Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 24
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OMG!!! kinzuuu wht an amazing part !!! i could feel shivers run down me !!! it was so damn scray and this proves wht a fab writer u r!!! the way u wrote abt thr entrance into the room, i actually held my breath! and i loved the title of the part, it gave me a good feeling abt tht boy! but tht captain and his way of observing girls ! it was horible! however the last line is wht left me shivering again!!! eagerly waiting for the next part kinzu!!! its simply mindblowing the way u write!! <3 oh btw yayyy! m first one to coment! mujhe to laga tha i will miss it! :( but i got lucky!!!! :) p.s. i have no idea how i skipped ur signature!!! but now tht i have read it, i want to remind u, *i love u kinzu! the most!* <3 <3 baqe baten msgs per! :p loved the part!!! and plz update soon! and congrats anothr holiday! :p but i wanna meet u on tuesday bus!!! <3
3.Helplessness
"mayank, go bring nupur, she'll go with us"
Caption said and Sashi Bhsuhan felt fear and rage rising and he had no way to express it except for his eyes.
"kia?', mayank asked amazed and Caption turned towards him, "ik baar samjh nahi arahi hai?, go bring nupur, she is going with us!", he said stiffly and mayank's brows knitted, "but why? .. I told you
"and I also told you not to bring her, enough of your helpful nature mayank, we need to take a civilian with us, preferably a girl, remember we have smuggled goods with us, so we can pretend as a family if police stops us anywhere, so bring her" .
He declared it as an order and mayank knew he would have to do this, he was against giving useless pain, but this was necessary, they would have to take her for their safety.
He took slow steps towards the door and opened it, to find that she was sitting on the floor, with both her sisters lying in her lap and she was stroking their heads.
Her face had gone pale and he could feel the slight tremble in her hands. He started walking towards her.
Nupur raised her head and seeing that person advancing towards her made her heart come to mouth and before she could scream or react, he sat on his knees and placed his hand over her mouth, "quiet!", he whispered.
His fingers were hard and coarse, and were dipping in her skin, with her mouth totally covered with his strong hold.
Her skin was soft and gentle, like silk, he could feel her skin withering under his coarse fingers and her eyes were dilating with fear, she removed her hands from the heads of her sleeping sisters and tried to remove his grip.,
"I said quiet!", he asserted again and tears flowed down her eyes, wetting his fingers. Those tears hurt him, they were not just tear drops, he felt nails pricking his fingers.
"quietly come with us, otherwise we'll have to take one of your sleeping sister", he said hoarsely and the diameter of her eyes increased , with the amount of fear multiplied by many times in it.
"You will need to go with us, otherwise it's one of your sisters, so choose urself", he whispered, making sure his words were only for her ears, he was leaning on her ear, could smell the fond fragrance of her tresses and could feel the shiver of her body.
Looking in those huge eyes, he could understand she wanted to speak, so he removed his hand, and her lips were trembling. "kkyun .. main ..", the amount of shock and fear had made her dumbfounded, not until he stood up and grasped her wrist and pulled her towards himself, she stood up with a jerk, with her sisters falling down on the floor and coming out of sleep with a jerk.
"didi!!", both of them cried, as they saw the man placing a cloth over their sister's mouth and then seeing her eyes close in a matter of seconds.
Mayank immediately placed the chloroform dipped cloth over her face and struggling in his grip, she felt her senses leaving coordination, and the last words she heard were the cries of her sister and the face he saw was that penetrating eyes.
Mayank saw her eye lids getting heavy and her protests getting weak, as she collided with his chest, totally unconscious and muttered, "chor do mujhe .."
Mayank felt a coldness radiating his body as it came in contact with her body, her silky hair, flowed with that jerk of colliding and her fists held his shirt in a weak grip.
Slipping a hand across her slender waist, he picked her up. Her face was hidden in his arms and it still had traces of fear in that unconscious state.
Without delaying a minute he rushed out of the room and both the kids followed him out,
"jaldi karo, the car is just outside, ", Joseph came running and mayank rushed outside, somewhat he didn't want Sashi Bushan to see his daughter being taken away like this, but he did saw, he managed hard to move out of tied ropes but it was of no use,
"baujii!!", pari and noshi came to his side and started opening the ropes, but they were too scared to untangle the tight grip.
"Okay Mr Bhsuhan we are leaving now", Caption came in and Mr Bhsuahn stared him with wild eyes, "I am sorry, but we had to take a civilian with us, all I can say is that forget you had her as your daughter, good bye", he said with a smile.
~*~
The black land cruiser was rushing on the road, with four passengers ' one un conscious, two scared , and one totally numb.
"Joseph once we reach our place, I need you to find out who gave the information to the CID police, which damn person knew about that secret meeting we were having, I need you to find that out!!", he was speaking desperately and driving rashly, while Joseph was constantly nodding and mumbling,
"also thank our partner who sent this car!", Caption said again and looked through the rear view mirror that Mayank was constantly staring to his left, and he very well knew who was at his left.
"seems you really like her mayank", he smirked and mayank shifted his eyes away and the Caption broke in a giggle, "by the way I hope the chloroform was not much, I need her to wake up, we may have a check post ahead", he said and mayank nodded, "it was diluted, she can wake up anytime now", he said slowly and looked back at nupur.
She looked beautiful in the dim light, her hairs were falling on her face and the fear was vanishing from her face, it was an angelic sight. This girl should have this calm expression only, her innocence deserved this calmness, but he knew calmness was not for her. He feared the moment she would wake up. He feared that hollowness he would see. He feared that pain he would see. He feared HER PAIN. He feared. For the first time in his life.
~*~
Her head was throbbing.
