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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Hey Mana

I really like your shots... Nice and simple yet with their own complications...

The song is one of my fav ones... beautiful.

Thanks a lot for the pm

Love

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noaccount

@noaccount

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

hi mana...how r u sweety???????

it was awesome!!!!

love this OS...obvoiusly bcz it was RN😳😆

naina was betrayed by raj

he choose his career instead of her😡😡😡

but soon or later he did realize his mistake😳😳😳

n so he goes to her n ask for forgivness...n as excpeted she didn't agree so soon...but with the help of alekh raj n naina became friends again!!!!!😳😳😳...n soon they'll be lovers☺️

thank u so much for sharing this awesome OS

plz come back soon with more OS😳😳😳

love ya

esha

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Fabulous oneshot ,lovely gift for guglu

loved nainas self respect ,the song is so beautiful

Edited by -serenity- - 14 years ago

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Radhika

@ridhz21

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Hey Mana 🤗
Awesome ,beautiful OS
Loved Naina character ...independent and her self respect
Beautiful song
Thx for pm

Love
Radhika

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

beautiful OS
loved the way u portrayed Naina's character
plz continue MERE SAATHI too

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Ab deba ko toh main wish karr hi chuki hun...achhe se...in fact main toh uss ke hostel bhi gayi thi...jahan uss ke frnds use cake khila kamm rahe the...Deba par laga jyada rahe the...😆

khair...mere ko toh bass yehi kehna hai ke...Yaar itna chota OS maine apne akkha life me nahi padhi...!!! padha nahi ke OS khatam ho gaya...😆

matlab ki kuch sochne ka chance hi nahi diya tune...bass kahani ko aage hi badha rahi thi...aur main kafi interest ke sath padhti ja rahi thi...😃

Raj ko aisa charachter diya...phir bhi Naina se jyada Raj achha laga...!!! pata hai kyoun...kyoun ke ek confidence tha uss me...jo naina ko khone ke baad bhi...jaise use pata tha ke...baht jaldi Naina phir se uss ki life ka hissa hogi...👏

confession scene bhi...aur Last part bhi...dono hi ek damm meri tarh the...matlab ke Sweet-Sweet...ha ha ha...😉😆😛

Ab Deba ko uss ki birthday par Post bana kar Preet ne char chaand laga diye the...ab tune FLAMES likh ke panchwa chand bhi laga diya...😃👏😃👏👏

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

hey dear...nice come back...par fir bhi "mere saathi" ka update karna hi padega😆😆...

coming to this OS...it was fab👏👏👏...raj's character was very different from what all we hv been reading till date...naina yahan bhi raj ko sleepless nights de rahi thi😆😉...

but ritu??????????oh god koi aur nhn mili?????Raj to sapne mein bhi uske saath accha nhn lagta..bhootni kahin ki...

very nice OS...one of the best i hv read sooo far😃👏⭐️.⭐️...

abhi zyada udd nhn...dharti par aaja aur mere saathi update kar..😡

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

a wonderful os...plz continue soon

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

wonderful one shot mana👏👏👏 with a slight difference in the character of rn just the name suggest flame so naina did have a flame in herself😊😊 do continue soon with your oneshots and thanx for the pm😊😊

shreya😊

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

That was a beautiful FLAMING shot...and I just completely agree to ur note at the end...it was necessary for Raj to repent his mistakes and win her love once again...while she w8s for that day...as she actually loves him...😊...mujhe ye bahuuut achha laga Mana...thank you for this one!! 🤗