Mayur FF : The perfect couple lastpart pg29 edited - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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It Was Shoo sweet
Cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Truly beautiful
kya start hai!!!!!
hans hans ke mere paith me bal padh gaye
truly osmmm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice fantastic ⭐️
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Nice story... Please pm me when you update... :)
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here is my next part

In the basketball court group of boys are playing basketball. One of the boy throws the ball and a boy enters and catches the ball he is none other than college ka most smart, cool, talented, handsome, intelligent,ladkiyon ka dream boy Mr.Mayank Sharma .All girls start drooling over him par kya faida mayank sharma doesnt care that silly girls

N-wanna play a game

M(funny smile)-tumse haarne ka itna shock hain

N-mujhe harana in your dream

M-lets make it real

N-lets see all the best

Nupur bhushan college ki sabse sundar , smart, intelligent, talented girl jis tarah mayank pe saari ladkiyan fida hain usi tarah hamare nupur pe bhi saare ladke fida hain but nupur bhushan doesnt care silly boys.

She wears salwar and leaves her hair open always par iska mayank par koi asar nahin hone waala and mayank wears a tight tshirt showing his muscular body par iska nupur par bhi koi asar nahin hone waala par baaki sab par indono ka bahut asar hain.Priya is new joining

Priya-wow he's so handsome

Dia-yes he is handsome babes kuch naya hain toh bolo

Priya-boys indono ko dekh kar court chod kar jaa kyun rahe hain

Benji-jab mayank aur nupur khelte hain toh aur kisiko chance nahin milta

Priya-are they basketball champions

Benji -nahin ladne ke champions

Priya-wat

Dia-baad main bataongi pehle match dekhenge

Benji-isse interesting match shayad world cup ka final bhi nahin hain

Priya-kaun jeeta hain hamesha mayank na(in excitement)

Benji-ab tak 489 matches hue hain unmain se 97 mayank 97 nupur baaki sab tie pata nahin aaj kya hoga

Priya-matlab yeh roz khelte hain

Benji-nahin roz ladte hain basket ball ko use karke 8-9 ladte hain phir 9 se 6 classes ko use karke ladte hain pata nahin subah aur sham ko kaise ladte hain

Dia-shayad inke parents ko use karke

B- jaise bhi ladte ho hamara 100% entertainment toh pucca hain

D-ek baat toh hain both are the best

B-yeh baat toh maanni padegi

Nupur ties pony her duppatta and enters into basket ball court. the ball was in mayanks hand she tries to take from him but he makes the basket now the ball is in nupurs hand she doesn't give opportunity for mayank to take the ball and puts in basket now ball is again in nupur's hand both fight a lot and atlast she goes to put in basket she puts ball in basket and slips .mayank catches her from falling both look into each others eyes he smiles she winks

n-you lose mr.mayank Sharma

M-still there is 1 minute left miss nupur bhushan last minute main kuch bhi ho sakta hain

N-lets see

M-lets see

(he leaves her both go towards ball but mayank gets it last ten seconds nupur trying level best to stop him all are getting tensed girls are praying for mayank and boys for nupur but mayank makes the basket making it a tie)

M-kaha tha na last minute kuch bhi ho sakta hain

N-you lose Mr Mayank Sharma you made basket 2 seconds late right cj

C-ya mayank nupur won todays game

M'alright get ready to loose tomorrow chinky

N-how dare you call me chinky Mr. monkey

M-how dare you call me monkey

N-if I am chinky you are monkey

M-tumne dubara kaha toh dekho main kya karta hoon

N-sau baar kahoongi monkey monkey monkey

(he holds her wrist from back)

N-auch leave me monkey

m-jab tak tum monkey kehna band nahin karti tab tak nahin chodunga

N-main tumse nahin darti

M-oh really (he tightens grip)

N-auch chodo

M-nahin pehle sorry kaho uske baad chodunga

N-main aur sorry woh bhi tumhein never

M-ok I will also never ever leave your hand

N-sharam nahin aati ladki pe zor karte hue

M-ladki aur tum gud joke haan

N-aakhri baar keh rahi hun chodo mujhe

M-noway

N-goodmorning sir(he leaves her)

M-sir woh (he doesn't find sir there she was laughing catching her stomach)

N-monkey monkey monkey (she puts finger on her nose)

M-tumhein toh main (he starts running behind her she tries to escape they roam whole college and by mistake mayank hits princi princi takes mayanks class nupur was enjoying fully he gives a weird look to her after princi left mayank to himself)

M-yeh kahaan chali gayi jaha bhi jaaye class main toh mere saath hi baitogi main bhi dekhta hun aaj tumhein mujhse kaun bachata hain

He reaches class nupur was sitting there busily talking with Uday and CJ he gives anger look to her

M-excuseme sir

(she looks at him)

Shukla-pehli baar mayank sharma kaksha main dher pahunche main toh ascharya chakit ho gaya hun

M-sir woh main princi se mil ke aaraha tha

N-milke aarahe te ya phir

M-tumhein beech main taang adaane ke liye kisi ne nahin kaha tum khud ka kaam karogi toh acha rahega warna

N-(with innocence)sir aap hi dekhiye maine toh bas aise hi keh diya dekhiye kaise baras raha hain aapke kaksha main ladka ek abhagya ladki ko dumki de raha hain isiliye na ki ladkiyan kamzor hain

