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Part 50
hey all
thanks for ur loads of comments...loved them all...and u asked me y dev called geet babhi and that will be reaveled in comming 2 parts and ur expectations that is maan the BRIDE GROOM...hmmm u will know that in next part which i m going to update if possible today itself...coz i cant stop my self...and well ritzy(ritzy09) dear u said there is no progression in the story...i understand u...thanks for ur valuable comment...but dear let me tell u actually i thought to write this story giving main importance to fun and masti...geet's jovial and lovely character and maan falling for her...cant this story go like this..i mean this story is not like...they meet fall in love...some problems...they solve...again their romance...then their marriage...then famiy things...and other...hmmm.. not like that...yes this story HAS and WILL have fun...love...romance and jealous also...but but turley to say i dont actually have a great story like other ff writers has...this is just maaneet and completely maaneet...
if any one of u guys dont like this story plz tell me without any hesitation...i wont mind it and will welcome it with happiness...and if u guys want i will forward the story and make it fast skipping things like dev and geet outing and maan becoming jealous then he accepting his feeling then with geet...geet going close to maan...actually this is my track...if u want i will cut and write this all in one update and will complete the story in 5 0r 6 updates...
plz let me know ur views...
and ritzy i m not angry or sad at u...really happy to know ur mind...thanks a lot for the comment dear...
and here it goes the next update...
Dev is looking at them all shocked. This is the first time some one is shouting at maan other than dadima
...and in return maan is smiling.
Geet went back to her room making all kinds of faces.
After geet disappered maan turned to dev.
Maan: dev will u explain y u called geet as babhi?
Dev who is looking at the place geet left turned to her bro and stammered in answering maan.
Dev: bro...wo...wo bro...wo
Maan: haan dev aage bolo
Dev: bro...wo...ohhh wait...aap mujhe yeh ouchne se pehle yeh batav ki yeh ladki kaun ho aur wo yaha kya kar rahe hai aur wo aap se aisa easily baat kar rahi hain...chakkar kya hai bro...
Maan: shut up dev..meine kaha na she is my friend'
Dev: friend...ooohhh...kab se????...mujhe pata bhi nahi ki aap ko GIRL...FRIEND hain
Maan: DEV...
Dev: haan batav na bro.
Maan: she is not my girl friend...she is just my friend.
Dev: haan haan wahi to keh raha hoon...girl hai aur friend bhi hai...to bangaya na girl friend.
Maan: shut up dev...mujhe kaam hai I m not irresponsible like u...i m leaving for office...
Maan left for office leaving a grinning dev at his back.
Dev: huh bro got u...dekhna ab mein kya karunga...hmm...ab ayega asli mazaa...babhi here I come...
Dev sat back at the breakfast table and started having his breakfast. Geet came downstairs and sat at the breakfast table.
Dev: hey geet...to aaj ka plans kya hai?
Geet: kuch nahi dev...boring hai
Dev: arey aisa kaisa hosaktha hai...r u not going out with bro?
Geet: huh maan? Uski baat na karo to hi achaa hai.
Dev: arey aisa kyun?
Geet: kitna boring hai tumhara bro...every time office and work...
Dev: yeh baat to sahi hai babhi...oops I mean geet.
Geet: dev ek baat puchu?
Dev:haan...
Geet: tum mujhe babhi kehke kyun bula raheho?
Dev: uhh...aivin aisa muh se nikal gaya...ahhh...wo sab chodona geet...yeh batav kya aaj tum mere saat moive dekhne chalogi?
Geet: wow movie...which movie?
Dev: hmmm
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