May 24th Update

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Vishal Rastogi is in his car when he gets a call [He always gets calls when he's in his car, na?😛] from the policeman who says that they have captured Aoni.

Vishal Rastogi is ecstatic at the news. The policeman wants his reward and Vishal says that he will bring the 20 lakhs to the police station.

He puts down the phone and says that now there's no more obstacles.

Scene shifts.

Miilee and gang are sitting in the police station. Khushi tells Miilee to reveal that Father Manuel is alive and in that way, they can be free.

Miilee says that as soon as Vishal Rastogi comes to know that Father Manuel is alive, he will try to kill him again so they cannot reveal it as of yet.

She adds that he kidnapped her and fed her drugs and that he is really capable of anything.

Swami says that they have so much of problems. They are in jail and Aoni is on the run.

A policeman comes in the room and says that they are free to go. Miilee is curious and asks how come.

The policeman tells her that the real murderer, Aoni, has been caught and they have no further need for Miilee and gang.

Miilee says quite confidently that now Aoni will prove himself to be innocent. [HOW??] 😭

The policeman says that on the contrary, they will prove that Aoni did indeed commit the murder so that they can get the reward money. 🤢

Miilee shouts at him saying that he should be ashamed of himself. The policeman tells them to get out.

Miilee thinks that they are free now but what's going to happen to Aoni.

Scene shifts.

Aoni is in the police van with the other policemen. They joke and say that there should be more criminals like Aoni so that they can get more money. Aoni looks disgusted.

He thinks of the time he collaborated with Vishal Rastogi, of Sunny's betrayal and mostly of Miilee.😛

He thinks to himself that he has had enough of Vishal Rastogi. Now, it's his turn.

The press people are waiting outside the police station, presumably for Aoni's arrival. Miilee looks at them and realizes that the press people have been informed of Aoni's capture.

They see her and immediately go up to Miilee and gang.

They ask Miilee if she can tell them why Aoni killed Father Manuel.

Miilee says that Aoni did not do it. She knows because she was there and she also says that she knows who is the killer but before she could continue, Vishal Rastogi's car comes into view and he steps out.

The press people ignore her and rush towards Vishal. They ask him as to who will the reward money be given to. Vishal Rastogi replies that he will give it to the police.

Miilee looks quite fed up.

The van that Aoni is in, arrives at the police station. He steps out and sees Vishal Rastogi and the money. The police pull him along and he passes by Vishal Rastogi. He knocks the money out of Vishal Rastogi's hands and the crowd is in a frenzy.

They immediately dive to the floor to pick up the fallen money. Vishal Rastogi looks horrified. 😆 😆 😆

Taking advantage of the confusion, Aoni snatches a gun from a policeman and threatens to fire.

Seeing this, Miilee rushes towards him in an effort to stop him but he grabs her and uses her as a hostage.

Vishal rastogi tells the police to shoot Aoni anyway. Aoni threatens that he will really shoot Miilee. [Of course, he wouldn't! So don't panic! Hehe]😳

Miilee tells him to give himself up and that she will try her best to save him.

Aoni ignores her and tells her to meet him at the railway station as he will be leaving Shimla forever and he would want to see her for the last time. He tells her to be careful and make sure that no one follows her.

He gets into Vishal Rastogi's, with his gun still trained on Miilee. He says, "I love you Miilee" and they look at each other before he drives off.

Vishal rastogi calls the commissioner and complains.

Miilee comes up to Vishal Rastogi. She tells him that he made AOni into a criminal but now Aoni will pay you back for that. She adds that before Aoni left, he told her that in 24 hours, he will prove his innocence.

Vishal Rastogi asks her if she thinks he will let Aoni live long enough to do that.

Miilee appears unaffected and tells him that for now, take care of your life because Aoni won't leave you. Miilee and gang leaves.

Vishal Rastogi calls someone and says that he wants 24-hour protection.

Scene shifts.

At night, Vishal Rastogi keeps thinking about what Miilee said, about the 24-hours thing.

Suddenly, he hears a sound, looks around and ignores it. He goes back to his dwelling.

He hears the sound a second and he bolts from his seta. His cell rings and he picks it up. It's AOni and he asks him if he would like water or soda for his whiskey peg [which Vishal Rastogi was drinking 😛 forgot to add that sorry].

Vishal Rastogi looks alarmed and we see Aoni's footsteps. He sprays some soda water onto Vishal's face. Aoni points a gun at Vishal Rastogi. The time is 10.15 p.m.

Aoni said that he thought right. Vishal Rastogi does prefer the soda. He further adds that Vishal is such a coward.

Vishal Rastogi says back that whilst training a gun on someone's head, is not an indication of bravery or cowardness.

Aoni says that he will be staying in Vishal's house until the next day and asks him if he likes his idea.

He adds that your own pawn defeated you and proceeds to perform a check-mate on the chessboard. He points the gun at Vishal Rastogi again.

Scene shifts.

We see Miilee with a clock behind her, just as Aoni had. [At first, I thought that she was in the same room with them but no, she wasn't. 😛]

She says that it's our time now. Just wait and watch.

End.

Tommorow: Khushi tells Miilee that they should just leave Shimla and go somewhere where no one knows them. Miilee says that they can't do that and that they must fight for their rights. Khushi enrages, asks Miilee with whom do they fight? Vishal Rastogi or those wayward cops. She adds that nothing is going their way.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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THX ITS GETTING INTERESTING! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey thnx alot its rli intresting sum ppl said dat wen aoni s on da train sum1 s gonna cum nd shoot hm i hope dat s nt true!!! 😭 😭 😭 i hate vishal rastogi soooooo much!!! 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks for the update.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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story is getting interested. thanks for the update.

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