Mayur FF : The perfect couple lastpart pg29 edited - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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bhai maza aagaya ab dekhna hai i nki love story kaise start hoti hai.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
damn funny i soo love it...cont soon...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Nupur played all those pranks on Mayank😲😆
Poor Mayank..but I noe he's gonna play it back now..cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mind blowing
so Funny
I love it
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update dear.
cont son ⭐️
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#26

part3

Mayur in car

N-mayank ek kaam karo car paanipuri ke paas rokho mujhe paanipuri khaani hain

M-tumhein main kaise dikh raha hun

N-ofcourse driver ki tarah

M-main kahin nahin rokhne waala agar tumhein itna hi mann kar raha hain toh paidal chale jao

N-paidal kyun main mom ke saath jaongi

M-jo karna hain karo

(he puts radio)

(she changes channel)

(he also changes both fight for some time)

M-tumse ladna bekaar hain

(he listens from cell keeping earphones she takes one earphone and puts in her ear he knows its waste to fight with her so he keeps silent)

Later he was eating choclate she takes it from him

M-tum khud ki kha sakti hona meri kyun leti ho

N-mujhe yehi chahiye agar tumhein woh chahiye toh woh lo

M-mujhe meri choclate hi chahiye

Both share the choclate

They reach home she was sleeping peacefully keeping head on him

He smiles

M-ab tak kitna lad rahi thi aur abhi aaraam se sorahi hain par mujhe tumhein itne chain se sote hue nahin dekha jaata

(he puts cottons in his ears and pressesthe car horn she gets up closing her ears )

M-neend kaise thi

N-tumhein toh main

He runs from there she goes behind him in the house they run round sofa she throws pillows on him

N-idiot stupid monkey donkey fool sadu aur yaad nahin aarahe par saare bad words tumhare liye

Throwing pillow back on him

M-dictionary laake dun

Shilpa in kitchen

Shilpa-lagta hain dono aagaye isiliye nupur itne pyar se baat kar rahi ek kaam kar tu yeha kaam kar main undono ko dekhti hun

Shilpa comes out

Sh-yeh ho kya raha hain

N-mom dekho na mayank ne kya kiya

Sh-mayu tu use satata kyun hain

M-aapko hamesha meri hi galti dikhti hain aapki beti ki koi harqat nazar nahin aati

Sh-haan toh kya karoge apne room main jaake chup chap fresh hoja

N-love you mom

Sh-love you too beta

Mayank goes to his room in anger

M-inse baat karna bekar hain main mom ko call karoonga

M-hello mom

Shobha-haan mayu ghar kya hua achanak call kiya sab teek toh hain na

M-sab teek hain college se jaldi aagaya isiliye call kiya

Shobha-toh kaisa raha aaj ka din

M-jahaan nupur hoti hain wahaan chain nahin hoti

Shobha-mayu kya hua usne phir tujhe tang kiya

M-tang karna baht choti word hain aaj toh uski shaitaani ki had ho gayi

He says everything

Shilpa-par tune aisa kaise kiya

N-nahin toh kya karun jab dekho tang karta hain

Shilpa-haan beta par tum dono ki ladai main lecturers ko laane ki kya zaroorat hain tum dono ki ladai tum dono tak hi rahe toh teek hain aisa karna galat haink

N-par usne jo kiya uska kya

Shilpa- maanthi hun par tune jo kiya woh aur bhi galat hain tu meri achi bachi hain na waada kar phir aise harkat nahin karegi

N-tik hain nahin karoongi

Shilpa-meri pyari gudiya tu jaake TV dekh main tere liye tiffin banati hun

Shobha-yeh ladki bhi na din ba din shaitaan ban rahi hain main aane ke baad use dekhti hun

M-aap kyun chinta karti hain main hoon na main use dekhloonga

Shobha'acha tik hain tu aaraam kar mujhe rounds pe jaana mom

M-love you mom

Shobha-love you too beta

Mayank was reading book nupur puts Tv in high volume he comes out

M-tum TV dekh rahi ho yeh baat pure mohalle ko batane ki zaroorat nahin hain main pad raha hun volume kam karo

