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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
Part-25...Sarla:Abhay fainted last week.since 1 week,he is
unconcious.charu is there in the hospital.i came here 2
take certain things 2 the hospital.
Kumud-kusum r shocked.they cry.they go 2 the hospital.K
sees charu.C smiles:kusum….
Dr cums:there is a happy news,abhay is out of danger
All r happy.Sarla:when kusum came,abhay became ok.that's
the effect of true luv
K's eyes rose.Kumud smiles. Ku:Dr,can we see him?
Dr:only 1 person now.
Ku:mama,u go
K:no,u go Ku:this time,u must go S:kumud is
true.kusum has 2 go now
K goes.K sits near Abhay who is sleeping.K looks at him.She
remembers their earlier days.song:dil ne{dhadkan}.K 's
tears fall on A.K wipes her tears & go out.
K:kumud,we'll go Charu:kusum,bcoz of my presense u
shud'nt go.after akshat went abhay mercy by giving me
shelter. Nothing else.ur position in abhay's heart is the
same.i've never tried 2 get it.i'm going 2 another
place.not bcoz of ur arrival.i'd decided it earlier.i
waited till now,bcoz of garv's health.now he's ok.i can
go.my son wil b waiting 4 me.
Ku smiles. K's eyes r full of tears.she goes.Ku goes after
her.

Abhay opens his eyes.S smiles with tears:Abhay beta,u r ok
now?
A:yes.i dunno why I felt that kusum is near me
S smiles:u r right abhay.kusum had cum 2 see u
A is surprised:what?really?
S:yes,kumud also came with her
A smiles. S:kusum escaped from the mental asylum.kumudhas
grown up & looks pretty.
A:kumud had sent me her photos.but kusum…I miss her a lot.

S:kusum wil b back 2 ur life.
A smiles.

A is discharged.Charu goes & stays in her son's
house.
A is sitting & dreaming. S:what r u dreaming?
A:I'm thinking about our future life with kumud &
kusum.they'l b always with me
S becomes upset:kusum wil b there with u.but kumud…
A:but why?tell me mama. S's eyes r full of tears:kumud
is going 2 get punishment from the court.she killed her
dad siddarth
A is shocked:no!

OMkar calls suryban,gayatri,kumud,kshitij,kusum 2 the station.
O:sumhow we felt that kumud is not the real killer eventho
she admitted that she's the killer. Postmortam report
strengthened our belief. we suspeacted many ppl
including kshitij,suryban..now I'm going 2 reveal the who
the killer is.
All r eager 2 no who the real killer is..
nootan thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#52
nice plot. 👏 waiting for the next.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
Plzzzzzzzzzzzz not kshitij....


👏 plzz cont.. soon..itna suspence mat badhao.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
Part-26....OMkar:the real killer is…
Suddenly Abhay cums:I'm the killer of siddarth
Kumud:no!papa is lying 2 save me.i killed him.
Abhay-kusum see each other.they r very emotional. A:the
specs got from siddarth's house is mine.
O:why did u kill siddarth?
A:he's my enemy.he tortured my kusum.he tried 2 make her
mad.he put my poor kusum in mental hospital eventho she
was'nt mad.so I decided 2 kill him.but I cud'nt kill
him.when I lost kumud & kusum,I was fed up of life.The
accident & its aftereffects destroyed me completely.the
only relief was kumud's letters.Recently I got kumud's
letter.
"Dear papa,I'm writing thi letter 2 tell u a big truth
that I'm melting into nothing bcoz of heavy pain.why did
u giv me 2 dad?u cud've brought me up.bcoz of the devil
who came b4 me as my dad,I can't liv peacefully.i'vent
felt happiness since I got separated from my papa &
mama.My dad is killing me inch by inch.i'vent felt
secure here.bcoz of dad only u had a big accident that
made u paralysed.I realised that he only put mama into
the mental asylum tho she was perfectly alright.He is
torturing me like anything.i cant breath in this hell.so
I've only option b4 me ie suicide.u won't b able 2 see
me or my letter as I'm going 2 die.i'm fed up of this
life.Luv urs only daughter kumud.

A:I cud'nt tolerate it.i went there during nite.i saw
the doors open.i got inside & saw siddarth lying down.he
became conscious.he became so angry that he came 2
attack me.

A escapes from his attack. A:u destroyed kumud's & kusum's
life.i can't allow u 2 liv anymore.otherwise,tIa won't
get a gud life at all.
A:I hit his head on the wall & thus he died.i was very
happy with what I did as it was 4 kumud.i was planning 2
inform this 2 the police.but b4 that I fainted.then I
became conscious only 2 days back.I never new that bcoz
of my deed,my daughter was getting punished.
Kumud-kusum cry. Kumud hugs A:papa,u did all these 4 me.

A gets arrested.After 5yrs,he gets released from the
jail.He was surprised 2 see kumud there with kshitij& a
small baby. Ku:papa,we got married.this is our baby.His
name is Akus.Abhay papa's A & kusum mama's kus.Akus…this
is ur dada.
A smiles.A takes him & hugs.They go near the car.A was
surprised 2 see Kusum there.K:Abhay!
K falls on his chest.A hugs her. A:how long I was
waiting 4 this moment
K:me too Kshitij:let them hav a romantic moment
peacefully.we'll stand sumwhere else.
Kumud-kshitij smile.They go.A-K r alone & they share
romantic moments.

THE END
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
👏 👏
Brilliant, fantastic, mervellous.

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