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Posted: 13 years ago
GUYS ITS NOT LETTING ME POSTBCS SIZE MORE SO I AM GOING TO UPDATE IN PIECES.. SO PLEASE DONT START READING UNTIL THERE IS SIGN UPDATING ON TOP PLZZZ
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Edited by anshra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hayy mujhe laga tune update kiya aur me firsyt,..sob sob sob..aanie ki bacchi is post ko hi edit kar..samjhi...!
mujeh first aana hai!!
*Wailinggg*
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wow annie yaar! loved it! totlly
so now whole office knows that hanky panky going on!!😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
hot hot hot upated tha😉😉
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yippie...
The devil is here...

First tell me what was Maan trying to do...???
Aise kaise love hota hai...??? 😆 😉
Well he is the devil he can do anything...par ha ha ha...

Awesome...
But the precap...!!!
Now i want him to carry her over his shoulder n kahi duuurrr leke jaaye...

Aaahhh...muje bhi devil chahiye...


Updt sooonn...
Love u...muaahhh


Edited by Vidushi89 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...update...update next part soon...w8ing
also accept frnd request
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lovely update yaar so maan is trying pull her into his jadoo jappi but geet tho geet he hei.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update 😊 now wating for next upadate😆 devil in love❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Annie tooo good. Finally i got to know the pay back 😆 Loved him. He is sooo damn hot and so cruel. not 5 now 10 min, that was so mean for our little Geet??? and Bechari geet waise hi was so scared🤗.
U are sooo sweets u wrote the payback and her reaction together. Love U for dat.

U have written brilliantly dear, both his love /lust for Geet and Geet who is so scared and now confused as she reacted to his touch but then anybody would (MSK who can resist him😉😆) and helpless as she cannot do anything, she was bound to react to a man touching her body, she is a woman.
Again waiting for MSK's reaction, what would it be now??????😉 and what would she do...😲 he is in the lift now as well
Questions:-
1) 10 min over or still few minutes are left ?😆
2) Will Geet ever fight back or remain such helpless girl, jiska advantage our Great MSK takes??? She paying all kinds of pay backs,(Which technically I(we) love) but bechari woh uske saath actually bura ho raha hai. 😉

Today my heart goes out for Geet,😭 poor girl, kitna kuch ho raha hai uske saath, actually sexual expliotation hai yeh toh.
She cannot even work properly, as she is always scared that MSK has his bad eyes on her, looking at her in such a manner. Generally slap is the answer for such things haina??? 🤗awww plz help her na thoda or make MSK realise thoda

NJOYED READING IT. PLZ UPDATE SOON. PHIR PHIR KYA HUA?????


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Posted: 13 years ago

What.. you didn't sent it? I can't believe it. do you have any idea what Maan sir is going to do now..? he will never tolerate such negligence.. Geet now you go and explain him..

Adi completed his sentence and almost ran from there..

Adi dint know that Maan sir had lost his heart to a lady and he can forgive her anytime

She stood there cursing herself for few minutes,thinking how would she face him now.. but there was no way.. she had to go..

Devil k chakker main Geet forgot that it was her dream job'and it is a job...she has responsibilities...

Seems like devil dil o dimagh pe chhaa chukka hai

Oh cut the crap.. you forgot it.. no problem.. it was not that important..

Yeah what could be more important than the lady love

...and after all its time to get the pay back

I actually liked when he said this and took her irresponsibility lightly... devil jitna bhi devil ho... he loves her a lot...

No its not.. not anymore.. so just relax.. you have better things to worry about..

Hmm here he comes to the point...

Don't you remember I like your hair open..?

he freed her hair roughly from her braid..

Chalo subha uth ker baal nahi banane parein ge...next time bring youe comb and give it to Devil to style these in his desired way

It's time for the payback nowh I think..

look like devil ne buhat socha hai pay back key baarey main

Aur waisey bhi... he can't sleep without Geet...so while awake he must be thinking of the ways to get payback last night

I want to love you.. he said restlessly leaning on her..

Aaw... I was thinking after last update, that what payback devil would ask for without crossing the limits...

And here comes the way...
I said I want to love you I never said that I would break that limit..

But how is it possible..?she looked at him confused..

Wait dear he will tell you...

Just let me love you for five minutes.. but you won't move or deny or retaliate for those five minutes..

Loving for 5 minutes...

My Gosh, I had least expect the timed love...

I mean loving someone is a spontaneous action na... the feelings come unintentionally... how can you time your feelings... like

Your time starts now...Ready steady get set go... start loving...

Why would I fear myself.. ? there is nothing to fear..
You will do so from next time onwards...fear of loosing yourself

He placed his other hand on her waist and pulled her closer.. She pushed him with all her strength and turned to move.. But he pulled her back crushing his chest to her bossoms with full force.. She could feel his raged breathing..