Shukla-aap rona band kijiye mayank sharma ek toh aap kaksha main dher se pahunche upar se mere saamne hi nupur jaise shusheel ladki ko dumki de rahe hain agar aapne abhi unse maafi nahin maangi toh main aapko kaksha main pravesh nahin hone doonga

N(to herself)-kya baat hain nupur aaj toh teri lottery lag gayi mayank se maafi aaj toh zaroor celebrate karna padega

M-sorry sir

Shukla-maafi mujhse nahin nupur se maangiye

He has no other option other than saying sorry to nupur

M-(in full anger)sorry

N-its ok tum bhi kya yaad rakhoge nupur bhushan ne tumhein maaf kiya

Mayank goes and sits beside nupur

M-itna uchalne ki zaroorat nahin hain dekhna main kya karta hun

(he catches her wrist tightly)

N-sir

Shukla-kya hua koi samasya hain toh humein zaroor bataiyega

M-kuch bhi nahin sir woh toh bas yeh pooch rahi thi aaj aap kaunsa paat padane waale hain

Shukla-ise kehte hain padai par shraddha kuch seekho indono se

Benji-kya ladna

Shukla-(dia smiles)mujhe aaj kuch kaam hain isiliye koi paat nahin pada paonga aap bas mera pichla paat padiye

M-ab toh tu bach gayi class ke baad tumhein dekhloonga

N-try karna

Uday was busy staring at girls cj was listening to music mayank was busy reading benji was busy flirting with dia nupur was feeling bored

N-yeh saadu mahatma ko dekho kitne aaraam se padai kar rahe hain mujhe toh yeh kitne boring lagte hain waise ek baat toh sahi hain dono ke dono boring hain just made for each other

M-bak bak karna band karo dikhai nahin de raha main pad raha hun

She gets an idea she throws a letter to jacob

Jacob-mere liye love letter

N-tumhare liye nahin annie ke liye(showing annie) mayank (showing mayank)ne diya hain

Jacob-kya

(she asks him to silently give the letter)

Annie takes the letter and reads it

Annie o annie

Tumhare lambe lambe baal(par mere baal toh medium hain)

Tumhare gore gore gaal

tumhare sweet lips pe smile

Tumhari boli si surat dekhkar main tum par fida ho gaya

Isiliye i love you

Sham ko date pe chalenge

With love,

Mayank

She starts blushing but shukla sees letter in her hand

He takes and reads it loudly mayank gets a shock and turns back

M-wat

Shukla-wohi toh main pooch raha hun mayank sharma yeh kya hain main aapko kaksha ka sabse uttam vidyarti samajta tha par aapne aisi harkat kiya aapse padne ke liye kaha tha aur aap ladkiyon ko prem patra de rahe hain aapko aadarsh lene ke liye saare ladko ko kehta tha aur aapne mera barosa thoda

M'par sir mujhe is letter ke baare main kuch nahin pata

nupur use toh aaj se pehle itna mazaa kabhi nahi aaya

N-wah bhai wah aaj toh double mazaa milega

(shukla takes mayanks class and gives him assignment as punishment)

Annie-mayank I am sorry tumne itne pyar se mujhe letter likha aur maine tumhein sabke saamne I am very sorry

Nupur was laughing hard and mayank was irritated

In the lunch mayank was sitting nupur comes and sits beside him

Chinu-nupur baby yeh rahi aapki milkshake aur mayank baba aapka black coffee

U-mera burger

Chinu-yeh lijiye

N-aaj main bahut khush hun saari bill main hi baroongi

he stares at her angrily

N-aise kya gur rahe ho chup chap pado

Cj comes

C-guys breaking news aaj lunch ke baad koi class nahin honewaala

M-so main ghar jaa raha hun nupur tum aarahi ho ya phir main akela chala jao

N(in anger )-aarahi hun

C-tum mayank se kabse darne lagi ho

N-darna padta hain cj pata hain pichli baar isne kya kiya

Shilpa-mayu nupur kahaan hain

M-woh apne naye boyfriend ke saath date pe gayi

Shilpa-boyfriend

M-aapko nahin pata mujhe toh lagaa nupur aapse kuch nahin chupati

C-uske baad kya hua

N'pura ek din laga mom ko yakeen dilane main ki mayank joot keh raha hain monkey kahika

M'agar tumhari kahaniya khatam hui toh chale

N- overaction band karo gaadi meri hain dad ne mere liye khareeda hain

M-phir keys mujhe kyun diye

N-tumhein nahin pata keys driver ko hi dete hain

M-agar yeh joke tha toh bahut sada hua tha

N-hoga par tumse thoda kam

C-guys tum dono ko ghar jaana tha na

N-haan chalo

M-wohi main keh raha hun

Both leave

B-kitni shanti hain aisa lag raha hain baut bada toofaan aake chala gaya

Pata nahin tum logo ko kaisa laga hope you like it

Edited by --unknown-- - 14 years ago
mayuloveu thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I love the update. but tum mayank ko harne kyun diya?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome,awesome'awesome...
It was a hilarious update.
I like mayank catching ,Nupur's wrist.
Thnx for pm and plz continue soon.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely one
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I dint like it yaar
bcoz i loved dis update...
hehehehehe nupur jaise shushil ladki. ko mayank pereshan kar rahi thi.lol lol lol- hehehehehe
pher wo letter- By GOD- kyaa chalu demag hai nups ki- Jhansi ki raani ki jay ho...lol lol
yaar it was too good---i m still laughing
maza agaya- thank u so much for such a nice upate- i enjoyed alot

plz plz plz update next part soon





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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you so much Loved it... update the next part soon!

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