This was the first sensation she felt, she could smell cigarette and was feeling suffocated, trying a couple to times to jerk the headache, she slowly opened her eyes to find herself in a totally alien atmosphere.
She was in a car, and could hear two people talking, and one sitting by his side. Her heart came to mouth as her mind recognized the person sitting beside her, the same intruder, where was she going? .
Kidnapped?, her family?.Oh Lord!, where was she going, what was going around.
"finally u woke up", Caption turned behind and looked in her eyes and dumfounded she leaned back on her seat, staring him blankly and there mayank's knew that she woke up.
"Caption remember you are driving", mayank glared and giggling he turned back to the steering and nupur now turned towards mayank, "kahan le k ja rahe ho mujhe?', she screamed and mayank again placed his hand over her mouth, leading the silence in her eyes to prevail, "don't shout", he whispered and nupur tried removing his hand, "stop moving, just be quiet, you are safe", he whispered again, wishing only if he could leave that roughness of his voice behind and console her in a soft voice, but unfortunately he possessed nothing except for roughness.
"yes yes you are safe", Joseph turned behind, "very safe", he took out a revolver and loaded it and nupur's eyes widened more,
"shut up joseph", mayank barked and giggling joseph placed the gun away and sat straight.
"Trust me you are safe, trust me", he said again and her silent eyes blurred with tears, and sensing she had stopped all physical protests, mayank , slowly removed his hand and tears flowed down like gushing water from her eyes, "mujhe kahan le k ja rahe ho?", her voice wavered like a fragile feather and completely pricked over her plead, mayank just stared, thinking about what to answer, when Caption did his job.
"beautiful, we are taking you with us, to a place where we value beauty, don't worry u'll be safe and trust me very happy", evil was dropping out from his voice and nupur felt all her body shiver with fear and burn with hatred for that man.
"please mujhe chor do, mujh merey ghar jana hai", she cried desperately struggling with the door locks, but it was no use, the car was already child locked, "kholo darwaza mujhe jana hai", she cried even more and the giggles of Caption and Joseph become more loud while mayank closed his eyes.
"Please mujhe jane do, please..", she started crying bitterly, still pulling the locks, and with all those giggles mingling with her cries, mayank felt himself going through helplessness he never thought he would experience.
"kholo darwaza", she patted the glass vigorously and mayank pulled out the cloth again from his pocket, and holding her wrists, he placed it again on her mouth, and already weak, she closed her eyes within seconds, and loosing conscious again her head fell on his chest.
"kia hua?", joseph turned due to sudden silence, and raised an eyebrow finding nupur all snuggled to mayank, ":I have given her chloroform again", he said calmly, shifting nupur's head to the seat back.
"why?, have u lost it?", caption barked.
"I told u no useless pain, she was screaming", he said stiffly,
"so what?, every girl screams, we were enjoying and..
"just shut up", he shouted with every bit of desperation, "she is not for enjoyment!", he barked angrily and Caption signaled Joseph to stay quiet.
Next he observed, mayank's eyes lovingly caressing the girl. This was the first time he saw mayank reacting like this for a girl. His no pain without reason formula was since the day he joined this work and carried out throughout, but this protectiveness was something new and something dangerous.
He could feel that warmth radiating out from his eyes and reaching her face. Silent gesture of support, a silent gesture of companionship, a silent promise of always protecting her, a silent promise.
He sighed and started driving fast, they needed to get out of roads and reach their hub. Taking a few more sharp turns, they were out of a huge posh bungalow, the car went straight in the driveway and the huge gates were closed immediately by two guards and as three of them stepped out of the car, there were attendants to serve them.
"Caption":, mayank called out , still standing by the car door.
"yes mayank", caption turned and asked plainly.
"I was thinking if we could send her back, we have crossed that area safely", hesitant, mayank managed to speak his mind firmly.
"send her back where?", Caption asked in return, leaning on the car door himself.
"to her home", saying in a I AM TAKING NO NONSENSE tone, he stood straight and smirking Caption looked in the car, at the innocent sight of un conscious nupur.
"her home?, she doesn't has a home anymore kid!, her home is finished", his eyes flared up with disgust for himself as he told mayank.
"Finished?, don't tell me you .
"I killed them", stating it as a matter of fact he turned towards the door and mayank felt every drop of his blood boil, "what the bloody hell, how many times do I have to tell
"no useless pain!, I know that", he turned and said in a completely defeated voice and mayank's temper raised to limits.
"you know that then why the hell do you forget that
, eyes getting wild, he attacked back verbally, with an equal desperation, "why damnit?, how could you kill those innocent little girls?, why did ..
'relax", he placed a hand on his shoulder which mayank jerked in a minute, "I had to kill them bcz they had seen us, we were taking a family member from that home, a police complain had to come, the evidences had to be removed, as far as this girl is concerned, I had planned her to kill after a couple of nights, but now I don't think it is possible", he looked straight in his eyes and sure of the fact that they were revealing too much, he batted them once, "ofcourse that is not possible", he said stiffly, "I am not going to let u take another life for no bloody reason"
His eyes fired up with something Caption understood very well and smiling he shook his head, "you want to keep this girl with you?", he smiled and hearing from another mouth what his heart was shouting, had mayank in shock for a moment.
"I don't need your permission":, firmness was dropping out from his tone and caption broke in a giggle, "ofcourse you don't, go ahead, enjoy with the girl, but remember we cannot afford this girl roaming freely, she'll get back to us, remember we have killed her family, so enjoy with her, but remember she is a prisoner, the moment u'll set her free, I'll kill her",", saying it in equal firmness, Caption crossed his arms around his chest and mayank still stared him with eyes filled with anguish,
"relax kid, u'll be needing this anger for urself later on, because you are falling in love with the girl you have trapped".
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