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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey PHriends.. 🤗

atlast i m here with an Update.. 😳
say thanx to Nabihah jee.. 😛hehe
her emotianal blackmailing🥱..and all that slogans on previous pages impelled me to write..😆
so it is dedicated to Her..🤗
and all those who wanted me to update.. esp Kiran28 and Vrushika😛
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Quick recap..
> Prem Knows Heer loves him..and want her to confess her Love
> Heer wants to confess her love but afraid..
> Not Heer..but Prem Planning something!
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PART 10

Its been 4 months now, heer came to canada..and with every passing moment Heer was falling for prem deeply.. Though she had realised her feelings for Prem when she was in India but in this short span of time her feelings had grown more for him and on otherhand..Prem also couldnt resist..He wants to confess...he often think that if he is being stupid expecting Heer to confess her Love as she would be afraid, But she have to do that..thats time for her to act upon her words...'Heer's words'
Flash back
"Prem..what are u doing here..u r even ignoring my call..wats the matter" heer said irritated.
"Heer!" Prem looked at heer..making her worried as she could feel that something was bothering him..
"What happened Prem?" heer asked with concern voice.
"Heer u know i really like our Maths Teacher...i mean..may be Love her.. i want to tell her" as soon as Prem shut his mouth he found heer Laughing out Loud holding her stomach.. "wat..wat did ...u say.. hahahaha.. Prem u r too much.." heer said controlling her laugh
"HEER" Prem said with stern voice indicating her that he is not liking it!
"What..are u mad.. she is our teacher.." Heer said rather in shocked tome
"So what Love is Love... and " Prem began but intruppted
"and its Blind! Heer said with sigh
"Yeah whatever.. tell me na.."
"Look Prem! we will find u another Girl..offcourse of ur AGE" Heer said scarstically
Prem gave her angry look... Heer grinned mischieviously at his reaction..
"Prem..com'on yar.. okay if u love her..then tell her simple" Heer said
"Its not child's Play.. to go and tell her..i cant even face her and telling her this..HA! thats far cry"
"Prem its not that much difficult...if u love her then Go tell her..otherwise she will leave u..with someone of her AGE!" Heer chukled
Prem sighed..heer continued..
"i think its just crush..like every every typical boy has at this age of 17.." *Rolling eyes* "I
dont think if u truely love someone..u will bother abt anyone and will just go and tell them..atleast i will do that"
"Realy!" Prem said.."i think u r right.."
"i m always right.." Heer said with whink..as she got up to leave for class.."Lets Go Prem... we are getting late"
"Heer! u sure u will tell the one u love abt ur feelings?" Prem said like confirming
Heer felt weird yet Good at his question.. she found herself blushing...Sudden question arised in her mind.. What ! why the hell r u blushing..He is just asking a simple question..kicking her stupid thoughts out She just Nodded
"and will u tell me the name of person..?" Prem continued not quite noticing her red cheeks..
"yes i will Prem..u r my best friend afterall" Heer said offering him her hand.."lets go now"
Prem held her hand getting up as they walked back to their class.
Flashback end
Prem was smiling like Fools as he looked back at the Days when he was so stupid to think that he loves his maths teacher...heer was right that was just a crush! Loving someone is just so different, you feel so complete with them..as he feels with Heer.. Your heart just think about them when they are not with you.. like he thinks about Heer... You juts cant stop adoring them..Like he does..whenever he Looks at Heer..he nothing but adore her..her beauty..her Long Black Hairs, her Beautiful Deep Brown Eyes with an unknown spark in them..Her Soft Pink Lip, not only her physical beauty but sher talkig style..the way she cares for everyone..always ready to help..Everything. He cant stop himself adoring her.. she is just perfect.
'Heer when will u tell ur love that u love him.. or atleast tell ur Best Friend that u love someone..in either case its same'
he thought..
