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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
ye vairabhi and mishty na kithni confusing hai yaar..pur muje acha lega maan geet se attracted hai not to meet..maan sirf geet ki hai..dil meet ko dekhar geet ke saath rehenge tho acha nehi legege na...thum other ff's kyu nehi update kar rehi hai?we r missing that yaar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Sia that was simply Amazing …… 👏👏

loved how u changed the story line just on our request ….😳 a big THANK U ….. 🤗🤗

loved Geet's Attitude …. 😳

plzzz UPDATE soon hun ….!!!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
part 4 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
love it the way yu change the story
superb update
waiting next
thnx so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
loved the update...
loved the way u managed the name hing in the update saying they did it for fun kind...rather than changing from the first...
wat case r they talking abt and y is mishty in kc...
waiting for the next eagerly pl cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
lovly update continue soon.
Thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
NOW ITS FINE.BUT DONT U THINK MISHTI NAME SUITS GEET.ANYHOW UR CHOICE.KEEP UP UR GOOD WORK.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Loved the way u changed the story
love-PIYA
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69



Love and appreciation'..

Sasha ' par MK who ladki hai hin kaun?????

Arjun ' she is DCP vairabi pathi'..

Sasha ' she is what????? But she is looking so young''

Arjun ' now sasha are you going to apolise to her not''

Geet ' arjun'..

Arjun ' han'..

Geet ' make it fast...

Arjun ' surely'. Come..

And he led them to conference room. Soon they were seated. And arjun pushed a packet towards her.

Arjun ' yeh dekh'.

Geet opened the packet and smelled it lightly. And then looked at meet. They just exchanged a nod.

Arjun ' what is it????

Geet ' high quality ganja'' looking at him'. And then he pushed another packet to wards her

Arjun ' yeh doosra packet dekh'

Geet smelled it' but then again felt it with her fingures. She then took the packet and poured the half of its content in the water glass and just stirred it. The water turned black . geet then pushed the glass to meet and then meet pushed it to arjun.

Geet ' smell it and then pass it to mr.khurana''.

Arjun ' kise doon???? Hum sab khurana hin hain'..

Geet ' dev and maan'.. and just rolled her eyes. While they were examining it geet asked for a small bottle and took half of its content with her.

Arjun ' what is this?????

Geet ' I think cheras with bleeching powder.

Maan ' that's impossible'.

Geet ' you called me to show this????

Arjun ' yah'.

Geet ' this is ridiculous man'.. you know all these things more than me'.

Arjun ' no actually what do you think '. What will happen'.. he asked in a nervous tone''

Geet was staring at arjun as if he had grown three horns.

Geet ' you cant be arjun''.

Arjun ' kyun????

Geet ' you are a DCP and you don't know what will happen???

Arjun- bol naw yaar'. Mujhe doubt ho raha hai'.

Geet ' of course the CEO will be arrested'..

Arjun ' bhai is CEO '..

Geet ' so what???? Then he will be arrested'.. she said in a matter of fact tone'.

Arjun ' how can you be so casual' he is my brother''

Geet ' maine kab kaha ki mere bhai hai????

Arjun ' we can do something'. Cant we?????

Geet ' we can do everything arjun'.. if we acctuaaly want to do'..

Arjun ' so you will help us ' isn't it?????? He asked expectedly'..

Geet ' tune mujhe kyun bulaya????? Matlab tu khud DCP hai tu cahta toh tub hi toh yeh kar sakta hai with out involving me''..

Arjun ' I trust you yaar'.. tu janti hai ki main tujhpe bahut dependent hoon''

Geet ' hmm'.. mr. khurana mujhe aapke company ke marketing head se milna hai'.. she said addressing to maan'..

Maan ' surely'.. and he called for it.

Geet ' mr.khurana'.

Maan ' hmm'.

Geet ' I just want you to do one thing for me'..

Maan ' and whats that DCP pathi????

Geet ' you will talk with your marketing head '..

Maan ' then what are you going to do???? You are DCP I am not''

Geet ' you will talk if you don't want that marketing head of yours to be crushed and bleed''

Maan ' fine''

Geet ' good'.

Dev was stunned to hear his bro talk and go with someone's descision and was sure to see geet as his bhabi. His brother was only strengthing his doubts that his bro has intrest on geet.

Geet till then dialed a number

(one sided )

DCP vairaibi''

Reports are ready?????

Mail the reports to me'.

Sach main ???? mujhe????? And then gave a hysteric laugh

Bache ko dekhna padega''

Delhi main hai????

Thik hai'. Whoh kasar bhi puri kar denge''

Main baat karungi ''.

Thik hai '' bye'..

As soon as she ended the call a young man entered the room. He stopped in his tracks and looked at the twins from head to toe. And it was well marked by maan . and he was burning to rags.

Man ' you called me sir''

Maan - yah'.. rahul sit down. Well '..

