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Posted: 13 years ago
oh gosh i was typing the comment...and it got lost
dont know what happen
i pressesd back space and it all lost
i wrote it nearly all the way uptil end
give me some time..
i was already late to comment
and now this
If really irritates me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats for new thread and nice part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Meera he is here..! Geet panicked in yash embrace
Here came the Devil...!
Oh God.. he cut rahul's finger for touching you.. and now he has seen me hugging you.. what should I do now ..? some one save me..
Yaar Yash to buhat Darpok nikla' how would he save Geet then
Meera are you mad..? don't you love me..? you are talking about courage..? What will you do of that courage if I am dead.. I don't know in how many pieces he will be cutting me..

He is right who wants to live with broken body parts

Without asking a single word.. He punched directly into yash eyes..

Pitai starts...

She is my adhi ghar wali.. yash barely managed to say..

When he said Adhi gharwali...I was like ye to gaya

His grip got more tighter.. he started coughing..
I mean Sali.. He uttered in barely audible tone..

then i sighed hearing this

You have only 2 minutes to explain yourself.. Look..! They both are my friends.. and yash loves Meera..
He seemed to calm a little..

Bachat ho gayi...

You are her friend.. I have no problem with that.. But if you ever tried to go beyond that then keep in mind that Maan Singh Khurana awaits you..

No needs of threatening, poor he is already damn scared

Hmm.. so shall we do it? he asked..
What..?
Oh please.. it was you who was so desperate and asked me to stop the car here in this deserted area.. you and me alone.. I mean you must be dying to be kissed by me.. he smirked wickedly

Devil ko khush fehmian kuch ziyaada hi nahi hain...!

Don't tell me you don't enjoy it..
she shook her head in denial..

Liar...!

Prove it before I prove you wrong in my own way..

The great ways of MSK the great

Yeah you are right.. you never responded but haven't you noticed that you always stop fighting after sometime.. where does your urge to fight goes after few minutes.. its because you do enjoy.. he winked shamelessly.. I am sure you would be responding soon..

He caught her...!
Wow you are pretty much sure.. but I think we should try once.. may be I can prove you wrong..
she lost her balance and fell off the bridge.. but he was too quick.. he held her hand

Here came the opportunity

Uhum.. not so easily.. he shook his head
I will only pull you if you would consent to kiss me..

Devil is great opportunist

She had strange trust over him.. although she hated him but she knew he won't let anything happen to her.. she knew no matter how bad he might be he wont hurt her..

Oh Geet why do you trust a devil...why anyone would trust a devil...you can't trust anyone you hate...trust is the ingredient of love dear!

But man she was wrong.. he left her hand and next moment she fell into deep water..

Omg...even I thought he is trapping her only and he will not let her fall

Next moment she felt she was being carried by same strong arms..

ello khoda pahar or nikla chooha...

Jab save kerna tha to giraya kyun... Devil bhi na...!

he pinned her hands to either side of her head and came dangerously closer to her..
Stupid girl.. didn't you realized depth of the water.. you could have walked into it.. forget about drowning.. and you were right I won't let anything happen to you.. I would have saved you anyway..
But don't think that I am some noble hero that would have saved you.. i am greedy and selfish.. I would have saved you for my own benefit.. because I can't stay away from you..

If consider in a way... he dint broke her trust

She tried to push him but he rolled her on top of him..
He was gazing her intently and then he rolled again on top of her..
tracing her face with his finger..
She tried to free herself.. he gave her the space to move but the moment she tried to stand he again jerked her making her crash on his chest..
He brushed his lips lightly behind her ear..
Now he brushed her lips barely touching..
Mai ne kahan pakra hua hai.. I am not holding u any more.. he laughed scarsctally
Rofl
She then realized she was lying on him.. his hands for no more holding her..

Dekha Geet... just widen up your mind and then see him, he isnt that bad, even your subconscious knows that

She got up quickly..
be ready tomorrow you have to payback..
and I think you would be paying more heavily this time.. he smirked at her..

hahahaha payback again'

Awesome update

loved it a lot

Continue soon

Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry for always commenting late' I try to give it in detail for you so it takes time and this time I really held up with a lot of things'actually my nephew's second term are going on' and my sister is busy with her 3 months old daughter' so I was looking his studies' and he is weak in spellings'I was preparing him for next exam' and then rains'paper postponed' again preparation'..ufff

And by the way' I don't use graphics a lot. its hectic using those and that too in the busy schedule i have. Its just sometimes when I am free and today actually my nephew just went back to his home and I am infront of PC, all free'so enjoyyy...

and yeah i done this twice for you
first time it got deleted cause of weired IF...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: harshdb



I M AGAIN HERE WITH ANOTHER AWARD

''. In my category

The second award is


before giving the award little let me give lil. introduction on the award

Since these ffs are based on Geet serial why don't we give one award for this??? Right?

I know u would agree with me

So my second award is crazy i know😉


so my second award is



and the award goes to...

Any guesses who won the award????????

Yes our

before giving the award little speech about her...

She is really crazy for the serial ya ya I agree we all are but still the way she requests friends to add on geet facebook and when I read her comments on geet on facebook I decided she deserves the award

Apart from this craziness she is really an awesome friend guys' I tell u'..

The way she surprises her friends and her honesty in friendship made me give this award'.


so arushi pls come take the award...



since she is absent now i m keeping the award with me and i will hand over it to her when she return... (i m greedy here i know😉)


and this is also for her...


(To Be Continued)



omg omg omg
i faitned , i got an award
yaar i m sooo
sooo
sooo
happy thanx for award i will reply long later ,
i got go go again

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Posted: 13 years ago

oh my god I can't believe this... yaar now it has become very difficult to judge the talent... now I think I have to redo the awards program to make Justus for real talented people ... are u not getting what i m saying now check the down comments u will definitely understand...

