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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#91

So finally the real story begins! I'm scared for Nupur... if she ever tries to escape she will die.. and I have a bad feeling she'll feel trapped and try to escape... I just hope Mayank's love will be enough to keep her trapped, without letting her feel like she's trapped.

That Captain is inhuman... he killed her family, how cruel can a person be...
Amazing update, can't wait for Nupur to wake up. Cont. soon...

-SP-

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

OMG! Mehak why you write such scary stuff ya :( Pah. So sad man.

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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#93

loving dis mayank

bt y da hell did dey had to kill her family...how will she react when she wud get to knw dis piece of information...gosh...

loads of love

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: ArTizAngel
Aww him already falling for her 😳
He's soo protective na😍
Cant wait untill she falls for him😳🤔🤣 Hopefully soon !! 😆
Cause i've been thinking how will she ever fall for a man who has kidnapped her😲
Whoaa! They killed her family?? Wat the fuk is his problem😡
Thank god atleast Mayank has his marbles. He'll keep Nupz Safe😳
Amazing Part !!
Update next part soon😉

that captain is so harsh...

lovely.. update

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

ohh god they kill nupur family...

how could they...

how nupur would bear this whn she'll come to know this...

but mayak is there for her help.. thts sumwhere relaxing...

cant wait to see wht will happen nxt...

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

omG they killed her Family, ohh poor u, very nice update

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

I'm not in a state to say anything about this update.. While reading it, I was feeling so bad for Nupur that no one can imagine.. 😭😭

How could that ba**** Captain kill her family?? I was seriously like WTH! 😡😡 [sorry for using slang but I just couldn't control my frustration & anger]

I'm praying that whenever Captain said is just to keep Mayank shut his mouth though it's not possible I know.. 😔

Coming to Mayank, well, I'm loving his nature of 'no useless pain' and esp his extra-protectiveness for Nupur.. He has already started feeling something for her.. ❤️😳

It'll be tough for Nupur to bear the shock that her family is no more but hope Mayank would be able to console her.. 😳

Most importantly, I'm fearing that she might misunderstand Mayank and think that he's also involved in it.. Nope I really want my fears to be wrong.. *Fingers crossed*

I could feel the goosebumps of fear reading the update which shows that I always get lost in your story.. 😊

A superbly presented and a perfect update.. The wordings, the lines, the way you described the feelings, the helplessness - everything was well described.. ⭐️👏

Waiting for next.. Try to update soon.. Best of luck for your college.. 👍🏼

-Bidushy❤️

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago