My FF on the next episode [please comment]

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I posted this in Kriyansh AT and I thought I'd post it here as well

First off guys---My hindi sucks really bad when I type it lol so I hope you all understand-Hope u all like my singingšŸ˜†

Rey is beating the crap out of the guy in the Basketball court. [In the actual college] Someone runs and informs that there is a fight outside. All the students, like usual, get all excited and run to witness the fight. Nilesh and Vicky are the only Dazzlers present as Sharon, Simmi and Rinni are off in rehearsals waiting for the boys to come. Along with the crowd the Weaklings minus Kriya come running out. In the canteen...Kriya is running around doing the packup for the day and notices how everyone is running outside. Curiously, she decides to join them. [Outside] Rey is beating the guy up and he has made him bloody. Nilesh and Vicky are shocked that one of the fighters is Rey. They rush by his side and grab hold of him. Vicky-"Rey yeh kya kare ho?" Nilesh-"Have you gone mad." Rey brushes off their grasp on him and continues beating on the guy. Kriya on the other hand, has finally cleaned and has come outside. She pushes through the crowd to see what the camotion is all about. She is shocked to see Rey beating on that same guy from the canteen. Rey stops as his eyes meet Kriya's. He is full of rage, anger and jealousy...while Kriya looks at him in disbelief and anger. Nilesh and Vicky tells the guy's friend to take him away and tells everyone to clear out cuz there was nothing else to see. The only people remaining on the basketball court are Nilesh-Vicky-Rey-Kriya-Dazzlers. Kriya and Rey's eyes are locked both giving off their emotions. Swayam notices and tells everyone to leave Rey alone right now because he is not in the mood to talk...and Swayam decides to give Kriya and Rey some private time to talk.





Everyone leaves and Rey breaks the eyelock and turns around. Kriya goes up to him and says..."Have you lost it! Yeh aap ne kya kiya?" "Aapne unko kyun...Kriya's words get cut off as Rey turns around and stares at her with his rageful face still on. Rey-"Yeh tum pooche re ho?" "Usne kya kiya?" Kriya shouts back- "To kya? Usne to bus mere question ka answer diya tha" "Jo questions aapne leke the!" Rey gets angry and grabs Kriya by the shoulders and pins her to the wall. [ooohooo aaahhhaaa music LOL] look look hawa hawa. Rey stares at her with his bad boy face on and he aggressively holds her against the wall. Kriya just stares at the tension that is spread over Rey's face. Rey speaks- "Koi be tumko is tara kuch be bole, uske halat yehi hogi!" Rey aggressively tightens his grip on her and is hurting her arms.She tries to fight it but she loses every time and every time he comes closer and closer. Now Kriya and Rey are 1 inch apart and Rey whispers "No one...I mean no one... can say anything to my Romaira" [Female version--huuunnnhahaa ooohooo aaahhhooo]Look look hawa hawa...Kriya almost melts as she gazes into his eyes...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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mast hai.. :P night coll khol diya aapne toh wid every1 in coll at night as well.. :P i cud so imagine this scene.. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG IAM DEAD!!! I JUST LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVE IT...PLZZZ CONTINUE... NO U HAVE TO CONTINUE...THATS AN ORDER.HAHAHA ..I LOVED THE LAST LINE TOO... HAYEEE EVERYONE ON THIS FORUMS SHOULD BE IN CVS TEAM...


oMG U GUYS ARE CHUPA RUSTOMS... EVERYONE HERE IS A FF WRITER...!!!


(SORRY FOR CAPS..GOT EXCITED)



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Piyu luv ur broken teeth wala smile haha🤣...by d way how was ur internal???khatam kya???šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ekdum
faaadu
robin gal
tussi bade wadiya ho
hayye i came ol only for this as i had read ur other post abt u posting an ff
the last line TOOO armaanish but Now REYISHHH also
gal thanku so much for writing this
luv ya for this
P.S piyu
how was ur xam?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajen

ekdum

faaadu
robin gal
tussi bade wadiya ho
hayye i came ol only for this as i had read ur other post abt u posting an ff
the last line TOOO armaanish but Now REYISHHH also
gal thanku so much for writing this
luv ya for this
P.S piyu
how was ur xam?

hai na aarti...even i was lyk shit dats sooo armaanish nd reyissshhh ā˜ŗļøhahaha šŸ˜†agar aisa scene aaya aaj tho hum tho 300 pgs tak jha sakhthe haišŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetshine

hai na aarti...even i was lyk shit dats sooo armaanish nd reyissshhh ā˜ŗļøhahaha šŸ˜†agar aisa scene aaya aaj tho hum tho 300 pgs tak jha sakhthe haišŸ˜†

u c farah thats why i love u so much
u are twiniešŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@aarti,farah - theek thak thašŸ˜† ...only 10 mrks ka tha ...šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: 100littledevils

@aarti,farah - theek thak thašŸ˜† ...only 10 mrks ka tha ...šŸ˜†

ohhh PUREE 10 marks šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajen

u c farah thats why i love u so much

u are twiniešŸ˜†

hehehe i luv d word twiniešŸ˜†šŸ˜†
ok again i cnt like ur postsurrrghh dis is sooo buggingšŸ˜’

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