Mayur FF : The perfect couple lastpart pg29 edited - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

sorry update was nice
but the ending was sooo sarii hovi
i didn't like it

i was waiting for such response since long and you made it i know you guys wont accept it actually mujhe hi mera update pasand nahin aaya ok i will try to reupdate tommorrow if possible

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Sujata

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice ending.

awesome ending.

arush n arushi r very cute ... dono apne parents k naam roshan karenge😆...sure 😛

thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -JayaRC-
what was the end before ?

i killed mayur but i myself didnt like it so changed

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

lovly...but u ended them ...i was hoping to read more...anyways waiting for ur new ones...

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crazymayurian

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Posted: 13 years ago

now this is something suitable and acceptable

nice one

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 13 years ago

tht is soo nice ending i like it

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bhargavi

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome ending.

arush n arushi r very cute

thanks for the pm.

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kirti123

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Posted: 13 years ago

😊nice end😊

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautiful update
they r perfect and made 4 each other
loved it totally
plz do start ur new FF soon

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