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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

this was just superb...

loved it...

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia
Thank u so much Mana... You're most welcome Debs !!! 😃

A big hug to u for this wonderful gift...A biiggg hug from my side too !!!

I loved the OS aaur agar tu hurry me itna achha likh sakti hai na to kash ki mera bday roz ho aur tu roz likhe... It was awesome...Roz likhne ki baat toh theek hai...par agar tera bday roz aayega, toh soch tu kitneee jaldi buddhi hojayegi !! 😛

Mujhe isme Naina sach me achhi lagi... she is so independent and her self respect really makes the picture of a woman who is proud of herself, trusts her love, doesn't forget his infidelity and respects the love he has for her... Her patriotism and self confidence is just awesome... I wish every girl should be like her... Simply the way WE like it !! haina???

I completely loved the OS... Keep writing more...yeah,...but i would loveee to read your OS my dear ! jaldi likh na kuch...

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Sorry dear for being that late to comment. 😔 😔 😔
Lovely OS with great concept. 👏 👏 👏
Raj ne Naina k saath jo kiya that was hurting and painful, mai kabhi soch nahi socha tha, how can he be that much selfish? 😡 😡 😡
Keval apni selfishness k liye us ne Naina k saath itna badha dhokha kiya aur us ne jis cheej ko paane k liye ye sab kiya vo to us ko mil gaya par un logon ne hi us ko fasa diya.😔 😔 😔
Par Naina k saath itna sab kuch hone k baad bhi ek Naina hi thi jis ko Raj par bharosa tha aur us ne Raj ko bachane ki har mumkin koshish ki aur successful bhi hue 😊 😊 😊
Par Raj ki kosheshein Naina ki zindagi me vapas aane ki itne jaldi poori nahi ho sakti hain kyounki Naina k liye itna asaan nahi hoga Raj k diye dard o gum bhool jaana.
Ab Raj ko bahut mehnat karni hogi Naina ka khoya hua vishwaas phir se paane me but i am sure vo kar lega aur Naina fir khud apne aap us k pass aa jaayegi. 😉 😉 😉
Alekh sach me Naina ka best friend hai, har situation me us ka saath jo deta hai. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Once again awesome work jaldi me itna accha likha hai to aaram se kya likhti socho. 😍 😍 😍