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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
hmm
whats the babyz name. or did i miss the name btw the lines... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
Part-15...Abhay-kusum adopt kumud.A-K r very happy with
her.
Kumud is going 2 b 7yrs old.
Lalit sees nikhita staring at kumud.
L:why r u looking at her like this?
N:see how happy she's
L:ya.its gud no
N:I dunno.she was supposed 2 b our baby.but now…
L:u only told me 2 giv kumud 2 abhay & kusum
N:ya.bcoz I wanted 2 avoid her
L:anyways they r lucky 2 hav kumud.she's cute
N:better than our child?
L:why r u so stubborn nikhita?
N:what if kumud cums 2 no that abhay-kusum r not her real
parents?
Kumud overhears it,she was shocked.she runs 2 abhay-kusum
with tears.
Ku:tell me,am I'm not ur real daughter?
A-K r shocked. A-K r speechless.
Sarla cums:its true kumud.
A:mom!wy did u ..?
S:kumud shud no everything.
K cries.
Ku:then who r my real parents?
K:I'm ur mom beti
S:kumud ,we dunno who ur real parents r.but they never
loved u.that's why they threw u.
K becomes upset.A realizes her pain.
S:abhay-kusum only loved u.so u shud never think that
they r not ur parents.
Kumud cries & hugs A-K:if my real parents cum also,I want
u both 2 b with me.
A-K smile with tears.S becomes happy.

A-K alone at the room. K:I'm kumud's real mom.but …
A:no 1 in this family nos that truth.they shud'nt no
that secret.so plz kusum…u shud never tell others that u
r kumud's real mom.
K:abhay!am I an unlucky mom or a lucky mom.i'm confused.
A:u r a lucky mom as ur daughter is with u.she considers
u as her real mom.she loves u very much.
K weeps.

Sarla overhears it.she wipes her tears.S thinks:no,I'll
never reveal that I cum 2no kusum's secret.i shud never
destroy their peace.
Kumud's b'th day party..There cums an unexpected guest.K
is so shocked that she feels that she's going 2 faint.

WHO IS HE?
elegantpearl thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
ahhhhhhh.. who is he!!!...
SUspense! 😃

stubborn nikita- as always 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
Part-16...Abhay notices kusum's face expression.
A:kusum?what happened?
K:who invited that guy?
A:I dunno.
K:Abhay,that's siddarth
A:what?
A is shocked.

A-K-kumud cut the cake 2gether.they sing b'th day song.K
cud'nt concentrate well due 2 siddarth's arrival.
All the ppl go back after the party.but ks still stands
there.Siddarth kisses kumud & gives her a doll.kumud goes inside.K
is tensed.A stares at Sid.
K's eyes r burning with anger.
A goes angry:who r u?
Sid was cool & smiles:ur wife's ex-bf.
Sarla is shocked.
Sid:ur trustworthy wife may not hav told anything.
A becomes so angry that he raises his hand 2 slap him.
Sarla-K r shocked.
Sid:slap me.can u?
A:I'm not tolerating u bcoz I'm scared of u.
Sid smiles. A:don't tease my wife by calling her
trustworthy in a –ve sense.she has told me everything
about u.when did u release from from the jail?
Sid was shocked:oh,so u no everything.
A was prowd :ya Sid:is this ur real child?
A-K become dull. A:yes.
Sid:I no that u adopted kumud.
A-K r shocked. Sid laughs:but ur wife is again fooling
u.kumud is my child & her mom is kusum.
A-K-S r shocked.K thinks:so siddarth has cum after
knowing everything.Oh!
A smiles.Sid was wondered 2 see his reaction. A:u r
wrong Mr.Siddarth.i no this also.
Sid is shocked.
A:tell,whatelse u want 2 tell
Sid:I want kumud.
K:no!

11 YEARS LEAP…..
1 beautiful girl runs inside a mental hospital.She sees
the middleaged Kusum sitting on a corner.
Her eyes get filled up with tears.she goes near
her:mama..
K looks at her with wonder.she:u did'nt recognize me?I'm
ur daughter kumud.
K is surprised.
Suddenly sum ppl cum there with police:cum girl.this
girl has cum after killing her loving dad.
K is shocked.kumud is crying.They take her.K screams:kumud….


WHICH DAD GOT KILLED BY TIA?ABHAY OR SIDDARTH?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
OMG siddharth came to the party poor nausheen!

