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Posted: 13 years ago
superb updates luvd dem
plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x
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wow geet meeting dadi hmmm 😊
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awesome updatess
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Part 59

At nearly mid night-maan's bedroom.

Maan's bedroom door opened lightly and a person came in tiptoeyed. They came near the bed and sat on the bed with their knees.

Maan felt someone else wait on the bed and instantly caught hold of the person by their wrist and pulled them towards him and turned them over the bed such that now he is on the top and switched on the light.

"geet???" maan shocked seeing at the person "geet tum yaha kya karrahiho?"

"umm…ummm"

"what?" maan said again

"ummm" geet pointed towards her mouth which was closed by maan's hand.

"oh sorry" maan removed him hand from her mouth.

" ab batav tum yaha kyun ayi ho?" maan asked getting up from the bed.

"tumhe churane keliye" geet sat on the bed with her legs crossed.

"kya?" maan asked looking confused and surprised.

"aur nahi to kya……" geet

"geeet" maan gritted his teeth knowing that she joked.

"maan I want ice cream" geet declared

"kya?" maan

"tum ko kya kya keheki bemari hai kya?" geet

Maan "aur tum pregnant ho kya"

Geet "maan aap kaise kaise bathe karthe hai….chi chi babaji"

Maan "meine kya kaha…u r having carvings"

Geet "kya carvings"

Maan "food carvings"

Geet " who kya?"

Maan " geet……… forget it………….tell me what do u want know"

Geet " icecream"

Maan " are u mad geet? Its mid night and u want icecream?"

Geet "haan"

Maan "geet go and sleep"

Geet " maan plz I want ice cream"

Maan "geet meine kaha na go and sleep"

Geet stood up angrily "ok I m going….but not for sleeping"

Maan stood up and came beside her "geet listen I will buy u one tomorrow morning now go and sleep"

Geet "I dint come for ur permission….just came to tell u that I m going"

Maan "no…u wont go alone"

Geet "iseliye to aap ke paas ayi hoon……u told me na moring that u will take me any where I want"

Maan "but not at this time"

Geet "ok don't come…who asked u to come….i m going bas" geet stromed out of his room and maan flowed her "geet plz ruko"

Geet instead of going towards stairs she went to her room and maan followed. He took as sigh of relief as they entered her room "good gee tab so jao like a good…" but before he complete his sentence geet jumped out of the window.

Maan shouted "geeet" and immediately ran to the window. She came up as she said "maan chillav math….everyone will wake up"

Geet is standing in the sir holding a long cloth which she tied to the window and dropping down touching the ground.

"geet tum pagal hogayi kya" maan said this time slowly but angrily.

"na" she said and went down saying "bye maan"

"geet ruko" maan said but now she was on the ground.

He went out of the room and went out to the garden throught the main door and saw here and there looking for her and atlast found her at the far end of the garden trying to jump the wall using a ladder.

He ran to her but she was now on the wall standing.

"geet come down….what r u doing…..u will get hurt" maan said trying to maintain calm.

"nai maan…I did it many times" geet said smiling

"many times?" maan confused.

"haan I went to eat icecream like this many times from hostel" geet said proudly.

"alone?" maan wondered.

"nai pari ke saath" geet said and turned to the other side

"geet now wat r u doing?" maan shouted from down.

"jump" geet said

"kya!!!" maan panicked.

"haan….wo kya hai na…we don't have ladder that side na ….so I m jumping" geet said and jumped.

maan was shocked to dead when he saw her jumping "geeet…omg" maan climed the ladder and was now standing on the wall and looked at the other side.

Geet stood on the road smiling at him.

"geet r u alright?" maan worried but she gave a big grin and walked away saying "bye maan"

Maan jumped from the wall and followed her.

The music started………..

"geet mere baath suno" maan followed her while geet walked ahead ignoring maan.

Maan: paune bara baje
dono ghar se chale
whats going on - 2

Maan reached geet and now they both are walking together.

soye hain raaste
yeh kaha ham chale
whats going on – 2

geet turned around facing maan and walked back singing….

Geet: bulaya kisine tumhein kya
yaha jo tum lehrake aaye

Geet turned again and walked front to maan trowing her head up in symbol of proudness.


kare ham jo chahe tumhein kya
jo aaye hamko samjhane
ham toh chale
pitche tum ho pade
whats going on - 2

Maan: paune bara baje
dono ghar se chale
whats goin on – 2


hey hey hey - 2

maan came to geet held her hand and pulled her back towards the mansion

maan: chalo chodo nakhre dikhana
duniya ka na koi thikana

geet snapped his hand and again moved forwards with maan following her.

geet: kaha seekha baatein yeh banana banana
duniya se hamko yu bachana bachana

maan: ladki ho tum dekh na patchtaaogi
bandhi hui laut ke phir aaogi

geet: seekha hamne jaakar phir na wapas aana
ham toh chale
pitche tum ho pade
whats going on - 2


maan: paune bara baje
dono ghar se chale
whats going on - 2

geet saw a icream retailor on a 3 wheeler and ran to him. Maan ran after her. she bought a choco bar and started licking that. Maan saw her licking the ice bar and is lost in her….her lips felt so inviting to him…..her rosy lips……..

she finished her bar and bought another one and continued her walk.

Maan stood there lost for some time and when he saw her leaving he ran after her.

geet: chalo hamein itna batao batao
parwaah tumhein kyon yeh sunaioo sunaao

maan: parwaah kise hain jaao jaao ha jaao
reh lo akeli jo reh paao reh paao

geet: rehna pade toh chalo reh jaayenge
thodi kami yeh chalo seh jaayenge

maan: toh fir jao rehlo sehlo phir batlaao
ham toh chale
pitche tum ho pade
whats going on - 2

geet: bulaya kisine tumhein kya yaha jo tum lehrake aaye
kare ham jo chahe tumhein kya jo aaye hamko samjhane
ham toh chale
pitche tum ho pade
whats going on - 2

maan and geet: paune bara baje
dono ghar se chale
whats going on - 2
soye hain raaste yeh kaha ham chale
whats going on - 2
paune bara baje dono ghar se chale
whats going on – 2

they finally reached the mansion.

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! superbbb yaar...
geet zidhi😆...poor maan😆...
i loved it...looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago

omg geet is too good i loved this part continue soon

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
let dadi caught them... paune bahra ke bajaye dono ki shakal pr direct barah baj jayenge
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Posted: 13 years ago
i should definitive get lessons from geet to learn how to run away in the niddle in the night and come back without anyone noticing!!
awesome part!!
continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsomeee .. superbb 😃😃 It would be soo much fun if dadi catches them 😉😆😆 I really wanna see their reaction when they get to know they were getting married to each other 😉
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...

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