os: impossible apology part 1\2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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as we saw in the precap arnav knew that khushi is going to the party with lavanya

and he just lost his day at home to apologize for his rude talking 4 her ... as he refuse first to go to the party he change his opinion and say that ...
asr: lavanya i will come with you
la: whaaat ... but you refused first
khushi is shocked because he will come with them
asr : if you get late ... naniji well be upset and will annoy us by her criticisms so wait for me ???
(((( what a excuse arnav !!!!)))
... he went to dress up ...
khushi : lavanya ji since arnavji will go with you i will go home ... no need to go with you
la: but chamkili you are get ready for that come on you will get joy there ... you have never go like this parties please come there will be alot of fun ... don't worry i will drop you home ...
khushi : ok
arnav got ready he and get down of stairs ... khushi stare at him as he always perfect and attractive in his suit arnav as always he gaze too...
la : wow asr ... you look hot ... am luck that you come with me
as usual he doesn't mind what she say he concern about khushi's gaze
asr : come on
as he is the man he walk a head and the two beautiful ladies follow him
'''''''''''' so gentle''''''''''''''''''''
in the car
khushi in the back seat ... la surely next asr
arnav doesn't lose the chance of keek at khushi alot of times ,,,,,,,,
khushi try to escape of his sharp gaze ... his gaze contain alot of meaning ... love ... apology ... petition... admirition... mix of feeling
as they reach la just open the door quickly because she saw one of her friend out
khushi try to open the door ... but it doesn't open... arnav go out from the car and open the door
...,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, rabba ve ohhh . rabba ve ...
... khushi looks like a princess...
she get out
as he want that time to say am sorry she rush to follow la
arnav close the door strongly and say... " it's so difficult"
in the party
la doesn't lose the chance to dance
khushi is standing alone since she doesn't know anyone
arnav is talking to business men... his mind is with khushi ... gaze at her to be sure that she will not leave suddenly like cinderella
la : khushi how did you see the party ... it's so excited .. isn't it?
khushi : ha ... but when will we leave?
la : come on chamkili ... the party just start and you ask about leaving... don't worry i will drop you
khushi feel bored of this strange party
she see the jaelabi plate ...
khushi : ary va ... jaelabiii ... this is the good thing in this party ... yammie
khushi start to eat and get rid of that bored
arnav is staring (how unbelieveable girl)
... this is the chance to apology ... sure she will not escape this time ... since her mouth is full of jaelabii she will not talk or reject )
😉😉😉😉😉
arnav is walking towards her ... as she is busy in the taste of the jaelabi
she hear her name
asr : khushi ... i ... want ... i mean ... that yesterday ...
khushi rise her eyes to see that ""he is... yes he sure want to scold me about eating ... i will escape as usual "
khushi start to cough and she pretend that she choke of the food
arnav quickly believe her and just go to the end of the table to bring the water ... in seconds he back with a rush ... but she is not exist...
"" is she trick at me again "" arnav think ..
but this time i can't throw the glass to release my nervousness "
asr : khushi kummari gupta i will not spare you
la : asr please dance with me
asr : la just leave me alone or i
la : ok asr ... just relax ... oh do you know where is khushi ? i don't know where she goes ?
arnav stare fierily at lavanya make her leave him
😡AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
arnav is start to look for about khushi
he just become as a lion who look for the poor prey ...
suddenly as he never expect that he see ...
to be continue
sorry if it's too short
this is the first time i write os i hope you like it
forgive me if there is any grammaritcal mistakes
Edited by lostlove - 13 years ago

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rechup thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG
This was the scene in really expected to happen
I can visualise it perfectly
U r just awesome dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rechup

