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Jiya

@Jiyyaa

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Aww him already falling for her 😳

He's soo protective na😍

Cant wait untill she falls for him😳🤔🤣 Hopefully soon !! 😆

Cause i've been thinking how will she ever fall for a man who has kidnapped her😲

Whoaa! They killed her family?? Wat the fuk is his problem😡

Thank god atleast Mayank has his marbles. He'll keep Nupz Safe😳

Amazing Part !!

Update next part soon😉

Edited by ArTizAngel - 13 years ago

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

They killed her sister's and bauji...😭 How could they...
I'm glad at least Mayank is there to protect her... I'm feeling bad for Nupur how will she make it here with these monsters except Mayank... Oh I'm so waiting to know more about what will happen in the future...
You write so well... keep it up!
Will be waiting for your next update!
Thank you!

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Mulan.

@mulan.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

wow!!!!!!! just one word for ur writing kinzu!!!!!!! 👏

it was mindblowinG!! i could actually feel shivers run down me reading it!!!

the kidnap, the way Mayank doesnt want to give useless pain and specially not to this girl, and most importantly, teh way u progressed teh story in this part!!! it is simply too amazing!!!!!

however i m still struck on teh last line!!!!!

"relax kid, u'll be needing this anger for urself later on, because you are falling in love with the girl you have trapped"

simply amazing [art kinzu!!!!! loved it to the core!!! and the hunches i msgd u last night , i still have thm!! eagerly waiting for teh next part!! :)

Edited by mulan. - 13 years ago

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

luved it

amazing

thanks for updating it and for the pm too

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Ria Arjun

@ria.arjun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

omg! i have no words for this update...

she has been kidnapped, her family has been killed, she has two men after her with evil intentions !

well written kinzu... brilliant update :)

thank you for the PM... God bless you, take care 🤗

PS: Good luck to you for college 🤗

Edited by rapunzel_angel - 13 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

OMG so they killed her bauji and sisters. how cruel r they...

thnx GOD at least maynk was there to protect Nupur...
i m curious to know how long will he save nyups frm this evil ppl.

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Nikhita

@nuckts

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

it was awesome again dear!!!!!!

beautifully described , but plz don't let caption or that joseph or anyone r*** nupur its just that it will make the story very sad overall rocking as usual!
hm.. protectiveness of mayank☺️ that was too cute

love mayur

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

OMGoodness!!!!

The stupid captain killed her family??? please please let him be lying to Mayank...this cant be true yaar!!!

My heart cries for Nupur :(