He was so much engrossed in his thought that didnt realise when Preet came at sat beside him.. "Hey buddy!" Preet said rather shouting.. making prem jump on his seat.."oh sorry..didnt mean to scare u.." Preet said giving his signature smile
"Its Okay not ur fault..thats just in ur nature" Prem said Dryly as someone disturbed his beautiful thoughts..Preet just ignored his comment..
"So whats happening.. Completed ur part of Project?" Preet asked
"yeah doing it just about to finish..will compelet it before time..Dont worry"Prem replied
"What still working...! i compeleted mine part two days ago..and u still working"Preet said
"Thats bcz u just had to do theory work.. mine is calculations and all..and it takes time!..Plus i m busy with some other things" Prem answered
"Otherthings.. HhhMmm.. is that thing has Long Hairs..Beautiful ey-"
"PREET!!!" Prem said in stern tone giving him dirty look
"hahaha! just kidding..Dont get angry" Preet said as he opened his book and started reading it
'May be Preet is right.. but she is not a thing.. She is Everything to him.. she is his Life..' His thoughts again interuppted when he heard a voice this time serious tone of his Professor as he started the lecture..
Prem just sighed for being intruppted second time this day..
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Heer ran here and there collecting her things as she was really late for college..and Prem would be waiting for her downstairs.. she put all her things in her bag..took last look of her in mirror..and left the room. As she came in livingroom there was a complete silence...then she checked kitchen noone was there even..she thought may be Prem would be waiting in car so she went outside but found empty car in garage...Then went back inside..upstairs to the Prem's room.. she knocked the door and announced"i m coming"
As she entered she found Prem laying on Bed on his stomach, his hair were a complete mess..she wanted to rum her fingers through his haris, his one arm was under his pilow,second one on his other side and sleeping peacfully..Heer found herself drooling over his Sleeping form..he was looking so cute yet so handso-
Her thoughts intruppted by loud voice of snoring echoing in silent room..heer couldnt help but started laughing as he was snoring so loud...she walked over to his bed..picked up a pillow that was laying on his side..and smacked it on his face making Prem suddenly got up in alarm still Sleepy..
"What..what happened??.."Prem said in sleepy tone "Heer its you?" he said rubbing his eyes..
"yeah its me..hehe" heer said trying to control her laugh...she was laughing so hard that tears formed in her eyes..
"why are u laughing?" Prem inquired as he got up and sat on his bed.
"you were snoring so badly" heer said as she again starting laughing remembering the scene.
"No i wasnt.."
"yes u were"
"NO!"
"Yes"
"NO"
"Ohh really..prem u were sleeping..how would u know whether u were snoring or not?!?" Heer said giving 'i have point' look.
"whatever!" Prem exclamied "what are u doing here?"
"Ohh God..Prem we are late for college.." heer said as she remembered why she came here
"ohh i m sorry! didnt wakeup..slept really late at night was completing Project..Give me 10 mins i will downstairs" Prem said
"okay be fast dont want to miss other lectures" Heer said and left the room.
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Prem was sitting in College canteen waiting for Gang.. Heer,Preet and Meher.
"Hey Buddy.." Preet said as he sat on the chair next to prem.
"Hey..where did u go after Presentation..i thought u would give me treat.." Said Prem with smile.
"treat for wat.." preet said acting all innocent
"hey! i deserve one..we got highest marks in class for presentation"
"in ur Dreams" Preet replied carelessly
Before Prem could say anything he saw someone coming towards tere table with wide smile on her face. Prem Got up to welcome her..
"He-.."Prem didnt finish his snetensce when he felt her arms around his neck..and next moment she was hugging him. Prem broke apart as he was feeling uncomfortable..
"Hey Prem, How r u?? its been four months.."
"Hey sanjana..i m Good.. how r u?.." as soon as Prem complated his sentence his eyes fell on a girl coming towards them with lil upset look..it was Heer.. Prem could see slight jealousy in her eyes..might be she had seen them hugging.
"Hey" Heer said as she joined them.

