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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVELY OE
SO now dev says maan that
she is the gilr whom he want to marry
great dear
but i m not getting the link to open
plz check and give

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww iam just read this ff
This story remind me a telugu movie cslled SASI REKHA PARINAYAM.
But it is awesome
plzzz update the next part asap
add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago


Very beautiful updates...Dev called her Bhabhi...oh thank God...warna to I thought ki love triangle na shuru ho jaaye... but I loved Dev-Geet bonding as Dewar-Bhabhi...now they both will make Maan's life hell...please make them irritate Maan...and Maan taling badla from Geet...it will be real fun..

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amaazing;D:D
|Cont sooon;D
thanks for the pm;D;D
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! superbbb updates yaar...
that means geet is ran out from maan only hun😆...
whether maan knows that??????????
looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
thankfully dev recognizes her as bhabhi gud boy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
hw cum cumz devs callin geet bhabhi afta der 1st meetin
plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvd ds ff...
pls add me to ur pm list..pls..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 50


hey all

thanks for ur loads of comments...loved them all...and u asked me y dev called geet babhi and that will be reaveled in comming 2 parts and ur expectations that is maan the BRIDE GROOM...hmmm u will know that in next part which i m going to update if possible today itself...coz i cant stop my self...and well ritzy(ritzy09) dear u said there is no progression in the story...i understand u...thanks for ur valuable comment...but dear let me tell u actually i thought to write this story giving main importance to fun and masti...geet's jovial and lovely character and maan falling for her...cant this story go like this..i mean this story is not like...they meet fall in love...some problems...they solve...again their romance...then their marriage...then famiy things...and other...hmmm.. not like that...yes this story HAS and WILL have fun...love...romance and jealous also...but but turley to say i dont actually have a great story like other ff writers has...this is just maaneet and completely maaneet...

if any one of u guys dont like this story plz tell me without any hesitation...i wont mind it and will welcome it with happiness...and if u guys want i will forward the story and make it fast skipping things like dev and geet outing and maan becoming jealous then he accepting his feeling then with geet...geet going close to maan...actually this is my track...if u want i will cut and write this all in one update and will complete the story in 5 0r 6 updates...

plz let me know ur views...

and ritzy i m not angry or sad at u...really happy to know ur mind...thanks a lot for the comment dear...

and here it goes the next update...



Dev is looking at them all shocked. This is the first time some one is shouting at maan other than dadima

...and in return maan is smiling.

Geet went back to her room making all kinds of faces.

After geet disappered maan turned to dev.

Maan: dev will u explain y u called geet as babhi?

Dev who is looking at the place geet left turned to her bro and stammered in answering maan.

Dev: bro...wo...wo bro...wo

Maan: haan dev aage bolo

Dev: bro...wo...ohhh wait...aap mujhe yeh ouchne se pehle yeh batav ki yeh ladki kaun ho aur wo yaha kya kar rahe hai aur wo aap se aisa easily baat kar rahi hain...chakkar kya hai bro...

Maan: shut up dev..meine kaha na she is my friend'

Dev: friend...ooohhh...kab se????...mujhe pata bhi nahi ki aap ko GIRL...FRIEND hain

Maan: DEV...

Dev: haan batav na bro.

Maan: she is not my girl friend...she is just my friend.

Dev: haan haan wahi to keh raha hoon...girl hai aur friend bhi hai...to bangaya na girl friend.

Maan: shut up dev...mujhe kaam hai I m not irresponsible like u...i m leaving for office...

Maan left for office leaving a grinning dev at his back.

Dev: huh bro got u...dekhna ab mein kya karunga...hmm...ab ayega asli mazaa...babhi here I come...

Dev sat back at the breakfast table and started having his breakfast. Geet came downstairs and sat at the breakfast table.

Dev: hey geet...to aaj ka plans kya hai?

Geet: kuch nahi dev...boring hai

Dev: arey aisa kaisa hosaktha hai...r u not going out with bro?

Geet: huh maan? Uski baat na karo to hi achaa hai.

Dev: arey aisa kyun?

Geet: kitna boring hai tumhara bro...every time office and work...

Dev: yeh baat to sahi hai babhi...oops I mean geet.

Geet: dev ek baat puchu?

Dev:haan...

Geet: tum mujhe babhi kehke kyun bula raheho?

Dev: uhh...aivin aisa muh se nikal gaya...ahhh...wo sab chodona geet...yeh batav kya aaj tum mere saat moive dekhne chalogi?

Geet: wow movie...which movie?

Dev: hmmm


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Edited by teju2292 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome!!!
This Dev is upto something
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

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