
true.i was waiting 2 get u.i
just can't believe that now u
r mine.only mine.
K becomes upset. A:u no what I
felt when I saw u 1st?u r
my wife.that's why did'nt
employ u there.what did u feel
when u saw me 1st?
K was speechless. A:I no that
u also felt the same.
K becomes upset.K
thinks:eventho he nos everything,why
he's talking like this?he's so
nice.i don't deserve him.

A cums near K.A holds her hand & keeps on her chest:u r
my luck.
K feels discomfort.she wants 2
get away from A.
K:I'm tired after the
function.can I sleep?
A:sure…sleep.b fresh.
K:thanku abhay.u r an
understanding husband.no other guy
can b so soft in this nite.
K sleeps.A smiles.

The next morning kusum
brings bed coffee 4 abhay A:thanku
kusum.
A starts drinking. A:did u
drink coffee?
K:no
A extends hiss cup:drink this
K:this is urs no?
A:we'll share it
K:I'm sorry abhay.i don't like
drinking from other's cup.

A becomes dull. K:don't feel
bad plz.
A:its ok.

Abhaycums in the evening.
A:kusum,ger ready.we've 2 go 4
a party.
K:sorry abhay.i'm not coming 4
the party.
A:kusum,what r u telling?my
friends arranged this party
4 us.plz cum with me kusum.
K:ok,let me wear sari.
A:thanks kusum 4 cuming with
me.
A sits there.K takes the sari.
K:I've 2 wear sari.
A:ok.. K:so plz go out of
this room.
A was embarrassed:ok,I'm
sorry.
A goes out. A thinks:why do I
feel that kusum is
avoiding me?is my feeling
true?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
hahha. i loved reading this part,
it was soo cool.
nausheen just looks tooo good in the sarees 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
Part-3..Kusum cums in a grand violet sari.Abhay cud'nt
take his eyes off her.
A:kusum…u look really nice.
A's arms go 2 her face.K moves away.A becomes dull.
K:we'll go.
K walks out.
A-K reach the party place. 1 guy announces:now the
famous baby doll is going 2 perform .we ask all the
cuples especially the newly married cuple abhay-kusum 2
dance 2 the song.
A smiles at kusum. K:plz abhay.my mind is not allowing me
2 dance.
A was shocked:why?
K:abhay,I'm not feeling well.
A:kusum,then we'll go 2 a doctor
K:no need.it wil b ok if I take rest.
K's cell rings.It was gayatri:kusum,how r u?
K:fine mama. G:how is abhay? K:fine.how r u? &
papa..
G:we both r fine.kusum…keep abhay happy.don't giv him
chance 2 become sad.he's gr8 kusum.he gave u a new life.

K becomes upset:now we r at a party.so bye mama.
G:bye.

K thinks:I shud'nt make abhay sad.
K looks at A.he looks sad. K smiles at A.A becomes very
happy.K:abhay,now I'm ok.we'll dance 2gether.
A was thrilled:really? K:ya.
Babydoll performs:Aksar…{Dhadkan}.A-K dance 2gether.A looks at
K. Seeing K's dull face,A's face becomes dull.After the
song got stopped K moves away from A.A becomes dull.
A thinks:why do I feel that kusum is keeping a distance
with me?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice... 😉
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i wonder why is nausheen soo sad 😭
btw they must have enjoyed the party. cuz i enjoyed reading it 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-4...Kusum is infront of the mirror.she's trying 2
remove her necklace.Abhaycums:shall I help u? K:4
what? A:I'll help u 2 remove ur necklace.
K:no thanks.i myself will remove it.
A becomes dull.K removes it. K:abhay,wil u plz go out,I
want 2 change my dress.
A:ok. A goes out. A thinks:how much I dreamt about
my life with kusum?is it shattering?is it true that
dreams won't cum true?
A becomes upset.He goes back 2 the bedroom.there K was
sleeping. A looks at her with sad eyes.A was sleepless &
walks out. K opens her eyes & tells in her mind:I'm
sorry abhay,I still can't luv u.that's why I'm avoiding
u.plz 4giv me.
K's eyes r full of tears. K thinks:I don't think I can
ever luv abhay.poor guy.he loves me very much.but he's
not getting anything from his wife.

A's mom Sarala tells:Abhay,take kusum out 4 lunch.
K:no need mummiji.
S:no matter.abhay has 2 take kusum out.wives won't force
their husbands 2 take them out.but husbands shud behave
knowing their wives' desires.
A thinks:I'm happy 2 take kusum out.but I doubt whether
kusumwil b happy.

A-K r sitting in a restaurant. A:kusum,if my mom had'nt
asked 2 cum with me 4 a lunch here,wud u hav cum with
me?
K was speechless. A says in his mind:I no kusum,u wud've
cum with me.
A:Kusum..u look very pretty now
K:thanks A:not only now,u r always pretty,u r very
fair.Am I that bad looking? fair?I no that I'm not
fair.but I'm a that dark?
K:u r not dark.u r very fair.very attractive also.
A smiles:really? K:ya. A:u no kusum,I'm so lucky 2
hear a complement from u.i value ur comment more than
anybody else's comment.
K feels pity.

The next day,A-K go 2 stay in K's house. K tells
A:abhay,can I sleep with my mom 2nite?
A:what?

WILL ABHAY ALLOW KUSUM 2 B WITH HER MOM DURING NITE?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-5....Kusum:can I sleep with my mom ?
Abhay:kusum..hum aapke hain
kaun?
K:husband
A:r u sure? K:u tied
mangalsuthra around my neck.u put
sindoor on my maang.
A:just bcoz of that I became
ur husband?
K:that's enuff no?no1 wil tell
that u r not my husband.
A:infront of public we r a
cuple.but b4 us…
K turns back as she felt it
unbearable.
A:as u wish u go with ur mom.
K's eyes rose.

K goes near gayatri:mama,2nite
I'm going 2 sleep with u.i
really missed u all these
days.
G smiles.

The next day at a park.Abhay
with worries looks at K.
A:kusum,don't u luv me?
K felt it unbearable.she kept
silent. A:plz don't
avoid me.
K's eyes rose. He sings:dil
ne..{dhadkan}.he dreams K
also singing it with him.K:tum
bhi mujse pyar karlo..
A:u don't hav 2 tell me 2 luv
u.i luv u kusum.
A hugs her.within a second he
realses that it was a
dream.K sees this with pity.A
wipes his tears.

A-K r attending a
pooja.Sarala tells them:pray 2
god that by next yr there wil
b a baby with u.
A-K's face become dull.
A:whats this mama?we just
started enjoying our married
life & why r u in a hurry 2
hav a grandchild.its
oldfashion2 hav kids
immediately.now cuples prefer kids
only after sum yrs.
S:abhay don't b silly.
A goes with a sad face.K goes
inside:u don't like kids?
A:ya I like.
A thinks:I want 2 b a papa.how
can I tell u that I lied
2 mama bcoz I did'nt want 2
make u upset.
K thinks:did he talk like that
4 hiding his worries from
me?

Abhay,kusum r traveling in
the car during nite.A cuple of
robbers cum infront of them.

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