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Meera he is here..! Geet panicked in yash embrace

Here came the Devil...!
Oh God.. he cut rahul's finger for touching you.. and now he has seen me hugging you.. what should I do now ..? some one save me..
Yaar Yash to buhat Darpok nikla' how would he save Geet then
Meera are you mad..? don't you love me..? you are talking about courage..? What will you do of that courage if I am dead.. I don't know in how many pieces he will be cutting me..

He is right who wants to live with broken body parts

Without asking a single word.. He punched directly into yash eyes..

Pitai starts...

She is my adhi ghar wali.. yash barely managed to say..

When he said Adhi gharwali...I was like ye to gaya

His grip got more tighter.. he started coughing..
I mean Sali.. He uttered in barely audible tone..

then i sighed hearing this

You have only 2 minutes to explain yourself.. Look..! They both are my friends.. and yash loves Meera..
He seemed to calm a little..

Bachat ho gayi...

You are her friend.. I have no problem with that.. But if you ever tried to go beyond that then keep in mind that Maan Singh Khurana awaits you..

No needs of threatening, poor he is already damn scared

Hmm.. so shall we do it? he asked..
What..?
Oh please.. it was you who was so desperate and asked me to stop the car here in this deserted area.. you and me alone.. I mean you must be dying to be kissed by me.. he smirked wickedly

Devil ko khush fehmian kuch ziyaada hi nahi hain...!

Don't tell me you don't enjoy it..
she shook her head in denial..

Liar...!

Prove it before I prove you wrong in my own way..

The great ways of MSK the great

Yeah you are right.. you never responded but haven't you noticed that you always stop fighting after sometime.. where does your urge to fight goes after few minutes.. its because you do enjoy.. he winked shamelessly.. I am sure you would be responding soon..

He caught her...!
Wow you are pretty much sure.. but I think we should try once.. may be I can prove you wrong..
she lost her balance and fell off the bridge.. but he was too quick.. he held her hand

Here came the opportunity

Uhum.. not so easily.. he shook his head
I will only pull you if you would consent to kiss me..

Devil is great opportunist

She had strange trust over him.. although she hated him but she knew he won't let anything happen to her.. she knew no matter how bad he might be he wont hurt her..

Oh Geet why do you trust a devil...why anyone would trust a devil...you can't trust anyone you hate...trust is the ingredient of love dear!

But man she was wrong.. he left her hand and next moment she fell into deep water..

Omg...even I thought he is trapping her only and he will not let her fall

Next moment she felt she was being carried by same strong arms..

ello khoda pahar or nikla chooha...

Jab save kerna tha to giraya kyun... Devil bhi na...!

he pinned her hands to either side of her head and came dangerously closer to her..
Stupid girl.. didn't you realized depth of the water.. you could have walked into it.. forget about drowning.. and you were right I won't let anything happen to you.. I would have saved you anyway..
But don't think that I am some noble hero that would have saved you.. i am greedy and selfish.. I would have saved you for my own benefit.. because I can't stay away from you..

If consider in a way... he dint broke her trust

She tried to push him but he rolled her on top of him..
He was gazing her intently and then he rolled again on top of her..
tracing her face with his finger..
She tried to free herself.. he gave her the space to move but the moment she tried to stand he again jerked her making her crash on his chest..
He brushed his lips lightly behind her ear..
Now he brushed her lips barely touching..
Mai ne kahan pakra hua hai.. I am not holding u any more.. he laughed scarsctally
Rofl
She then realized she was lying on him.. his hands for no more holding her..

Dekha Geet... just widen up your mind and then see him, he isnt that bad, even your subconscious knows that

She got up quickly..
be ready tomorrow you have to payback..
and I think you would be paying more heavily this time.. he smirked at her..

hahahaha payback again'

Awesome update

loved it a lot

Continue soon

have u checked?? now i think... no... not thinking i m very sure u understand whan i mean...

yaar i tought she is very soft and sencitive like her id name and decided not to joke with her.. yaar.. now i cant help but comment...

what can i say all i say is wow just wow... siply superb mindblowing

THE COMMENTS ARE JUST

the pics has really good quality,,,
atlast i just want to say
this comment... keep it up (pls dont keep it up😉 bring it often to make not only aniee happy but also like us too 😃...)
hey softly_spoken... i m sorry if i offend u with my comments...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: harshdb

oh my god I can't believe this... yaar now it has become very difficult to judge the talent... now I think I have to redo the awards program to make Justus for real talented people ... are u not getting what i m saying now check the down comments u will definitely understand...

have u checked?? now i think... no... not thinking i m very sure u understand whan i mean...

yaar i tought she is very soft and sencitive like her id name and decided not to joke with her.. yaar.. now i cant help but comment...

what can i say all i say is wow just wow... siply superb mindblowing

THE COMMENTS ARE JUST

the pics has really good quality,,,
atlast i just want to say
this comment... keep it up (pls dont keep it up😉 bring it often to make not only aniee happy but also like us too 😃...)
hey softly_spoken... i m sorry if i offend u with my comments...

hey thanks for appreciation,
as i said its quite unlike me to use graphics i prefer to keep it simple , but ainee writes sooo well and is sooo good friend of mine that it always force me to write the best possible... and as i was a bit free this time so i just added graphics...
now seeing the appreciation... i will try doing so more often...
thanks and btw why shoul i get offended yaar... you just praised me...only a fool can take it as an offense...
keep loving
cheers...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting waiting :):) it will take time uh didi me feeling very sleepy wil comment in the morning 😊
Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yay...my Devil is coming...
M waiting...come fast...
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Posted: 13 years ago
WAITING
😍

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