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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
Part-19....Abhay:kusum feels tired.
Trishul:ok,abhay,u plz go out.let me check
Kusum feels weird:why cant abhay sit here
A:kusum,I'l sit outside.don't worry
A goes out.T smiles. T:don't worry kusum.i'l giv u a
medicine.u'l b fresh.
T takes a picture of a flower.T:how is it? K:very
beautiful flower
T smiles:ya,u can go.call abhay inside
K goes out. K:abhay,nothing was there.he showed me a
picture of flower.
A smiles.

A goes inside.A:is she ok? T:sorry abhay,like I
doubted,kusum's condition is going worse. A was
shocked. T shows the picture of a camel:seeing this
picture she says it's a flower.
A remembers K telling him about the picture of the
flower.A becomes upset.
T:I'l giv u a medicine.lets see
T gives him medicine.A-K go.
T has an evil medicine:this medicine wil slowly make
kusum half crack.

A:hav this medicine kusum
K:but I don't like medicines
A:but u've 2.u r tired.
A feeds her medicine.K was so tired that she goes 2
sleep.she was talking unclear words 2 herself.A becomes
upset:kusum is becoming worse than b4.oh god!

Siddarth goes 2 see kumud in the school:don't u remember
me?
Ku:ya,the uncle u gav a pretty doll
S:I'm not uncle,I'm ur dad.
Ku is shocked:dad? S:yes
Abhay who cums there 2 pick up her sees this & goes
angry:kumud,don't talk 2 strangers.
S:I'm not a stranger,I'm her dad
A:that court wil decide.only after that u'l b her dad.
S:ok,but thT DAY wil surely cum.it's a challenge
A:it'l remain as a dream

A-ku in the car. Ku:is it true that he's my dad?then why r
u not allowing me 2 b close 2 him?he is lovable no
A was shocked.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
hey nice 👏 👏 👏
cnt asap!
plss dunt make kkusum a physco 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
Part-20...Abhay:so,4 u he's more imp?
kumud:no papa.u r more imp 4 me.but still how cant I luv
my dad?
A weeps:kumud…u feel like going with him? Ku:never papa.i
want 2 b with u all.but still I can b close 2 my dad too
no
A becomes upset.

Kusum was really sleepy & always talk herself.Sarla is
shocked 2 see K's condition.A is really upset 2 see
this.
S:whats wrong with kusum?
A:mama,kusum is not well
S:means? A bursts into tears:without ur knowledge I'm
giving my friend & psychiatrist Trishul's medicine.he
was her DR in Us.
S is shocked.

Trishul cums there.He sees kusum.that time,K is almost
out of the sleep stage.But T says:kusum in a dangerous
situation.u've 2 admit her in the mental hospital.
A-S r shocked. A:mental hospital?
K overhears it.she screams:nooooooooo
T:see her becoming overemotional.it's the result of her
disease.
K catches his shirt's collar & shouts:how cud u lie like
this?I'm not mad.
T whispers:u've 2 b mad b4 ur hubby abhay.he'l desert u &
only siddarrh wil b there with u
K shouts:u cheat! K slaps him.
A-S r shocked. T:see,she's becoming vilent.she has 2 b
taken 2 the hospital immediately.
A:ok. K was shocked:abhay,u….u want me 2 b in the
hospital?I'm a mad?
A weeps:no kusum.but u hav 2 b like b4.i want my old
kusum back.
A looks at t:that's the only reason 4 which I hav agreed
2 get her hospitalized.bcoz I need my kusum back.
T:I promise u that she'l b ok
K thinks:abhay loves me like crazy.that's why he even
agreed this.
K cries.she stood like a doll with no reaction when she
was taken 2 the hospital.
A feels upset seeing her like this.

Trishul phones siddarth:u r successful.kusum is mad in
the eyes of abhay.he'l b fed up pf her & he'l lose
interest in her.kusum is going 2 b urs.
S is happy:thanku so much
S is thrilled 2 visit kusum in the hospital.Kusum
behaves like a mad woman b4 him.
S-T feel weird. S:kusum… K:kusum?who is that?I'm
koyal.ok…who r u?
S:what? K:ya,I no u.u r famous filmstar Salman
Khan.right?
K laughs like crazy.T-S r shocked.

DID KUSUM REALLY BECOME MAD OR IS SHE PRETENDING?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
😭
Jasmine...ur story makin me cry.

But the ending bit is showing that nextp art will be really cool. so cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
Part-21...Siddarth:nonsense!
S:whats this trishul?ur play became true?u gave her
false medicines & it really made her mad?
T is speechless. S:anyways,I don't care.i'l b satisfied
with kumud.i don't want 2 liv with this mad woman.
S goes.T looks at Kusum.K smiles.
T:so my doubt was true.u were pretending 2 b mad.
K smiles:yes. Otherwise thru any dirty play,siddarth wil
carry me with him.Sita cud never liv with RAVAN.like
that i'l never liv with siddarth.abhay is like Ram 2 me.i
need only abhay.
T:u cant play this drama 4 a long time.
T orders her 2 b given shock treatment.K cries loudly.T
smiles.after the shock,T cums;how was ur experience
kusum?now do u feel like continuing ur drama?I no u cant

K laughs:u r so foolish.however u try,I'l keep behaving
like a mad woman.
T:then u'l b living here till the end of ur life
K:I don't care.bcoz its far better than 2 liv with
siddarth.
T is shocked.