N-nahin karoongi agar tumhein disturb horaha hain toh bahar jaake pado

M-tumhein toh

Shilpa'mayu kya hua tu phir uspar chillan kyun raha hain

M-aapko mere chillane ki awaaz sunai de rahi hain uske TV ki awaaz sunai nahin de rahi

Shilpa'maine hi kaha tha use TV dekhne ke liye

M-aap dono se baat karna bekaar hain

He goes inside and again calls shobha

Shobha'ab kya problem hain

M'nupur dehiye na mom kitne zorose TV lagayi hain main pad nahin paa raha

Shobha'ismain udaas hone ki kya baat hain tu nupur ke room main jaake pad uske room main awaaz nahin pahunchegi

He goes to bhushan house and sees Nupur's room she is expert in neatness

M-kitna neat hain yeh room dekh kar hi chakkar aaraha yeh ladki bhi na ladne ke alawa kuch nahin aata

He cleans the room lay on bed and starts reading book

Shilpa-nupur tu ab tak fresh bhi nahin hui jaakefresh hokar aa baad main TV dekhna

N-par mom

Sh-chup chap jaa

N-ok jaa rahi hun

She goes to her room and finds her romm neat and mayank lying on bed readiing book

N-are wah kitna neat hain mayank tum na kisi kaamaao na aao mere yeh kaam ache se karte ho ismamle main lucky hoon

M-sharam nahin aati ek toh room ganda rakha upar se mera mazak uda rahi ho tumhein toh muje thanks

N-thanks kehna chahte ho ya sure kaho tumhare muh se thanks main sunna chahti hun

M-tum mera sar mat khao dikhai nahin de raha main pad raha hun

N-tik hain jaati hun

She goes inside to fresh up by the time she comes out he was sleeping peacefully

N-kitna aaraam se so raha hain monkey kahika waise bhi ise uta ke main apni neend kyun kharab karoon

She goes and sleeps beside him

Dadi-yeh nupur kahaan hain aur mayank bhi dikhai nahin de raha

Shilpa-nupur ko maine hi uske ghar bejaa hain fresh hone ke liye

Dadi-main dekh kar aati hun

Shilpa-main bhi aarahi hun

They find both of them sleeping peacefully in their room

Shilpa-kitne aaraam se so rahe hain kitna shanti hain agar utgaye toh pura ghar sar par uta lenge

Dadi-bhagwan mere sapne ko sach karna

Shilpa-kuch kahaan aapne

Dadi-kuch nahin

Shilpa-(to herself)main jaanti hun aap kya chahti hain mera bhi wohi sapna hain par pata nahin yeh dono kya chahte hain bhagwan indono ke beech main kisi ko mat laana

Rv-main aagaya

Ria-main bhi

Rias mom- bahut jaldi aagaye agar flight chut jayega toh

RV-aunty relax aisa kuch nahin hoga

RV's mom-wahaan atleast teek se padai karna koi shaitaani nahin aur dono ek dusre ka khayal rakhna

Ria-aur kuch aap log bhi na bahut boring hain kya puraane zamaane ki logo ki tarah behave karte hain

Rv-hum kisise nahin darte sab humse darte hain we bothare dangerous

Rv's dad-tum dono pata nahin kab sudroge

Ria-humein sudarna mushkil hi nahin namumkin hain ok bye

Both say bye and leave

Next day in basketball court mayur were playing basketball RV and ria see them

Ria-i love him

RV-i love her

Both look at each other in shock

Ria-atlast humdono ko hamare rights ek saath mil gaye jab Ria decide karti hain woh ladka sirf uska hota hain

Rv-jab RV kisi ladki ko dekhta hain koi aur use chu bhi nahin sakta

Precap:

N-ab aise kya dekh rahe ho help kare ke liye bhi poochne ki zaroorat nahin hain

He lifts her in arms

M-agar jyada naatak ki na neeche gira dunga

N-tab main mom ko call karoongi

M-dumki dena koi tujhse seekhe

part4
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
nice updt
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
i love their cute fights...both just can't live without each other...n their moms r sweetheart...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
sweet and cute. ria and rv ko kyun laya bich mein?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
awww so cute update
]just amazing
loved mayur fight- heehehehe as usual it was sweet and enjoyable
keep it up

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