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Posted: 13 years ago
great update dear!!
pls continue your current track!!
im realy enjoying it.
its realy fun to read.
continue soon!!
seems like maan will be jelouse because the two.went out for a "date" and watching movies together.
cant wait for it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 51

Geet: wow movie...which movie?

Dev: hmmm

Just then maan entered listening to their words he screamed in surprise and shock

Maan:kya? Movie?

Dev and geet turned listening to him

Dev:bro aap yaha? Aap to office jane wale the na.

Maan: haan..mein mobile bhool gaya wo lene aaya

Dev: achaa bro teekai

Dev turned back to geet and asked her again.

Dev: BHABHI...aap bolo na

Dev wantedly stressed on the word bhabhi looking at maan while maan is giving him stren looks.

Geet: wo..

Geet is about to speak when maan cut her in the middle and spoke.

Maan: what movie dev?

Dev: what bro...aap ko movie mein itna intrest kab se?

Maan: DEV

Dev: teekai teekai..movie ka naam jai..."MERE BROTHER KI DULHAN"

Maan: kya? Yeh kaisa naam hai?

Geet shouted in excitement totally ignoring maan.

Geet: wow dev...friends ne kaha ki yeh movie bohot acha hai...even I saw the trailers and I loved them...pata hai maan iss movie mein imran bohot cute hai

Dev: haan geet...aur kat bhi...kya acting kiya hain...rock star ki tarah...hain na

Geet: haan haan...aur imraan to uska bhai keliye dulhan doondne aaya aur khud pyaar mein phasgaya kat ke saat...

Dev: wahi to...bro ki dulhan bangaya uski pyaar

Geet: haan dev...concept to bohot intresting hai na

Dev: haan BHABHI

Maan is listening to them with his eyes wide open and now he cant take any more. He felt as if their convo is pointed to him...so he finally shouted.

Maan: bas...ab dono bas karo.

Geet: kya hua maan?

Maan: geet tum movie dekhne nahi jaavogi.

Geet got angry.

Geet: kyun? Kyun nahi jaavun...kyun? bolo kyun?😡

Geet advanced towards maan shouting at him. With every step she took towards him...he took a step back.

Maan: haaa...wo...nahi...wo...mai...🤔

Geet: bolo

Maan finally composed himself and said in a voice which he thought at the cold voice...huh but not totally he he😆

Maan: mein ne kaha na nahi...to bas nahi

But geet to geet hai...she is not effected even a little by his so called stern voice.

Maan decreased his voice a bit low and tried in a convincing voice this time knowing geet well.

Maan: geet plz suno tum akele nahi jaavungi

Geet: akele? Mein akele nahi jaarahi hoon maan...dev hain na mere saat

Maan: phir bhi.

Geet: maan what the hell is this? Kya hua tum ko? Y r u behaving so stupidly...I m not a kid to get lost in crowd...i m going and that final.😡

Maan: hmmm teekai but take pari along with u🤔

Geet: pari? But maan u tld not to meet any of my clg friends until some days na

Maan: haan don't meet her outside tell her to come directly to theater.

Geet: wow idea to acha hai...ok then I wil call pari and inform her.😃

She went back to her room to call pari.

part 52

part 53

part 54

part 55

part 56

part 57

part 59

part 60

part 61 onwards


guys part 52 is comming

and pm's i will do tomorrow...actually feeling so sleepy but wrote 3 updates now itself...so long day today...hope u understand

plz comment

guys i know there will be lots of mistakes in my Hindi coz i m not so good at that language so plz o\ignore my mistake

Edited by teju2292 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 51

Dev smiled inwardly thinking how possesive maan is about geet and how geet is not effected by maan's anger and how she easily shouted on him and how maan feared her temper. He is actually enjoying the whole…..kaash dadima yaha ho to….he thought.

Maan: dev tum geet ko akele nahi chodoge….pari uski dost hai wo avogi…phir bhi tum uske saat thi rehna…..kuch bhi problem hai to call me immediately.

Dev: teekai bro…but problem kyun hogi?

Maan: wo uski famly…arhh kuch nahi…..bas meine kya kaha wahi karo

Dev: teekai bro

Maan: I m going to office see u I in evening both be careful.

Maan left for office and dev sat there thinking…….

" I thinkk I should clear somethings in my mind….hoshiyarpur mein shaadi se bhaag kar delhi aayi…geet. Waha sab ne socha ki geet kisi aur se pyaar kiya aur ghar se bhaag gayi uske saat……..par yaha dekho to geet yaha hain……..bro ke saath……in dono ko dekh ke aisa lag raha hai…..bro ko geet pasand hai aur if I m not wrong he is secretly in love with her……aur geet ko bhi bro pasand hai…dekha na kithna free hai geet bro ke saat…par I dunno whether she luv him or not……par yeh baath to clear hai ki geet kisi aur se pyaar nahi kiya……agar kisi se pyaar nahi kiya to who shaadi se bhaag kar kyun gayi? Aur bro bhi kuch kam nahi hai……agar wo geet se pyaar kar raheho toh uske saath shaadi kyun chodkar aaya? Agar yeh dono ek dusare ko pasand kiya toh khud ki

shaadi kyun toda inhone? O.m.g…..i donoki baare mein soch soch kar mere dimag blast hogavogi…….arhhh…..

Arey mein pehle dadimaa ko yeh batana hai ki geet kisi aur se pyaar nahi kiya aur geet bro ek dusre ko pasand karthen hai aur geet yaha KM mein hain…….shaayad geet ki family ab bhi unhe dhood raha hai…pata nahi wo log kaisa react karege…us family ke baaremein predict karna bhi mushkil hai…..pehle jaake dadima se baath karunga"


plz sorry guys

i know this part is sooo small

but what can i do...i want dadima's entry in new part so stopped her...

now plz give me lots of comments

i will be back 2mmrow...

gd n8 guys

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow its awesome
all three updates r lovely
cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!!!
OMG!!! they were suppose to get married than why the hell they both run away...
Their faces would be worth watching when they come to know that they were about to get married
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful super brilliant fabulous updates
love it core
ty for triple update
waiting next
thnx so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome parts!!
finaly confusion is over!!
cant wait for dadis entry. ik sure she will be imprest by geet and they will team up against maan.
continue soon dear!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my Maan and Geet were getting married and they both ran away from their wedding only plz add me 2 ur PM list loved the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..superb update.
so geet n maan were getting married to each other.
n both didnt knw.
wow..love it.
thx
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was nice...
maan is over protective abt geet😉...
geet ran out off maan only hun😆 in marriage...
interesting...looking fwd...

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