Abhay cums 2 see kusum.A:kusum,actually I need 2 confess
too.i came 2 no about ur 1st pregnancy from
Dr.Tashu.that time I misunderstood u as a cheat & so I
wanted 2 take revenge on u.but wen I realized how sweet
u r at heart I felt really guilty.
K is shocked.Tears flow from her eyes.
A:I decided 2 correct my mistake.i made myself promise
not u make u cry in this life.so I'll get kumud 4 u at any
cost.so no need 2 b tensed about it
K:what nonsense r u talking?who r u?who is kumud?
A is shocked:kumud is ur daughter.i'm ur husband
K:4 that I don't hav a daughter.i've only a son.i'm not
ur wife.u r mistaken
A cud'nt tolerate:my kusum cant even recognize me?
A bursts into tears.K controls herself.
A thinks:kusum started having problems with siddarth-kumud
problem.when we get tia,kusum wil b ok.

Court….Advocate asks kumud:do u no that siddarth is ur real
dad?
Ku:yes A:whom do u want 2 go with?with siddarth dad
or abhay papa & …
Ku:I want 2 go with abhay papa & kusum mama
siddarth is shattered.Abhay is happy. Advocate gives the
certificates that proves kusum is mad.Abhay is
tensed.finally the court order cums.

WHO WIL GET KUMUD?

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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
Part-22...Judge:since kumud's mom kusum is not mentally
well,2 see kumud's security & protection,the court orders
that kumud shud with siddarth.
Abhay-kumud r shocked.S jumps with joy.
A is shattered. S smiles with victory:now where is ur
challenge abhay?
A is speechless.Kumud cries coming 2 abhay:papa
A hugs & kisses her.S takes her away from A:now how
dare u touch my daughter.
Tears flow from A's eyes.

A cries at the beach:I lost kusum & kumud.
Sum1 calls him from back:Abhay! A turns back.
She:u'l b wondering who I'm.i'm siddarth's mom.Saakshi.
A:u got ur grandchild.u want anything else?
S:I'm not happy bcoz of my spoilt son.icant see a sweet
cuple suffering bcoz of him.siddarth.kusum is not mad as u
think.
A:what? S's eyes r full of tears:siddarth wanted u &
kusum2 get separated.so he sent his wicked friend
Trishul 2 make u misunderstand that kusum is mad as he
believed that u'l desert her if she's mad.
A is shocked. S:the medicines trishul gave kusum was
not 2 cure her.it was heavy drugs.
A:Oh!siddarth made my kusum mad by making trishul giv
wrong medicines.
S:no,still kusum is normal.she's pretending 2 b mad e
escape from siddarth.
A is shocked.S:if I won't reveal this,god wil punish us
A is happy:my kusum does'nt hav any problem.o i mistook
her.i'l bring her back now itself.
A runs & get inside the car.A thinks:b4 that I've 2
inform kusum a sweet news.her enemy siddarth's death.i'l
finish him.

Siddarth was drving a bike on the road.A chases him 2
cause an accident 2 make S die.but S' bike goes thru
another way.A lorry hits A's car.The car is destroyed.


Again after 11yrs leap.KUmud got bail thru Suryaban-gayatri.
KU:we hav 2 bring back mom.bcoz she's perfectly
alright.she was never mad.bcoz of siddarth dad,she was
forced 2 act like a mad woman.
S-G r surprised.they bring kusum back.S-G feel
difficulty 2 face kusum.G:I cud'nt no that my daughter
does'nt hav any problem.
K:past is gone.lets avoid it.
K-ku in a room. Ku:I'm so happy 2 get my mom back
K:I'm also happy 2 get u back.did u really kill siddarth?

Ku weeps:yes. K:I thot u did'nt kill him. Ku:no,my
circumstance made me do that
Gayatri cums. K:mama,is he fine? G:whom u r
talking about?
Ku:mom is talking about Abhaypapa.right?

WHAT MUST B ABHAY'S CONDITION AFTER THE LEAP?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
Part-23...Gayatri:kusum! K looks down. KG:abhay had a
severe accident after we lost kumud.He was paralysed 4
many yrs.
K is shocked:then?now?
G:now he has recovered from it.
K is relieved. G:his friend's wife…1 widow is living
there 2 look after him.charu
K is shocked:charu?
K remembers meeting akshat-charu in the holi party.K
thinks:Akshat is dead?poor guy

K:why did u kill siddarth?
Kumud starts crying. K:was'nt he loving?
Ku:yes.but his luv was disgusting.he was too
possessive.he cud'nt even stand me seeing dadi-dada.he
did'nt even tolerate saakshi dadi's affection 2wards
me.he hated me having friends.bcoz he thot that wil make
him lose me.so I did'nt hav friends at all.i was always
alone.my only relief was garv papa.i did'nt hav any
connection with papa 4 yrs.later I got papa's letter.i
came 2 no about his accident,paralyses & recovery. i
told him 2 send letters only 2 college.thus I was
relieved with his leters I got once in a
while.later….dad's friend & his son the rock star
Kshitij came 2 our house while dad was'nt there.i was
seeing kshitij 4 the 1st time.he sang.that time dad came
& shouted at them.he threw them away.dad's friend
tolerated it as he respects dad a lot & he had an
inferiority complex as he's from a middleclass family.i
felt sad.so I went 2 kshitij's house.