And the conversation continued . while answering rahul was looking at meet .But meet was staring at him straight to his eyes without blinking and her gaze a fire in it. Unable to hold her gaze anymore he looked to geet that proved to be his fault beause in her eyes there was open threat and challenge . and the fire more intense . at last he got up and went to shake hand with the twins. First he held geet's hand and she held his hands so tight that her imprints were left on his palm and when he proceeded to

meet and shook hands all heard the sound of some thing breaking and saw the pathetic expression on rahul;s face.

maan' is there any problem mr.rahul???

rahul ' yes sir'' meet held his hand more tight '.. no sir'.. I think I should go'' and with that meet left his hand . and gave a small smile. As rahul went away meet looked at her sister and smiled a bit which she returned .

arjun ' meet what was that?????

Meet ' bone breaking exercise'' and smiled a bit'.

Arjun ' can I ask you why????

Meet ' I hate that leech '.. bloody sucking man'...

Arjun ' fine'.. what do you feel about it?????

Meet ' about whom?????

Arjun ' rahul ofcourse''.

Meet ' bloody leech'..

Geet ' but you can tell that he is really handsome''

Meet ' yah'.. isme koi shaq nahin hai'..

Maan was seeting . he made a mental note to terminate rahul''

Geet ' and is innocent''

Meet ' yah'. I think he has no idea about all these things''

Maan ' then whom do you doubt on????

Geet ' we need time

Meet ' and now we have to go'.

Geet ' don't worry khurana'. Tera bhai arrest nahin hoga'.. it has nothing to do with CEO'..

Dev ' so shall we meet tomorrow ????

Geet ' no dev'.. bhai ki saadi hai and we have to do shopping' she said in a irritated tone'..

Dev ' looks as if you don't lke shopping''

Geet ' yak man'' koi ghanto kais eek shop se doosre shop ghumta rehta hai yaar'.. isn't it meet???

Meet ' yah'. jitna cahiye utna kharido '.. pura market uthane ki kya jarurat hai'.

Geet and meet ' we hate shopping''.

Dev ' wao'. Tum dono ke khayalat kitne milte hain'..

Meet ' come on dev'. We are identical twins remember??????

Geet ' toh chalein'.. bahut bhoko laguchi (I am starving'')

Meet ' why???? Lunch karinu????? (skipped lunch???)

And geet nodded yes very cutely that made maan skip a beat''

Arjun ' she has skipped her lunch isn't it????

Meet ' yah' this girl needs '..

Geet ' no meet' you are are not going to do that'..

Meet ' yes I am '

But brfore geet could do any thing meet pulled her ears'..

Geet - ouch 'ouch.,' sorry' sorry'. au samiti karibini (I wont do like that'.)

Meet ' I amd not listening to you'.. it means kit u medicines bi nae nathibu'(it means you have not even taken the medicines'.)

Geet ' naen naechi (I have taken'.) geet twisted her ears even more tightly'' fine fine mu medicines naeni'' abet a chadi de please (fine I have not taken medicines'.. now atleast leave me please'.)

But while meet was still holding her ears' when suddenly some one threw a stone at the window. She looked down the window and saw someone running.

Maan ' guards'.

Meet ' rehne dijiye mr.khurana''.

Maan ' what????

Arjun ' you both are not doing that ''

Geet ' well its show time dear''

Maan ' what ?????

Meet ' he is '..

Geet ' so dead now''.

Meet ' you take the door I will the window'''..

Geet ' ok!!!!

A n d with that they were preparing them selfs. While meet went near the window, she said without turning '..

Meet ' meet you in 1 min''

Geet ' fine'' and with that while meet jumped down th window geet ran to the stairs and very finely slid down the railing. Meet had a fine landing just in front of that man while geet stood behind him. He looked at both of them. By that time all were present there. Seeing no option he pointed his gun at them .

Geet ' stupid boy'. Didn't your master teach you to respect girls????? And with that they both took out their revolvers pointing at him. He walked back an dknew that he was cornered.

Man ' you will never be able to reach him. And pointed the gun at himself and was about press the trigger when he felt a strong force and saw that he no longer had his gun but one of the twins was hoilding it.

Meet ' itni jaldi bhi kya hai sweet heart '.. and saying it she slapped him hard across his face and with that force made hi total flat '.. geet picked him up by his neck and took of his scraf and pushed him towards maan and he fell down on his feet''.

Meet ' all yours mr.khurana''.

Geet ' I think we have to go now''.

Meet ' yah bye'..

And they went away'' by that time the guards had taken the man away. Maan was very much impressed by the twins . he had already started to loose his heart to geet but was finding it hard to accept himself. He was tough and he knew that.

Arjun ' awesome ' aren't they bhai''

He looked a tarjun to see appreciation and some thing in his eyes'.. wait'. Love????????

Dev was observing both of his brothers and knew that both of them were hot blooded and tough nuts to break but both were in opposite ways and both were dark and he could very well that light in his brothers life who were now riding the scorpio . he just hoped that being twins'' what would happen if both khuranas will fall for the same girl ???? he knew maan very well. And that maan had harboured feeling for geet. He prayed that let not arjun fall for geet else only god knows what will happen'..

Wait not god''. Only maan knows what will happen''.

updated at last... shower with your valuable comments😃

love

sia...

Edited by lovelycutietedy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

seriously yaar no love triangle ...

let that be meet - arjun , n , maan - geet ...

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