OMG i dont want abhay to die. 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
Part-17....AGAIN BACK 2 PAST

SiddartI'll get kumud back.she's my daughter & I'll get
it at any cost.4 that I'll do anything.
Kusum screams:no
Abhay:kumud is not ur daughter.she's my daughter.
S:its very easy 2 tell that.but u can't 4get blood.
K:one cant simply become a father thru blood relation.
S:do u think I'll not luv kumud?
K stares at him. S:I can luv her more than ur hubby
abhay.
K: shut up.I'm kumud's mom.i'l decide who her father is.
S:kusum,u r in a dreamworld.i assure u that I'l luv U &
kumud more than abhay.
A is stunned.
K:its very easy 4 u 2 tell.no 1 can luv easily.u cant
beat abhay in luv.u r nothing b4 abhay in case of luv.
S controls his anger:now I'm going.but I'll take my
daughter,also u.
A-K-sarla r shocked.S goes.K cries & runs 2 her room.A
goes there.He sees K kissing Kumud.
K throws away the doll given by S with anger.It falls
on A's feet.
Ku:what did u do mama?my sweet doll..
Kumud is about 2 cry. K:sweet doll?its an ugly doll.don't
accept anything given by that devil.i'l destory that
doll.
Ku starts crying.
A Feels sad & gives that doll 2 Ku:u play with this doll
Ku smiles:thanku papa
Ku runs away with the doll. K:abhay,what did u do?
A:kusum,ur anger shud'nt b with that doll.it'll hurt our
innocent child.
K keeps silent. A:kusum,don't u feel like going back 2
siddarth?
K is shocked:Abhay?
A:I mean…siddarth is ur child's dad.so…
K loses her control:what DID U SAY?TELL Abhay.how dare u
talk like this?
A becomes upset. K:don't u think I & kumud r a burden 2 u?

A:what r u saying kusum?I can't liv without u both.but I
was tensed whether I'l lose u both.
K:I can't liv without u & kumud..
K hugs A.she cries:plz don't leave us abhay.plz …
A weeps.

Siddarth files case 2 get kumud back.A-K r shocked.
A consoles her:don't worry,we'll win.we won't lose kumud.

Sid meets psyciatrist Trishul;his friend who came from
US. S:I need ur help,I want kusum too along with
kumud.u shud make abhay believe that kusum is abnormal.abhay
wil desert kusum & I'll get her.
T smiles:ok. S laughs.

Abhay is alone at home as K & Sarla hav gone 2 Kumud's
school.Callling bell rings.A opens the door.it was
trishul with a smiling face.
T:if I'm not wrong,u r abhay.kusum's hubby.rite?
A was wondered:how du u no me?u no kusum?
T:u r rite.i no kusum.
A:ok,cum inside.
T gets inside:where is kusum?
A:she has gone out.
T thinks:I no that.that's why I came here.
A:u were kusum's classmate in US?
T:no,I'm kusum's doctor.she was under my psyciatric
treatment.
A is shocked.

DO U THINK TRISHUL IS LYING?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
👏
😭
Marvellous, Fantastic but...sad too.
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont. soon
elegantpearl thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38

feeel sorry for kumud 😭



do continue 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
Part-18....Trishul:u no..kusum had 2 go thru severe
sufferings in life & thus she was gling out of track.she
even used 2 become violent.
Abhay:no T:I understand ur feelings.every husband is
lyk this.
A:if so,kusum wud've told me.
T:4 that kusum does'nt no about this.bcoz she was not
normal at that time.she may not b ABLE 2 remember
anything
Kusum,kumud & sarla cum.K stares at T.
A:this is….
A does'nt no how 2 introduce T.
T:I'm Dr.Trishul,abhay's friend.
A smiles. K keeps staring at T. A:kusum,go & giv kumud sum
food.mama..u too.
S:ok K keeps looking at T while going.
T:abhay..is kusum having any particular tension now?
A thinks:how can I tell that kusum is tensed about
siddarth,case & kumud
T:I feel so,as I can see kusum becoming like b4
A:what do u mean?
T:yes abhay.i'm a Dr.i can recognize patients.
A:u r going 2 say that kusum is…?
T:relax.u see,kusum was an interesting patient.i mean I
used 2 giv a special attention 2 kusum.bcoz she was very
special & diff from other patients.that's why I came 2
see her.otherwise why shud a DR care about a patient who
has already gone.i want kusum 2 b ok.
A:so? T:u plz bring kusum 2 my hospital.let me
check.let me see how her condition is
A becomes angry:enuf Dr
T:I'm not forcing u.but u miust understand that it's a
disease that shud b treated in the beginning
itself.otherwise u can guess what wil happen.u might
even lose ur wife.can u think about a life without ur
life?
It touches A's mind.T goes.

T observes K.K was talking alone in the room:no,I won't
allow
A goes out with tears:oh god,whats this?
K tells herself:no,I shud'nt allow him 2 take my
daughter
A goes near her:kusum,u r tensed & tired.we'l see a dr.
K:4 such a silly thing?
A:yes,u'l b fresh
K:no abhay A:no kusum,u'v 2
K:ok.abhay,is that trishul ur friend itself?
A becomes dull:why?
K:bcoz u'vent told me about him
A:I 4got.i'm going 2 take u 2 him K:ok,ur wish

K thinks:why do I feel that I've seen trishul b4?no
chance.but still…
Trishul thinks:kusum was staring at me.but I think she
does'nt remember me.once she has seen me with
siddarth.that's all.

Abhay-kusum enter trishul's room. T:hi,whats the problem?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
😭 😭 emotional episode!
i hope all the mystery is over soon!.
-signing off

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