ff-mg-pyaar ya shaadi!!!#1-pt 63- see new thread - Page 54

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great part dear!!
i have a feeling that dev will flirt a lot with geet. geet on the other hand will like it and maan will be out of his mind with jelousy, the feeling that geet will give in to dev and of loosing her forever.
ok ok. i talked again tooo much!!
continue sooon dear!!

awesome ... superb ...

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loved ur ff..
lol...so funny n cute...keep updating yaar :)
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Part 49

Geet returned the smile and went to her room.

Next day morning

Maan came down calling for nakul.

Maan: nakul….nakulll…

Nakul: ji saab

Maan: nakul breakfast arrange karo.

Nahul: ji

Nakul went in kitchen to bring maan's break fast.

Maan sat at the table and took the newspaper and started reading.

" hey bro" dev came from behind and sat opposite to maan.

Maan: hi dev when did u come.

Dev: just an hr before bro. how r u?

Maan: I m fine. Did u fresh up?

Dev: haan bro.

Maan: ok come on have ur breakfast.

Dev: hmm

Dev sat before the table as nakul served the breakfast to both.

Maan: nakul did geet wake up?

Dev who just kept a spoon in his mouth spit out listening to maan.

Dev: bro….kaun?

Maan turned to dev as he said.

Maan: geet….my…..

"friend" came a voice from their behind.

Dev turned to see who and he came infront of geet who stood their keeping her hands on her hip in her night suit. She came towards him and extended her hand as she spoke.

Geet: hi dev this is geet…maan ki dost…hain na maan.

She said last words looking at maan.

Maan: hmm

Dev is surprised and shocked at a same time. He dint respond. Then geet again called him.

Geet: dev…..DEV

Dev came out of his shock with a jerk and he said.

Dev: bhabhi?

Geet and maan are shocked at this and they spoke at a time.

Geet and maan: bhabhi????

Geet started at maan confused but maan returned her the same confused expression.

Maan: dev what are u speaking?

Dev came to his senses and he tried to cover up.

Dev: haan…wo…me….i….i mean bhai….haan bhai…yeh kaun hai?

Maan: hmmm???...yeah geet hai……kaha na meri dost.

Dev: oh….nice to meet u geet.

Dev extended his hand and they both shook their hands. They withdraw their hands and geet again spoke.

Geet: dev thank god u came..warna pata nahi yaha iss ghar mein mera kya haal hoga. Pata hai kyun…tumhara bhai jo hain na wo…

Maan interrupted in the middle…

Maan: oh oh oh geet give a break. Bechara abhi aya aur tum use dara raheho. Todi der tumhari bak bak band karo.

Geet turned away from maan in anger.

Geet: dev tum breakfast karo mein tumse baad mein baath karungi….bohot sari baath karni hai…tumhara bhai ke baremein bhi kehna hai….teekai!!!...

Maan: pehle jao aur fresh hojav…..

Geet screamed at maan in anger: haan haan ja rahi hoon…

Dev is looking at them all shocked. This is the first time some one is shouting at maan other than dadima

….and in return maan is smiling.

loved both the updates dear...great updates but I don't know why I can't get to understand where we are going...I mean, every update by tiself is great and I love it but when I think about the entire FF, there isn't much progress as per the story...they met...travelled...Geet ran from shaadi and now staying in Maan's house...I hope you got what i mean..and sorry if I hurt you...it's just that I will like to see some story progression...Geet's past...Maan's past...their feelings...in some way

thanks for the pm HUN!!

lovely update...