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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Interesting update... the story tooka whole new turn I hadn't expected this, but I'm loving it. But who are these guys... they don't look like normal thieves, maybe highly intelligent criminals... And that Captain is disgusting, but as long as Mayank is there Nupur's safe... Wonderful update Continue soon ...

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Anila

@-Anila-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

awesome update API...👏👍🏼👏

really i was scared...

uff nehi not again i hope Mayank is nt a terrorist here...😕😕

goddd why dey r taking Nupur...😲

i hate dis caption...he is an evil parson...😡😡

bt as long as Mayank is der wid Nupur no one can harm her...😊😉😊

thank u for updating...😃

love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

eagerly waiting for ur next update...

Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago

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.SA.

@.SA.

Trailblazer

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

OMG Kinzu 🤗
tu kaise itne naye naye plots soch leti hai???
i need some tips.😆😆
jokes apart i love your new FF.
magical as usual.

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

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story turnsout really surprising...😊

m sure he'll take care of nupur...😊

again u r cum up wid different story...

loved it...😊

Edited by drmaha - 13 years ago

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Its scary and yet intriguing...Mayank is some sort of criminal, but one with a heart...makes me think he has a reason to be there...and for magic to weave, Nupur will be taken along with them... but...i m sure he wnt let things go wrong with her...

I pray i m right...and i trust u, so i wil wait for the story to unfold at its own course... :)

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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

mayank is a gangstar???!!!!

i hope he'll be able to protect nupur...

cont soon

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

What an amazing turn the story has taken!!! I'm seriously loving it to the core!! 😃

All that i felt reading the 1st part was wrong!! thank god!! oops i mean thank u!! 😛

Coming to the update, OMG it's written fabulously!! The way u've described the fears of all of them is just perfect!! Even i felt shivers in fear when they opened the door!! That really means how flawlessly u've written everything!!👏👏

But glad mayank was there and i'm sooo in love with his character!! 😳

Umm what to say more?? As usual, u've left me speechless!! 😳

So they will take along Nupur with them for their safety and here the magical story begins!! Yaayy very excited!! 😃😳

I'm sure nothing will go wrong with Nupur as long Mayank is with her!! ❤️

Well, it seems like mayank works for them for some helplessness but hopefully as nupur will enter in his life, he'll get the courage to fight against those idiots!!👍🏼

About the captain and Joseph.. ugh better not to talk abt them!!😡😡

Waiting for mayur first convo and how Nupur will cope up with everything!! 😳

OMG!! I'm loving this story esp the story line...its soo different!! u r really doing a fab job in it!! u r seriously the perfect writer!!⭐️ i suggest u shud take up writing as ur profession!! 😉

Update soon n thanks for PM!!😊

Love

Bidushy❤️

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 13 years ago