Kumud tells Kshitij:sorry 4 my dad's behaviour.
Ks:I tolerated ur dad's behaviour only 4 my dad.
Ks was very angry..Ks:I pity u 4 living with such a
horrible dad.
KU felt sad:plz tell that u 4gave us
Ks:ok,I 4giv u only bcoz u r a nice girl.
Ku smiles.but Ks was serious.later when Ku went,Ks smiles.

Kusum:thus u both fell in luv?
Ku:no,we came really gud friends.later we started luving
each other.but as I scared dad was against it.he even
sent ppl 2 kill ranveer.luckily he got escaped.i cud'nt
tolerate it.later saakshi dadi became really sick.b4
dying,she told me 2 truths….my mom was forced 2 b in the
mental asylum bcoz of dad & abhay papa paralyisis is
caused by the accident created by the lorry driver who
was sent by dad.
K is shocked. Kumud cries:I cud'nt tolerate anymore.i felt
that I'm in a hell.i was living there with heavy
fear.dad tried 2 lock me inside a room 4 days.e did'nt
bother about my sufferings.he was that selfish.i tried 2
escape from that house.but dad caught me.

Kumud:leave me dad.i hate u.i luv only abhay papa who
adopted me.i'm going there
Siddarth:I won't allow u 2 b with abhay;who snatched my beloved
& daughter.
Ku:beloved?my mom was never urs.she was always my papa's.


Ku:he tried forcefully 2 push me inside a room.in that
struggle, I pushed him.his head hit the wall & he fell
dead.
Ku keeps crying.Kusum sheds tears:that devil made my daughter
suffer so much..

The police officer who is in charge of this case is
Omkar nath.Kshitij goes 2 see him:sir,I want 2 reveal a
truth that I'm the killer of Siddarth.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
OMG...... 😲 How can kshitij kill him.... Oh plzzz jasmine now don't make him suffer.
Pllz cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
you wro te very nicely. If this drama is on aired it'll be superhit. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
Part-24....omkar:then Kumud?
Kshitij:she is innocent.
O:who r u?u r the rockstar kshitij.rite?why shud u kill
siddarth.cant u liv with music?I think u don't need 2
kill a rich man 4the money 2 liv.then why did u kill?do
u no tia & siddarth personally?
Ks:yes.i'm siddarth uncle's friend's son.
O:ok,who is kumud2 u?
Ks:I luv her
O:1 way luv or she too loves u?
Ks:we both luvd each other
O:does'nt it mean that u r lying 2 me 2 save ur beloved
?
Ks:no,I'm telling the truth.i only killed him.
O:ok,now u go.we'l decide who the killer is
Ks:plz sir,put me in jail
O shouts:but u just go,man
Ks goes.

Another police:sir,according 2 the postmortam report,the
murder happened at 1am.but kumud says it happened at 12.it
can mean that kshitij had cum at 1 to kill siddarth
O:but why? He:siddarth is supposed 2b stubborn.he
might've stood against their marrIAGE.SO HE KILLED
HIM.in this age,which lover is going 2 take such a big
blame on him 4 his gf?
O:ya,but can a stubborn young killer admit his crime so
easily?

Kshitij's dad meets kumud:kshitij is mad about u.bcoz of
that he told the police that he is the real killer.i no
that he's not the killer.he lied 2 save u.plz don't put
him in the jail.i beg u
He cries.Ku weeps:I did'nt no about it uncle.
Ku calls up Ksr:why did u lie 2 the police that u
killed dad.is it 4 me?why don't u think about ur dad who
loves u so much.what'l b his condition if u go 2 jail?
Ks becomes upset & he cuts the ph.

Omkar Nath gets a spectacles from siddarth's house.O calls
surybhan 2 the police station 2 no whether its his'.Gayatri
cries bcoz that shows that the police suspects him.
S:its not mine.
O:but I doubt whether u killed siddarth as he has
insulted u many times 4 seeing kumud.
S:noooooo

Kumud tells kusum:why don't we go 2 see abhay papa?
K:no,u go.
Ku:don't u feel like seeing him?
K:but I cant face him
Ku:but papa wants 2 meet u eagerly.i no that
K's eyes r full of tears.
Kusum-kumud go 2 abhay's house.Kumud enters the house.Sarla
cums:who r u?
Ku:dadi,I'm kumud & nbsp; S is surprised:kumud? S hugs her.
Ku:there is another person too with me.
K cums. S looks carefully.she's surprised:kusum?
E hugs K. Ku:where is papa? S cries.

WHY IS SARLA CRYING?

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