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yeah sanjana..😆 bechari..
Just want to tell u..Sanjana track is just timepass..
actual track will be diclosed in next Update.. 😛
Soo That was the Update..🥱
I Hope it wasnt Boring..
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Waiting for ur Comments.. 😳😃
Love Noorie
Edited by Noor_PremHeer - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
FINALLY! we got the update
nywz it nice update!
hmmm heer is jealous but u know wat i want 2 c jealous prem also.
i hope sanjana is not a negative character
cont soon, pls zyada der tak intazaar mat karwana pls
thanx 4 PM
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Posted: 14 years ago

????


for this special thanks goes to nabz... really wanna give a big hug to u...

are u sure???

fine fine... the update was...

i was super excited.. for this one...



so sweet...

cute just like... me???? no???


from the start till end...

Its been 4 months now, heer came to canada..and with every passing moment Heer was falling for prem deeply.. Though she had realised her feelings for Prem when she was in India but in this short span of time her feelings had grown more for him and on otherhand..Prem also couldnt resist

ohhh so heer's heart is beating fr prem...
heart to heart connection... hm... the heer go and tell prem no.. and prem y r u waiting fr her .. just go and tell her that

simple...

and omg prem ahd a crush on his teacher????

er thoughts intruppted by loud voice of snoring echoing in silent room..heer couldnt help but started laughing as he was snoring so loud...she walked over to his bed..picked up a pillow that was laying on his side..and smacked it on his face making Prem suddenly got up in alarm still Sleepy..
"What..what happened??.."Prem said in sleepy tone "Heer its you?" he said rubbing his eyes..
"yeah its me..hehe" heer said trying to control her laugh...she was laughing so hard that tears formed in her eyes..
"why are u laughing?" Prem inquired as he got up and sat on his bed.
"you were snoring so badly" heer said as she again starting laughing remembering the scene.
"No i wasnt.."
"yes u were"
"NO!"
"Yes"
"NO"


omg prem snoring.. that's bad.. bechari heer shadi ke bad kya hoga?????

Hey Prem, How r u?? its been four months.."
"Hey sanjana..i m Good.. how r u?.." as soon as Prem complated his sentence his eyes fell on a girl coming towards them with lil upset look..it was Heer.. Prem could see slight jealousy in her eyes..might be she had seen them hugging.
"Hey" Heer said as she joined them.

i'll kill this sanjana...
wait wait not ma words heer's words...

so some 1 is jealous... hmmm

lets see what happens... for that...



for the wonderful update and also for the pm... now dnt make us wait long and update soon...

love u take care...

Love is much like a wild rose, beautiful and calm, but willing to draw blood in its defense

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Posted: 14 years ago

That was an really really awesome, fantastic part!!!

Loved it…

Both are being stupid waiting for the other to

confess…

Hehehe prem loved his math teacher… that part was really hilarious… u know the way he saying that he love his math teacher…

he was 17 then OMG… hahahha

Prem is holding back himself just because of the thing she said in the college…

"Loving someone is just so different, you feel so complete with them..as he feels with Heer.. Your heart just think about them when they are not with you.. like he thinks about Heer... You juts cant stop adoring them..Like he does..whenever he Looks at Heer..he nothing but adore her..her beauty..her Long Black Hairs, her Beautiful Deep Brown Eyes with an unknown spark in them..Her Soft Pink Lip, not only her physical beauty but sher talkig style..the way she cares for everyone..always ready to help..Everything. He cant stop himself adoring her.. she is just perfect."… awww…..that was such a romantic thing to say….

Loved all the prem heer parts… their interactions and all…

Sanjana.. ufff… she is just a time pass.. feeling better knowing that… I am thinking prem is gonna use her to make heer jealous …

Thanks for the pm…


Eagerly waiting for the next part…

Continue super duper soon!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update...
loved d jealous heer...hehe...thnx for d pm...do update soon nxt part
waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
ahhh finally u updateddd!!

the update was awesumeee👏!!

loved it...heer was jealous...nyce n prem noticed it...super nyceee⭐️

i hope thiz sanjana 😡 is not a DEEWAR b/w thm😛!!! hhehhe

do update soonn...don't take that much tyme as u took for thiz onee

plz update soon

and add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was an awesome update...👏 loved it ...waiting for the next part ...
please update soon ...
and add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for next ...
Update soon ...
Thnx for pm ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Noor

I'm new & just caught up with all the chapters - hey it's going great so far 😃

Best part in your concept is Prem + Heer are best friends 👍🏼 It makes lot of sense!
I love your idea of skype chat 👍🏼 Very practical!
The scenes created to show their friendship seemed natural!!

Wow Veera is so matured 😲 I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw what she said to Heer in the car -when they were going shopping , right before Heer was leaving 😆

I'm interested to know how Premeer will confess their feelings. Dialogues are good, we can easily relate to it 👍🏼 I like the comic relief you bring in whenever possible! All the characters you introduced up to now, fall into place with the story!!

It'd be more fun to see Meher Heer & Preet Prem scenes with masti either together or separately.
Hope you'll have motivation to continue & complete the story.

It's fantastic you write FF Noor and all the best 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

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