I told you only five minutes.. but you never listen.. Now ten minutes..

chalo not 5...now 10 minutes...poor Geet...

and wicked Devil...

ten minutes .. what will he do if I gave him ten minutes .. she dreaded the thought..

But what will he do if I didn't gave him ten minutes.. this thought was even more dreadful

Thank God she got that other wise 15 minutes...and so on..

She was still unable to decide when she felt his hands moving over her body..

He was barely touching her.. he lightly removed her dupata and threw it on floor..

He took deep breath in her hair to inhale her fruity scent.. Now he started caressing her back over her dress. And wherever he found naked skin.. he lingered there unnecessarily.. She closed her eyes tightly and tried to fight not to feel anything..

He moved around her and held her from back and whispered in her ear..

I love you..! at least let yourself feel once.. Just once..

No matter how much we all like Devil and no matter that he loves her, In the midst of all this we are forgetting Geet's situation... what kind of turmoil she is facing...

She doesn't love her... leave aside not loving... she hates her (as per Geet POV) so if such person tries to be intimate with you... this is the worst feeling one can ever face.. And you are so helpless that you can't even slap him tight... I feel really sad for the Geet here...cause whatever Maan feels for her, He is forcing himself on her... he is using his powers to make her love him back...

He turned her around..

she stood there while her eyes were still close, waiting for him to start.. but he was only watching her intently..

his penetrating gaze was torturing every bit of her.. she felt like he could touch her barely looking at her like that..

she clenched her fists in order to hide her anxiety..

he brushed his lips tightly over her lips.. she trembled.. but he gripped her tightly while pressing himself against her..

he brushed his lips on each part of her face..Then he started tracing her jaws making his was down.. He started kissing her above cleavage.. nibbling her leaving his marks all over..

She tilted her head.. but he started moving down.. although he was kissing her over her dress.. her direct skin was not in contact.. but still she felt herself burning.. she wanted too stop him so badly..

but her body was reacting differently.. she didn't loved him she knew it.. but she could feel some unknown anticipation ..some craving.. her hormones were ditching her.. he was stirring strange emotions in her..

But but but... you can NEVER give in to the person you hate...she has some feelings in her deep subconscious... like she showed trust on him in last update... and every time she expects him to do something good.. When you hate a person... you expect everything bad...

There was strange sensation going on.. her mind stopped responding.. she felt numb.. all she could hear was her erratic heart beat..

She held his nap tightly digging her nails into his skin in attempt to control herself..

Maan.. she moaned his name in attempt to stop him..

But this threw him further over the edge..

He started kissing her madly..

She lost track of time.. she didn't knew how much minutes has passed.. may be 2 may be 20.. but she was senseless.. she was trying hard to fight something..

He deepened the kiss.. he was way too lost in her..

she felt herself melting.. the temptation for forbidden truth overtook her senses.. for few seconds she lost herself.. and responded back ..

While his hand moved down to her curves.. she clutched his arm tightly.. He squeezed her sensitive part a little.. this was enough.. she couldn't take it any more..

They lost the track of time while kissing...ehm ehm... what does this implies...???

The scenes are beautifully written..

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me blush...

She pushed him with full force.. moved away from him trying to even her breathing..

What have I done..! she was disgusted at herself..

Why I have done this.. why..?

Tears started rolling down her face..

Yeah Geet it is like that... you were giving in...something inside you was losing it...giving in...

She wanted to bury herself somewhere.. she ran from his cabin, without realizing that her dupata was lying on the floor..

She ran towards the lift in a daze.. she didn't realized that she caught so much attention of the people around.. her were messy hair.. her dupata was missing.. and on top of all she was out of breath..

Oops lo ab poorey office ko pata chal gaya...koi kuch kahega to you will say sab Devil ki waja say... abb when did poor devil asked you to leave cabin without dupatta

She entered the lift and leaned on the wall of elevator.. She felt her heart will explode.. she didn't knew how to react..

Door was about to close when he entered inside..

Oho hum tum ek lift may band hoon aur power chali jaye...

Well like the last time as he dint cover her with sheet after saving her from goons... should we or shouldn't we expect him to bring her dupatta to her... as that time she was with him only and now she is in front of whole office...

Awesome update

Loved it

Continue Soon...

Please do make devil doing some good deeds... At least 1 good deed every next update... so that Geet can start falling for him and so can we...😉
Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update yaar
I think Geet is loosing herself to the Devil now
That was a hot update
She actually responded back to his kiss
What will happen in the lift now
Hum tum Ek lift mein bandh ho aur lift bandh padh jaye

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