OMG

This was the scene in really expected to happen
I can visualise it perfectly
U r just awesome dear

wow rechup i can't explain my pleasure after i read your sweet comment
really it motivate me to complete the next part
thanks from the bottom of my heart😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks amesha and kriya 4 your sweet comments it means alot to me
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part 2

arnav is looking 4 khushi to chasten her about her tricks to him but as he never expect to see that ... he shocked ... khushi is in corner of the party ... talking to a guy ... she laughing with her charming laugh that makes arnav's heart inflames ...
asr in a shock make him ask 100 question to him self
asr : who is he? ... and why she is so happy in talking with him? ... is he her boyfriend?...
no khushi doesn't believe in that ... or he is her lover... but i never see him with her
or he isn't any thing of that ... may she know him now in this party since she is so naive and can make the people loves her so quickly as she made that to my family...
(while he is watching that (the guy whispering in khushi's ear )
what is that !!! is there any thing private between them
what happen to me ... why i care of that ... i came here to apologize only ... and i have to do it now
he walks towards her to get rid of this apology ... with his burning jealous heart inside ... unfortunately khushi see him coming to her ... she quickly grab the guy's hand and take him to dance floor ... they start dancing
arnav stops in a shock as he never expect her dance in this crowd
khushi make non sense movements since she doesn't how to dance in this super song
along her dancing she stare at asr to be sure he doesn't approch to her
asr standing watch at her dancing he hears some girls gossiping about khushi
girls : look at her benjabi ... it's so old ... this is a party not a mender ... and even her dancing ... is so awful ...
arnav can't bear with that gossiping and he goes to the girls and say : shut up
and go hastly to the dance floor while khushi in that time she is circuiting around eventually she feel her self in someone's bosom with a tight arms around her
khushi ((( i know this strong grab ... i know this hot breaths ... surely he is ... i don't hope so ...
she raise her head as she expect no one will do that ... only him
asr: khushi .. come with me quietly >> don't even think to escape
her eyes fall of fear ... she doesn't oppose him
he grab her hand and take her out
in the garden
khushi : leave my hand
asr open his strong grab
asr : how dare you trick at me again ... and pretend that you ch..
khushi: do you know why i do that ... because i got much pain ... much hurts of your talking
your talking is only scolding ... as i don't have self- respect ... or feeling ..
asr : khushi i just want to..
khushi : don't say anything ... i don't have any patience after yesterday talking ... i decide never to talk to you never interpose to your life ... MR Arnav singh raizada and be away from me too
asr is losing in her speech he sees her eyes inflame of hatred to him mixed with pain and tears
asr : khushi listen i come to this party to ...
that guy come and grab khushi's hand
the guy interrupte arnav : come on khushi your favourite song salam ishq ... let's dance
arnav can't bear the guy and he punch him strongly ... make him down suffer of pain
khushi get scared and rush to see the guy
khushi : are you ok ?
before the guy respond arnav grab her hand and takes her to the car forcibly ... she couldn't release her self of this barbarian guy
he tight the seat belt and ride the car quickly
along the way khushi is crying
arnav try to calm him self to start talking with her ... but her bitterly talking raise his nervousness
asr : stooop that😡 ( he shout )
khushi : you stop your savage behaviors ... stop see the people down... stop..
asr press the breaks stop the car eventually
khushi : what did you do ... you think that i don't have family to cry about me if i die ... i don't have
asr put his hand in her mouth ... he cover it ... make her astonished
asr : shshshsh listen to me i came to this party only 4 you ... i came to tell you that i don't know that you are orphan ... i scold you bitterly yesterday ... i tried to call you but as you are talktive you don't give me the chance to say that ..
((khushi is staring with daze at this unexpectable talking from the rakkash ... the lord governer))
his hand still cover her super talkative mouth
asr : that i am sorry
rabba ve oooh rabba ve oooh rabba ve
arnav remove his hand
both are gazing at each other
khushi : i ... for... i want to... ... i don't ...
khushi try to collect her scattering pieces of his word
khushi : please drop me home ... it;s too late
asr just turn on the car and glance alot of times at the innocent angel that sitting next him
khushi is escape from his sharp eyes and looking from the window
(asr remember the guy that he punched him )
asr : that guy is ... i mean is your boyfriend ??
khushi wide-eyed in this question as never she expect that
khushi: what boyfriend ... no .. no... he is one from my relative
asr just feel satsfied after this answer he don't know why he feel this after he knew that she is not correlated with ..
khushi ( think insidely ..i don't have to answer him this is my private life ... )
when they reach at her home she get out of the car
she look at arnav as he gaze to her to
sparks of love flies between them ... flames of love fire inflame
arnav see something in khushi's eyes make him satisfied
something make him suffers to get it
some thing he never think that it's so precious
that thing is
forgiveness
i did my best to complete this part i hope you like my experiment in writing
as i mentioned it would be the first time
but your comments can make it more than one

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